My First Team [RU]

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hello everyone, this is my first ever forum and my first pokemon team!

I have been playing the game since R/B but I just got into watching competitive youtubers about a year ago. Now I'm finally trying to get into competitive battling!

I thought it would be cool to start making a RU team because I like the variety of Pokes.

Please let me know what you think and offer any advice you can, just please don't be harsh D:


Gallade
(M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Steadfast
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Close Combat
- Zen Headbutt
- Shadow Sneak
- Thunder Wave

Gastrodon
(F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Storm Drain
EVs: 252 HP / 56 Def / 200 Spd
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Curse
- Hidden Power [Fire]
- Waterfall
- Recover

Steelix
(M) @ Red Card
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spd
Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Dragon Tail
- Stealth Rock
- Earthquake
- Ice Fang

Venomoth
(F) @ Black Sludge
Trait: Tinted Lens
EVs: 128 HP / 128 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- U-turn
- Sleep Powder
- Toxic Spikes
- Roost

Porygon-Z
@ Choice Specs
Trait: Download
EVs: 132 HP / 252 SAtk / 124 Spd
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Trick
- Dark Pulse
- Tri Attack
- Thunderbolt

Entei
@ Leftovers
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 56 HP / 252 SAtk / 200 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Hidden Power [Grass]
- Calm Mind
- Fire Blast
- Substitute
 

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3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.
You need to expand on your descriptions. PM me the changes and I'll unlock this. Thanks
 
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