[Warstory] strawberry chocolate vs. nomargu46

[strawberry chocolate]

nomargu46
Salamence [starter]
Houndoom
Machamp
Sceptile
Swampert
Skarmory

vs

strawberry chocolate
Breloom [starter]
Espeon
Magnezone
Garchomp
Weavile
Exeggutor!


Turn 1
I sent out Breloom! Nomargu46 sent out Salamence!
Salamence's intimidate cuts brelooms attack!

I figured it was a specmence because everyone on this forum is on jumpman's nuts and they're all over the place. In that case he'd use a dragon move. Better just take a hit and spore.

Salamence used Draco Meteor! (99% damage) Breloom hung on using focus sash! Salamence's Special attack sharply fell!
Breloom used spore! Salamence fell asleep

Guess I was right, draco meteor. Probably a specsmence.

Turn 2
I withdrew Breloom! Sent out Weavile!
Salamence is fast asleep!

Turn 3
Weavile used swords dance! Weaviles attack sharply rose!
Salamence is fast asleep!

Turn 4
Weavile used Swords Dance! Weavile's attack sharply Rose!
Salamence woke up! Salamence used Dragon Claw! A critical hit! (99% damage) Weavile hung on using focus sash!

What? Dragon Claw? Guess it's not a specser. I love Focus Sash...

Turn 5
Weavile used Ice PuncH! Salamences Yache Berry weakened Ice Punch's power! A Critical Hit! It's super effective! (100% damage)
nomargu46's salamence fainted!

6-5
nomargu46 sent out Skarmory (ugh)!

Turn 6
Weavile used Ice punch! (75% damage)
Skarmory used Drill Peck! (1% damage) Weavile fainted!
Skarmory recovered a little HP using leftovers!

No shed shell? Bad move my friend.

5-5
I sent out Magnezone. Raped.

Turn 7
Magnezone used Thunderbolt! Skarmory fainted!

5-4
nomargu46 sent out Houndoom!

Turn 8
I withdrew Magnezone! Sent out Garchomp!
Houndoom used Substitute! Houndoom made a substitute!

Turn 9
Garchomp used Earthquake! The substitute took damage for Houndoom! Houndoom's Substitute faded!
Houndoom used Dark Pulse! (45% damage)

Turn 10
nomargu46 withdrew Houndoom! Sent out Sceptile!
Garchomp used Earthquake! (45% damage)

Turn 11
Sceptile used Dragon Pulse! (55% Damage) It's super effective! Garchomp fainted!

4-4
Damn. I thought the Chomp had a chance to sweep.
I sent out Magnezone!

Turn 12
nomargu46 withdrew Sceptile! Sent out Houndoom!
Magnezone used Hidden Power [ice]! (20% damage) It's not very effective...

Damn Houndoom. Should have expected that one.

Turn 13
Houndoom used Flamethrower! (100% damage) Magnezone fainted!

3-4
Sent out Breloom!

Turn 14
Breloom used Mach Punch! (55% damage) It's super effective! Houndoom fainted!

3-3
Wow. Did not expect it to do that much. Good thing I had Breloom.
nomargu46 sent out Sceptile!

Turn 15
Breloom used Mach Punch! (35% damage)
Sceptile used Dragon Pulse! (1% damage) Breloom fainted!

2-3
Damn, not letting me see any of Sceptile's other moves. Maybe he's a specstile!
Sent out Espeon

Turn 16
Sceptile used Dragon Pulse! A Critical Hit! (100% damage) Espeon fainted!

Fuck.
1-3
Sent out Exeggutor! ACE IN THE HOLE

Turn 17
Sceptile used Dragon Pulse! (46% damage)
Exeggutor used Sunny Day! The sunlight grew harsh.

My Exeggutor is barely trained in speed. So it hits only around 300 in the sun.

Turn 18
Sceptile used Dragon Pulse! (45% damage)
Exeggutor used Psychic! (20% damage) Sceptile fainted!
The sunlight is harsh.

1-2
nomargu46 sent out Swampert!
I guess he's assuming I don't have a powerful Grass type move?

Turn 19
Exeggutor used Solarbeam! Swampert's Rindo Berry weakened Solarbeam's power! (100% damage) Swampert fainted.
The sunlight is harsh.

Nice try. I ain't scared of no Rindo.
1-1
nomargu46 sent out Machamp!

Turn 20
Machamp used Fire Punch! It's Super Effective! (9% damage) Exeggutor fainted!

0-1
nomargu46 wins!

What the hell. He Choice Scarfed his Machamp. Who the hell choice scarfs a Machamp? I was so sure that I had the fight too. That sucks, but this war story is still worth posting because it was a great battle and an epic ending, and I'm sure both of us could put together better teams.

gg nomargu46, would love to battle again sometime.

 

[TheMantyke]

there are too many warstorys knowa days. Try making the text exciting to read, or make a longer battle.

 

[MegaBuddha]

Agreed.

 

[chocobattler]

Sorry, it was kinda hard to read.....you might want to change that.

 

[Andren]

Try bolding the in-game text.

I finished reading it, and I have a few things to say:

YES!!! Not a Shoddy Battle!!!
Clear, concise, to the point.

And, at nomargu, wow, SE reducing Berries....unexpected.

 

[StrangerDanger]

This isn't that great a battle, or that epic of an ending.

If you have a battle, that takes FOREVER, and at the end, you win 1-0, through some ridiculous tactic, like figuring out at the last second a bronzong is Heatproof and OHKO'ing it, or surviving some SE attack at 1% then striking back for the KO, or anything out of the ordinary, or if you just plain say to yourself "Damn, that was actually FUN, rather than a courtly exercise of switching and attacking", THEN make a warstory.


That's warstory worthy.

 

[cutlex]

Better story than given credit for. Not amazing, but not terrible. Props on the 'less is more' writing, I hate seeing a paragraph after every turn.

The battle was pretty close, while not out of the ordinary, but I thought the point of warstories was to chronicle the new d-p metagame anyway.

 

[Matt]

Please don't bother making a warstory unless your battle is either important (such as for a tournament), or actually good.