The metagame is Weakvile ll OU Warstory.

This was a battle between me and zapper22001 for a tournament on another site. We both agreed that it was a great match and we decided to turn it into a Warstory.

My comments will be in orange, zapper's in blue.

My Team:


zapper's team:



Rules: Evasion Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Sleep Clause, Soul Dew Clause, Species Clause, Timed Battle
zapper win again sent out Celebi (lvl 100 Celebi).
zapper22001 sent out Froslass (lvl 100 Froslass ?).
zapper22001: gl


vs.


Celebi: 100%
Froslass: 100%

I send out my trusty Celebi lead, that can quite easily handle the majority of the top leads. (I AM NOT PROMOTING IT’S AWESOMENESS). Sadly, Froslass is not one of these. I hope for the best, firing off a Thunder Wave in case it doesn’t use Taunt.

Hmm…a Celebi lead. Now, possible moves could be Thunder Wave, Hidden Power [Fire], U-Turn, Grass Knot, and Stealth Rock. Out of those moves, Thunder Wave is the most threatening to my team, so I chose Taunt. Plus, Celebi also can’t get up SR this way which means Froslass might be able to switch back in later and hopefully get up more Spikes which is crucial to SpecsDra as it allows it to wreck the opposing team.

zapper win again: Good luck!
Gray Fox has entered the room.
Froslass used Taunt.
Celebi fell for the taunt!
Celebi used Thunder Wave.
Celebi can't use Thunder Wave after the taunt!



vs.



Celebi: 100% - Taunted
Froslass: 100%

He uses Taunt and Now the best thing I can do is to just U-turn out, which will also break his Sash. I imagine he will use Spikes, but I switch to Heatran as he can take whatever Froslass can deal out.

Oh, that turn worked out well for me. Now start Spiking up to advance my strategy.


Froslass used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Celebi used U-turn.
It's not very effective...
Froslass lost 12% of its health.
zapper win again switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Heatran was hurt by Spikes!
Heatran lost 12% of its health.
Heatran's leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran restored 6% of its health.


vs


Heatran: 94%
Froslass: 88%

He uses Spikes, as was obvious. And Like I said, most Froslass can do pitiful amounts of damage to Heatran, so I sub up with the hope to take out a counter.

Celebi U-Turns to Heatran and tries to force me out, but Froslass isn’t going anywhere as Destiny Bond guarantees that Tran will go down with me. Also Lefties recovery tells me that it’s probably a SubTran which means, once I trap him with D-Bond he’ll lose 25% of his health.


Froslass used Destiny Bond.
Froslass is trying to take its foe with it!
Heatran used Substitute.
Heatran lost 25% of its health.
Heatran made a substitute!
Heatran's leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran restored 6% of its health.


vs


Heatran: 75%
Froslass: 88%

Crap. That puts a real damper on my plans. I was planning to just fire off a Fire Blast. But now I will have to switch out. My best bet here is to go to Togekiss and hope he doesn’t use Destiny Bond again.

Works out just as planned. Now I don’t know if he’ll switch or not. I think the best thing to do is D-Bond again so if he switches, he won’t go for the KO which means more Spikes for me when I get the chance to set up.

zapper win again switched in Togekiss (lvl 100 Togekiss ?).
Froslass used Destiny Bond.
Froslass is trying to take its foe with it!


vs


Togekiss: 100%
Froslass: 88%

He uses Destiny Bond again. So I just decide to simply go to Celebi.

As stated last turn, I doubt he’ll go for the KO with D-Bond up so he might Thunder Wave or something if he’s a Flinchhax variant. I’ll Taunt because my team absolutely hates T-Wave.



zapper win again switched in Celebi (lvl 100 Celebi).
Celebi was hurt by Spikes!
Celebi lost 12% of its health.
Froslass used Taunt.
Celebi fell for the taunt!
Celebi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Celebi restored 6% of its health.


vs.


Celebi: 94% - Taunted
Froslass: 88%

Celebi comes in, and no Destiny Bond. Here I am thinking it will either use Ice Beam or Spikes, so I just Leaf Storm to kill knowing that I would survive the Ice Beam.

Instead, Froslass Taunts Celebi who receives some Spikes damage which will hopefully allow SpecsDra to later on Draco Meteor for the kill and wreck some havoc. However Taunting Celebi also works out for me as it means that the ever-annoying T-Wave is blocked now for some more Spikes.

Froslass used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Celebi used Leaf Storm.
Froslass lost 93% of its health.
zapper22001's Froslass fainted.
Celebi's special attack was harshly lowered.
Celebi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Celebi restored 6% of its health.


vs. X

Celebi: 100% - Taunted
Froslass: DEAD

(6 - 5)

He sets up another layer of Spikes before he dies, but I kill it.



Eh… I didn’t see the Leaf Storm coming, but now I have two layers of Spikes down with is pretty much all I need for SpecsDra to get in and wreck some walls. However that turn still gave me some useful information. Unless Gingbino doesn’t run Stealth Rock on Celebi, then Celebi’s moveset is U-Turn/ Thunder Wave/ Stealth Rock/ Leaf Storm which means no Recover which is very good news for my team. Now, I know that Gingbino has already revealed a LeadCelebi, a SubTran, and some variant of Togekiss. Now I got to force Celebi out(pretty easy since he’s at -2 S.Atk) and hopefully lure some walls out so I can see what SpecsDra is up against. So now, I go to MysticGar to start things up.

zapper22001 switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).


vs


Celebi: 100% -Taunted
Gengar: 100%

In comes a Gengar. Most likely LO. Most likely will use Shadow Ball. This means that Togekiss can come in and threaten with Scarf Air Slash.

zapper win again switched in Togekiss (lvl 100 Togekiss ?).
Gengar used Shadow Ball.
It doesn't affect Togekiss...


vs


Togekiss: 100%
Gengar: 100%

Now to just fire off an Air Slash.

I Shadow Ball in hope of getting rid of Celebi as Thunder Wave basically ruins my whole team. Shadow Ball also has the benefit of being a predictable move so if Ging decides to go to a Steel, Spikes damage will rack up and a SpecsDra Surf will have a better chance of KO’ing. However, Gingbino predicts my move and instead goes to Togekiss who is immune to Shadow Ball. I decide to go to LOMie and hopefully force Kiss out.

zapper22001 switched in Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie).
Togekiss used Air Slash.
Starmie lost 60% of its health.


vs


Togekiss: 100%
Starmie: 40%

In comes a Starmie predicting god knows what. Air Slash Deals a healthy 60%. He has no reason to expect that this is Scarfed, so I am safe to go on with the Air Slash to finish it off.


Damn, that did more than I expected. In retrospect, I should have gone to Heatran this turn on this turn, but I guess I was afraid of Aura Sphere pummeling Tran as it is my only bulky pokemon. Well, I guess I’ll just Thunderbolt this turn and hope for the KO.


Togekiss used Air Slash.
Togekiss's attack missed!
Starmie used Thunderbolt.
It's super effective!
Togekiss lost 76% of its health.
Starmie lost 10% of its health.


vs


Togekiss: 24%
Starmie: 30%

****. Two bad things happened there. Obviously, my Air Slash missed which means Starmie is still alive and I took a large amount of damage from Thunderbolt. Secondly, he just found out that I am Scarfed. I just decide to Air Slash again. If he stays in (and I hit) it dies. If he switches, then I get some damage on the switchin.


Oh snap. Togekiss is Scarfed. Well, the infamous hax strikes again and spares Starmie from an early death and after the Thunderbolt strike, Togekiss is now in range for a Weavile revenge kill. However, I don’t want to sacrifice Starmie just yet, so I go to Heatran to take the Air Slash.

zapper22001 switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Togekiss used Air Slash.
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 21% of its health.


vs


Togekiss: 24%
Heatran: 79%

In comes a Heatran. Takes quite a decent amount of damage. I have nothing I really wanna switch in here. To me, he will either Fire Blast and kill Togekiss, this will then mean I can switch in with my own Heatran and sub up. Or he will Earth Power predicting me to go to Heatran to get a Flash Fire Boost. Staying in and use Air Slash seems to be the best option to me.

Oh, that hit pretty hard. Well, I can take another hit and get Stealth Rock up before I sacrifice Starmie and get Weavile in on the revenge kill. Calum confirms my suspicions that it is Scarfed.

Heatran used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!
Togekiss used Air Slash.
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 24% of its health.


vs


Togekiss: 24%
Heatran: 55%

He is also Scarfed it seems. Which means Togekiss is now dead. So I am best to simply keep it in and spam Air Slash.


SR is up and now I’m going to sacrifice Starmie.

zapper22001 switched in Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie).
Togekiss used Air Slash.
Starmie lost 56% of its health.
zapper22001's Starmie fainted.


vs X

Togekiss: 24%
Starmie: DEAD

(6 - 4)

Starmie comes in and dies. Go Togekiss.

It’s Weavile revenge time.


zapper22001 switched in Weavile (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
Weavile is exerting its pressure!


vs


Togekiss: 24%
Weavile: 100%

It’s probably just gonna Ice Shard to kill. Togekiss will die from SR if it switches in again. So I just decide to stay in.

Weavile used Ice Shard.
It's super effective!
Togekiss lost 59% of its health.
zapper win again's Togekiss fainted.
Weavile lost 10% of its health.


X vs


Togekiss: DEAD
Weavile: 90%

(5 - 4)



Togekiss is down for the count, flinch hax no longer able to bother me. Now let’s see what Gingbino switches in to threaten me…

zapper win again switched in Machamp (lvl 100 Machamp ?).
Machamp was hurt by Spikes!
Machamp lost 19% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Machamp.
Machamp lost 6% of its health.


vs


Machamp: 75%
Weavile: 90%

I bring in Machamp, knowing that I can survive a hit. I also threaten with Dynamic Punch. Knowing this, I use Payback hoping to hit Gengar trying to switch in on Dynamic Punch.

Gingbino is surprised by the use of Weavile and switches in Machamp to try and set up. Now, my gut feeling tells me that this is a SubChamp which can pretty much sweep my team if I don’t deal with it properly. I would go to Gengar, but Ging can predict the switch in fairly easily. However Gengar is the only thing that can take DynamicPunch which will definitely screw my team up. Ultimately, I decide that the decision comes down to whether I want Machamp to have a Sub up and sweep my team or sacrifice Gengar and deal with Machamp after the free switch in.

zapper22001 switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Machamp used Payback.
It's super effective!
Gengar lost 147% of its health.
zapper22001's Gengar fainted.
Machamp's leftovers restored its health a little!
Machamp restored 6% of its health.


vs X

Machamp: 81%
Gengar: DEAD

(5 - 3)

Nailed it.

As I predicted, Gingbino predicts me, but this free switch in gives me the chance to finally switch in SpecsDra and start breaking down Gingbino’s walls. So I’m just going to Draco Meteor for the kill as it is still mid game so don’t want to spam Surf just yet.

zapper22001 switched in Kingdra (lvl 100 Kingdra ?).


vs


Machamp: 81%
Kingdra: 100%

Kingdra comes in. here I’m thinking SubDDKingdra. So I go with Dynamic Punch. If it subs, it loses 25% health. If it DDs, it loses a good 64% - 76% and is confused.

Kingdra used Draco Meteor.
Machamp lost 86% of its health.
zapper win again's Machamp fainted.
Kingdra's special attack was harshly lowered.


X vs


Machamp: DEAD
Kingdra: 100%

(4 - 3)

And I was wrong. I decide to bring in Celebi, knowing that I will out speed, and threaten with Thunder Wave/STAB Leaf Storm. May also be able to get SR up.

Machamp succumbs to mighty meteorite from outer space summoned by this sea dragon.

zapper win again switched in Celebi (lvl 100 Celebi).
Celebi was hurt by Spikes!
Celebi lost 19% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Celebi.
Celebi lost 12% of its health.
zapper22001 switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Celebi used Thunder Wave.
Heatran is paralyzed! It may be unable to move!
Celebi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Celebi restored 6% of its health.



vs


Celebi: 75%
Heatran: 55%

Thunder Wave was the move of choice here. And it ends up hitting a good target. I decide to Stealth Rock, hoping for either a switch or paralysis hax.

Ugh, Gingbino switches in Celebi to wall me and probably spread some T-Wave which my team absolutely hates. Now I got to think of someone to sacrifice. Heatran has pretty much fulfilled its purpose by setting up SR so I can probably sacrifice that.

Celebi used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!
Heatran is paralyzed! It can't move!
Celebi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Celebi restored 6% of its health.


vs



Celebi: 81%
Heatran: 55% - Paralyzed


I get the second and SR is up. Now I have two choices. Leaf Storm, predicting a switch to something. Or U-turn out to scout. I go with the Leaf Storm.

Well, I’m afraid of Fire Blast getting PP stalled so I’m just gonna Earth Power until Celebi dies.


Celebi used Leaf Storm.
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 17% of its health.
Celebi's special attack was harshly lowered.
Heatran used Earth Power.
It's not very effective...
Celebi lost 14% of its health.
Celebi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Celebi restored 6% of its health.


vs


Celebi: 73%
Heatran: 38% - Paralyzed

I get neither, but he predicted the switch to Heatran, obviously. Leaf Storm does paltry damage as expected. This time I decide to just U-turn out.


With SR up, now I must be careful with Weavile as SR damage and LO recoil will pretty much ruin me. However, at the moment, my strategy won’t change; I’ll just keep on spamming.

Celebi used U-turn.
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 4% of its health.
zapper win again switched in Latias (lvl 100 Latias ?).
Pointed stones dug into Latias.
Latias lost 12% of its health.
Heatran is paralyzed! It can't move!


vs


Latias: 88%
Heatran: 34% - Paralyzed

I bring in Latias, as she can take Earth Power. I predict a switch here to Kingdra, so I go for the Dragon Pulse.

Gingbino realizes that Celebi will eventually die so he U-Turns to Latias to set up on me. Well not much I can do and there’s not really much that I care about if Latias sets up on me as Ice Shard will revenge her. So, once again there is no change in strategy. Plus, I believe that Gingbino is aware of the fact that I have Weavile so he won’t try to set up on me and give me a free turn to switch in albeit this is rather risky.

Latias used Dragon Pulse.
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 33% of its health.
Latias lost 10% of its health.
Latias makes ground moves miss with Levitate!
Heatran used Earth Power.
Heatran's attack missed!



vs


Latias: 78%
Heatran: 1% - Paralyzed

Neither of us really win here. But Heatran is now within KO range from another Dragon Pulse. So I just use that.

Yep, he’s attacking, so I can just keep on spamming. Though it’s interesting how Latias is a Life Orb variant.

Latias used Dragon Pulse.
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 31% of its health.
zapper22001's Heatran fainted.
Latias lost 10% of its health.


vs X

Latias: 68%
Heatran: DEAD

(4 - 2)

~lalalala

Heatran dies and now Weavile can come in and revenge kill with Ice Shard.


zapper22001 switched in Weavile (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
Weavile is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Weavile.
Weavile lost 25% of its health.


vs


Latias: 68%
Weavile: 70%

In comes that damn Weavile again. And once again, I do not really want to switch in something like Scizor in case he uses Low Kick or something.

Weavile used Ice Shard.
It's super effective!
Latias lost 68% of its health.
zapper win again's Latias fainted.
Weavile lost 10% of its health.


X vs


Latias: DEAD
Weavile: 60%

(3 - 2)

Damn Weavile. I decide to just bring in Scizor to threaten with Bullet Punch.

Just as planned.

zapper win again switched in Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ?).
Scizor was hurt by Spikes!
Scizor lost 18% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Scizor.
Scizor lost 12% of its health.


vs


Scizor: 70%
Weavile: 60%

Damn, Gingbino switches in Scizor. Though it can be played with relatively easily if I can figure out whether it is a CB or a SD set. I place my bets on SD because Gingbino has chosen to switch him in now instead of when I revenged Togekiss. It may not be the soundest reason, but I’m going to go with it. Working off of my assumption, I switch to Kingdra who can take a +2 Bullet Punch and KO back with a Spec’d Surf.

zapper22001 switched in Kingdra (lvl 100 Kingdra ?).
Pointed stones dug into Kingdra.
Kingdra lost 12% of its health.
Scizor used Swords Dance.
Scizor's attack was sharply raised
.

vs


Scizor: 60%
Kingdra: 88%

Switches out to Kingdra, most likely fearing Bullet Punch. I SD’ed up in a hope to do a bit of a wall break now. But since Kindgra is faster, the best thing I can do is ram out a Bullet Punch.

Now, I go for the kill with Surf.


Scizor used Bullet Punch.
It's not very effective...
Kingdra lost 53% of its health.
Scizor lost 10% of its health.
Kingdra used Surf.
Scizor lost 87% of its health.
zapper win again's Scizor fainted.


X vs


Scizor: DEAD
Kingdra: 88%

(2 - 2)

Ded. I decide to bring in Celebi and finish it off with Leaf Storm.

zapper win again switched in Celebi (lvl 100 Celebi).
Celebi was hurt by Spikes!
Celebi lost 19% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Celebi.
Celebi lost 12% of its health.


vs


Celebi: 42%
Kingdra: 88%

Ugh, I don’t want anybody else to get T-Waved right now so I’m just going to sacrifice Kingdra and spam Surf again.

Kingdra used Surf.
It's not very effective...
Celebi lost 25% of its health.
Celebi used Leaf Storm.
Kingdra lost 63% of its health.
zapper22001's Kingdra fainted.
Celebi's special attack was harshly lowered.
Celebi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Celebi restored 6% of its health.

vs X

Celebi: 23%
Kingdra: DEAD

(2 - 1)

I take little to no damage from Surf and finish it off with Leaf Storm. But by now it’s already gg.

zapper22001 switched in Weavile (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
Weavile is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Weavile.
Weavile lost 25% of its health.


vs


Celebi: 23%
Weavile: 35%

In comes Weavile, and its good game. He outspeeds and KO’s both of my remaining pokemon.

The mighty sea dragon goes down, but Weavile is eager to revenge kill.

Weavile used Night Slash.
It's super effective!
Celebi lost 74% of its health.
zapper win again's Celebi fainted.
Weavile lost 10% of its health.


X vs


Celebi: DEAD
Weavile: 25%

(1 - 1)

*sigh*


Alright, Celebi dies to a hard slap across the face from Weavile. Next pokemon.


zapper win again switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Heatran was hurt by Spikes!
Heatran lost 18% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Heatran.
Heatran lost 12% of its health.
Weavile used Low Kick.
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 78% of its health.
zapper win again's Heatran fainted.
zapper22001 wins!


X vs


Heatran: DEAD
Weavile: 15%

(0 - 1)

And that’s a good game right there.

Heatran trips over Weavile’s foot and hits the ground with a hard thud, exhaling its last breath. GG, Gingbino!


My Props and Slops

Props:
Togekiss for being so badass.
zapper for the great match.

Slops:
Heatran and Scizor for doing nothing.
Me for failing to see two opportunities to win. I I had of used Bug Bite instead of Swords Dance when Kingdra switched in, I would have won 3 - 0. If I had of switched out to Heatran when Kingdra Surf'ed my, I would have won 1 - 0.
 

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Good warstory, the orange comments were really bad, but the blue ones were pretty good. I enjoyed the use of Froslass lead, Specs Kingdra, and Weavile, and this warstory really shows how Specs Kingdra can sometimes outshine a Specs Latias.
I wonder why you used Earth Power on Celebi thought, I mean... getting pp stalled? You are paralized, with 8 FB PP and your opponent has only 3 pokes left 1 of which is OHKOd by FB, so Earth Power is kinda dumb in that situation.Good job nonetheless.
 
While there was some good prediction, there was also some terrible prediction on some obvious moves. Not too bad though.
 
That's what i always say: once Scizor is dead, Weavile has an easy time to sweep. Weavile gets the right moves against the OU metagame: the right priority, the right speed, the right STABs... it's not as powerful as Lucario or Infernape, but in today's metagame Weavile gets everything against the most used pokes. It should be used more(with some anti-Scizor support, logically).


About the warstory: some mispredicts, but good job on the warstory.
Oh yes, nice use of Specs Kingdra.
 
This warstory was actually pretty damn good prediction wise, and Zapper's comments were excellent. Though your comments were really this warstory's letdown - too many choppy sentences, little detail and weird comments just to fill in the space (like lalalala... I mean.. what the fuck?). Honestly though, it looked like you were just trying to get done with it quickly while your opponent did a job well done. Really, if you can predict well you can probably explain your moves more as well.

As for Zappy, I hope you write more warstories in the future!
 
Weavile and Specs Kingdra seem interesting to try out,I think I'm going to try them out some day. Other then that Zappys comments were great and the battle its self was good with alot of with alot of good predictions.
 
Nice warstory, but just wanted to point out the Kingdra is listed as having 88% health after taking a 53% Bullet Punch...
 
Reminds me of those early D/P days where every team was "Weavile weak", lol.

Good warstory, but I do think you played Scizor pretty badly. He could've won the game for you quite easily with some better switching.
 

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What's the set you're running on that Celebi? It looks an awful lot like the one I posted in C&C about a week ago. Based on the damage it did to Froslass, I'm guessing you've invested at least somewhat heavily in SpA. I just wanted to say kudos on using the lead; this is a good example of what kind of a threat it can pose throughout the match.

Other than that, the warstory was pretty good, and I liked the use of Specsdra. There's a lot of surprise value these days with that set.
 
What's the set you're running on that Celebi? It looks an awful lot like the one I posted in C&C about a week ago. Based on the damage it did to Froslass, I'm guessing you've invested at least somewhat heavily in SpA. I just wanted to say kudos on using the lead; this is a good example of what kind of a threat it can pose throughout the match.

Other than that, the warstory was pretty good, and I liked the use of Specsdra. There's a lot of surprise value these days with that set.
I run a Modest 252 HP/176 Spd/80 SAtk version. It works.
 

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Very nice warstory. Both players made some awesome plays and predicted well. I'm going to vote this warstory 10/10 just because of how badass some of the pokes are. Specs Kingdra and LO Weavile ftw. And I also agree with ReyScarface. Heatran definitely should have fire blasted Celebi instead of using Earth Power.
 

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I think you didn't manage Weavile very well. If you had brought in Scizor on the Ice Shard when it was revenging latias, you could have U-turned out as he brought in Kingdra and brought yourself momentum.

Nevertheless, it was a good warstory, with some good plays as well.
 
the battle was pretty good as everyone has been saying, some nice prediction going on. i thought the comments were lacking a bit though, yes they did explain to me the thought processes, but the depth and long-term thinking wasnt there as much.

7/10
 
I think you didn't manage Weavile very well. If you had brought in Scizor on the Ice Shard when it was revenging latias, you could have U-turned out as he brought in Kingdra and brought yourself momentum.

Nevertheless, it was a good warstory, with some good plays as well.


It was a SD Weavile set, he has Bug Bite over U-Turn.


This was a great Warstory, and yeah, you could of definaly won in end there if you hadn't sacrificed your Scizor off to Kingdra for basicaly no reason. Heatran was useless at that point in the game, why you didn't switch him in on Surf to give Celebi the free switch in to kill Kingdra is beyond me.
 
Only a so-so warstory. Many misplays on both sides, particularly not using Bug Bite on the Weavile/Kingdra. You're not going to be able to take a hit from Kingdra either way, so getting Low Kicked by Weavile is of no consequence.
7/10.
 
Orange comments were medicore,But otherwise its a nice warstory.I enjoyed the use of Specsdra and Weavile alot.And even though that there was some hax here and there,this was a decent warstory overall...

I also loved the blue comments much more

7.9/10
 
Love the warstory. Though abit more explanation of the prediction would be useful, i do like how you didnt try to overdo the warstory like others do. It seemed like a fun and friendly match which made it fun to read.
Also a sign that good warstories dont have to be long.
 
Good warstory. Zapper's comments were really good. There were some bad plays on both sides, but also some good ones. Also, I really like it because it has comments from both sides. 8/10
 
It certainly wasn't a bad warstory, but there were little mistakes that kind of made it =s for me. For instance:

Froslass used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Celebi used U-turn.
It's not very effective...
Froslass lost 12% of its health.
zapper win again switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Heatran was hurt by Spikes!
Heatran lost 12% of its health.
Heatran's leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran restored 6% of its health.

Why U-turn out when Froslass is faster and will likely Spike? Just plain switching to Heatran instead allows it to not take Spikes damage, meaning you don't reveal what Tran you're running (which your opponent actually picked up on). It's not really game changing or anything, but it's still the better move.

However, the warstory was very well presented, so overall I did like it. And I, unlike BT, am a very big fan of lalalalala's. :)
 
one big mistake at the end, it was obvious he would switch to kingdra, so you should have switched to heatran (in case of a predicted low kick,) sac him to surf, bring celebi in, he switches weavile in to die to leaf storm, sac scizor to surf, bam, celebi gets easy win
 

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