Meh, there's a lot of haters on here. Sure, it wasn't the best battle, and a couple misplays by the opponent had a huge effect on the game (as stated by other users, Lucario getting owned by Duggy prevented Clefable from being countered).
But on the whole, it wasn't a half bad warstory. The comments section was very good and all you need to make a better one is to find a better battle. 7/10