Rate My OU 4th gen Team *PLEASE*

[SSRX]

Swampert (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 248 HP / 216 Def / 44 SDef
Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Earthquake
- Ice Beam
- Roar
- Stealth Rock
This is my lead that scouts the team so that know what to look out for.

Magnezone @ Leftovers
Trait: Magnet Pull
EVs: 40 ATK / 252 SAtk / 216 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Substitute
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Fire]
- Explosion

Gengar (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Substitute
- Pain Split
- Focus Blast
- Shadow Ball

Dragonite (M) @ Life Orb

EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Dragon Dance
- Outrage
- Earthquake
- Flamethrower

Vaporeon (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Water Absorb
EVs: 248 HP / 224 Def / 36 SDef
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Wish
- Protect
- Surf
- Hidden Power electric/Toxic
Gallade@ Choice Scarf
Trait: Steadfast
Evs: 252 Atk /4 HP/ 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
-Close Combat
-Ice Punch
-Trick
-Psycho Cut

This team is based around Dragonite somewhat. Magnezone can switch in on outrage and ice moves. Gengar switches in on EQ for magnezone and can stall blissey to death by SubSplit. Gallade is a ravenge killer. Magnezone Kill Skarmory and scizor and can explode on blissey on the switch. Vaporean just passes wishes for free switches or if they are low on HP. Swampert is my lead that scouts the other team by revealing his pokemon by using roar after stealth rock.

 

[Exclamation!]

You shoul had decriptions of what role(s) each pokémon play in your team. Otherwise it's pretty much impossible to rate your team. This thread is probably going to get locked if you don't, so just go ahead and edit it.

 

[SSRX]

You shoul had decriptions of what role(s) each pokémon play in your team. Otherwise it's pretty much impossible to rate your team. This thread is probably going to get locked if you don't, so just go ahead and edit it.

thanx for telling me
This is my first team and post, Is this good enough?

 

[SSRX]

I hope someone rates my team, i really would appreciate any feedback.
Im getting so nervous cuz no one rated.

 

[bubbly]

Double post much? Anyway, I've rated this team in the other thread, go and take a look.

 

[SSRX]

THANK YOU SO MUCh

 

[SSRX]

Double post much? Anyway, I've rated this team in the other thread, go and take a look.

Ok i Looked at you advice and changed my team around ALOT. I'd Love it if you rated my team again.

Dragonite (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Dragon Dance
- Outrage
- Earthquake
- Flamethrower

Magnezone @ Leftovers
Trait: Magnet Pull
EVs: 40 Atk / 252 SAtk / 216 Spd
Naive Nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Substitute
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Fire]
- Explosion

Swampert (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 248 HP / 216 Def / 44 SDef
Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Earthquake
- Ice Beam
- Roar
- Stealth Rock

Gengar (M) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Shadow Ball
- Thunderbolt
- Focus Blast
- Hidden Power [Ice]

This is the new revenge killer I added because I didn't have much success trying to wall blissey with pain split. I might put in Explosion for Hidden Power.

Machamp (M) @ Lum Berry
Trait: No Guard
EVs: 240 HP / 248 Atk / 16 SDef / 4 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- DynamicPunch
- Payback
- Bullet Punch
- Ice Punch

My Favorite Anti Lead. I might Put in stone edge for ice punch because of gyarados and an amazingly 100% NO Gaurd. Kills Most focus sash lead with attack the bullet punch. Loves taking wishes from blissey (In my Experience).


Blissey (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spd
Hardy Nature
- Wish
- Protect
- Seismic Toss
- Thunder Wave

average Blissey. Passes wishes mainly to Machamp and swampert. I decided no toxic because my team doesn't stall, plus T wave cripples switch ins LIKE A BOSS. Can also pass wishes to gengar if predicting a fighting move.

 

[IronBullet]

Please expand your descriptions. PM me the changes and I'll unlock this. Thanks