My Sandstorm Team (Some OU some not)

[Lethgorias]

Hi This is my Very First Post on Smogon...HI :D I was wondering if you could rate my Sandstorm Team. TY and NP :D

Tyranitar (HP 325/ Atk 300/ Def 298/ Sp Atk 237/ Sp Def 298/ Spd 120)
Sand Stream
Leftovers
Fire Punch
Thunder Punch
Ice Punch
Dragon Tail

Shuckle (HP 200/ Atk 27/ Def 550/ Sp Atk 43/ Sp Def 570/ Spd 14)
Sturdy
Leftovers
Power Split
Rest
Gyro Ball
Venoshock

Probopass (HP 250/ Atk 140/ Def 380/ Sp Atk 180/ Sp Def 380/ Spd 85)
Sand Force (Per DW)
Leftovers
Rock Slide
Earthquake
Magnet Bomb
Discharge
(NOTE: Yes I accidentally gave it more Sp Atk with physical moves..it would be more like 180
Atk and 140 Sp Atk but i didn't feel like calculating it to make sure it would be legal
so i just left it as is)

Forretress (HP 285/ Atk 178/ Def 352/ Sp Atk 125/ Sp Def 240/ Spd 110
Sturdy
Leftovers or Quick Claw
Stealth Rock
Spikes
Toxic Spikes
Rapid Spin

Ferrothorn (HP 265/ Atk 230/ Def 351/ Sp Atk 140/ Sp Def 364/ Spd 68)
Iron Barbs
Leftovers or Quick Claw
Gyro Ball
Power Whip
Spikes
Stealth Rock

The last Pokemon im too lazy to look in my box for atm
is your average Razor Mole Sand Rush Aerial Ace King's Rock etc etc

 

[pokefan123456]

Hi This is my Very First Post on Smogon...HI :D I was wondering if you could rate my Sandstorm Team. TY and NP :D

Tyranitar (HP 325/ Atk 300/ Def 298/ Sp Atk 237/ Sp Def 298/ Spd 120)
Sand Stream
Leftovers
Fire Punch
Thunder Punch
Ice Punch
Dragon Tail

Shuckle (HP 200/ Atk 27/ Def 550/ Sp Atk 43/ Sp Def 570/ Spd 14)
Sturdy
Leftovers
Power Split
Rest
Gyro Ball
Venoshock

Probopass (HP 250/ Atk 140/ Def 380/ Sp Atk 180/ Sp Def 380/ Spd 85)
Sand Force (Per DW)
Leftovers
Rock Slide
Earthquake
Magnet Bomb
Discharge
(NOTE: Yes I accidentally gave it more Sp Atk with physical moves..it would be more like 180
Atk and 140 Sp Atk but i didn't feel like calculating it to make sure it would be legal
so i just left it as is)

Forretress (HP 285/ Atk 178/ Def 352/ Sp Atk 125/ Sp Def 240/ Spd 110
Sturdy
Leftovers or Quick Claw
Stealth Rock
Spikes
Toxic Spikes
Rapid Spin

Ferrothorn (HP 265/ Atk 230/ Def 351/ Sp Atk 140/ Sp Def 364/ Spd 68)
Iron Barbs
Leftovers or Quick Claw
Gyro Ball
Power Whip
Spikes
Stealth Rock

The last Pokemon im too lazy to look in my box for atm
is your average Razor Mole Sand Rush Aerial Ace King's Rock etc etc

Firstly, its' nice that you've taken the pains of posting all the stats of your pokemon. But for future posts, use only EVs and natures(raters can do the calculations themselves). Next, the descriptions have to be elaborate and tell the raters how each pokemon works and what purpose it serves. Try adding those things to your post.

 

[New World Order]

in b4 lock. Your team is pretty lacking in description and its weak to... just about everything.

 

[Lethgorias]

TY and /Cry

Thanks Pokefan ill do that next time, wasn't sure if i put too much info if it would be cut off or not. Reply Much Appreciated

@ New World Order..You could be a Little more Polite in the way you speak...especially since even though this is just a team I'm TESTing it has won 6-2 against competitive players...

 

[BLINGAS]

You might want to expand your descriptions unless you want this thread to get locked. Look at other RMT's and see how to do it. Your team is mostly random thought put together with no idea in what you're doing.

 

[New World Order]

Thanks Pokefan ill do that next time, wasn't sure if i put too much info if it would be cut off or not. Reply Much Appreciated

@ New World Order..You could be a Little more Polite in the way you speak...especially since even though this is just a team I'm TESTing it has won 6-2 against competitive players...

Sorry lol, didn`t mean to come off a dick. But that was a comment on how Ferrothorn, Forretress, Probopass, and Shuckle pretty much fills the same roles. Competitive teams should have some variety filling many different niches (unless your a baton pass team) so it can deal with a plethora of threats.