Please let's not throw around random numbers for ban or do not ban (as the council will not simply count the posts in the thread that say ban or do not ban in the thrrad believe it or not) and in the case it gets banned I can't see how we cant simply delete a line.
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Vanilluxe (QC 0/3)
- Thread starter gooey kirby
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Fixed thanks galbia
Am i ready for quality control galbia
If you are ready for QC then change your tags from WIP to Quality Control, you can do this in the top right hand corner by clicking on Thread Tools.
Alright im on quality control
You should change the title to Vanilluxe (QC 0/3)
Overview
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- Your overselling it. Vanilluxe is not one of the best sweepers in PU, it doesn't have any way to boost its power to break through its counters.
- You spelt Licklilicky wrong
- Besides the fact that the second and last point should go together, I had trouble understanding the last point
- Is this all you can tell us about Vanilluxe's role in PU?
Moves
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- And where's HP Ground?
Usage Tips
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- You don't even explain how taking a hit will help.
- You have yet to delve deeper. Give newer players some idea about how to use Vanilluxe, especially because its typing requires very complex plays to make it work.
Team Options
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- Grumpig? Isn't there some more relevant Pokemon to handle Fighting-types?
Other Options
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- What I said before
I'm keeping an eye on this analysis, because I see a lot of spelling mistakes and questionable knowledge of the PU metagame. If you want to continue this, please make sure to improve the parts I've noted, not just add the stuff I mentioned.
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- Your overselling it. Vanilluxe is not one of the best sweepers in PU, it doesn't have any way to boost its power to break through its counters.
- You spelt Licklilicky wrong
- Besides the fact that the second and last point should go together, I had trouble understanding the last point
- Is this all you can tell us about Vanilluxe's role in PU?
Moves
=======
- And where's HP Ground?
Usage Tips
===========
- You don't even explain how taking a hit will help.
- You have yet to delve deeper. Give newer players some idea about how to use Vanilluxe, especially because its typing requires very complex plays to make it work.
Team Options
===========
- Grumpig? Isn't there some more relevant Pokemon to handle Fighting-types?
Other Options
############
- What I said before
I'm keeping an eye on this analysis, because I see a lot of spelling mistakes and questionable knowledge of the PU metagame. If you want to continue this, please make sure to improve the parts I've noted, not just add the stuff I mentioned.
Sorry about the spelling errors and stuff. I got it fixed
gooey kirby
This hasnt been touched for ages, ik not your fault, so before i check this in detail do you still want to do this (asking because some people will drop their analysis in situations like this?
Im just going to mention one thing here; you want max speed to outspeed adamant scarf tauros (which currently you tie with), and scarf scyther. Your current one is somewhat pointless as no base 100 runs scarf
This hasnt been touched for ages, ik not your fault, so before i check this in detail do you still want to do this (asking because some people will drop their analysis in situations like this?
Im just going to mention one thing here; you want max speed to outspeed adamant scarf tauros (which currently you tie with), and scarf scyther. Your current one is somewhat pointless as no base 100 runs scarf
gooey kirby please respond to Anty's post. Are you still working on this? Please respond in 48 hours, or I will have to reassign (at a later point).
WhiteDMist, goeey kirby hasnt been on since the 23rd of january >.>
locked, will reassign.
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