The Drought is Over.

[Swizzy]

Hello smogon community! This is my first time constructing a rain dance team. Please Rate, Critisize and point out my flaws!!!
ps. sorry for the little information >.<

Based Kyogre (Kyogre) @ Choice Specs
Trait: Drizzle
EVs: 255 HP / 255 SAtk
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
-Water Spout
-Surf
-Thunder
-Ice Beam

Obvious Kyogre set is obvious. I like to use it to get a quick lead on the opposing team.

Lugia @ (No Item)
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 255 Def / 255 SDef
Hardy Nature
-Dragon Tail
-Substitute
-Surf
-Roost

If there is some pkmn boosting i use dragontail to quickly get rid of it

44 Magnum (Magnezone) @ Leftovers
Trait: Magnet Pull
EVs: 252 HP / 208 SAtk / 48 Spd
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
-Thunder
-Reflect
-Light Screen
-Volt Switch

When my Kyogre is in danger i quickly switch to this guy to tank the attack and set up some defenses

Mexican Duck (Ludicolo) (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Swift Swim
EVs: 60 HP / 252 SAtk / 196 Spd
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Ice Beam
- Rain Dance
- Hydro Pump
- Giga Drain

Ludicolo is amazing at sweeping and taking down bulky walls

Swizz Junior (Jirachi) @ Leftovers
Trait: Serene Grace
EVs: 252 HP / 80 Def / 176 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Wish
- U-turn
- Iron Head
- Thunder Wave

Jirachi is a vary good supporter for this kind of team thus why is essential to have.

WARNING! (Manaphy) @ Leftovers
Trait: Hydration
EVs: 255 SAtk / 255 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
-Tail Glow
-Rest
-Surf
-Ice Beam

My main sweeper when i can setup 2 tail glows
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[haunter]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.