Colonel M
I COULD BE BORED!
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Quality Control.
FMK TDK Ciele Finchinator
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Overview
move 1: Memento
move 2: Tailwind
move 3: Taunt
move 4: Encore
item: Focus Sash / Darkinium-Z
ability: Prankster
Unless you're using Infiltrator, which is what needs to be noted in that sentence (albeit differently), what Whimsicott outspeeds is irrelevant since it will always get the jump on them thanks to Prankster. Notice - none of the Pokemon listed here have Prankster either.
Here, we'll start with the Overview like so:
* In here mention about its access to Prankster and a wide array of Support moves are the reason to use Whimsicott in Baton Pass teams - as they disrupt the opponent and support your team.
* You can continue on with its typing - definitely not bad, but definitely not great either.
* In here you can mention that Whimsicott has a rather powerful Speed stat that still can be supported with Infiltrator - you can mention the Support Pokemon it outspeeds.
* I know this isn't really a con per se, but I would mention that Whimsicott only fits on an extreme niche with Baton Pass support. So many people still make the mistake of including Whimsicott in their team without knowing its purpose or utility. Other QC might disagree with me, but considering that this was actually mistaken before I think it's worthwhile to add this detial.
* Lack of Recovery and durability make it difficult to keep alive. Still a good con.
* Psychic Terrain and Dark-types take a dumpster on the set. Note Bisharp especially - Bisharp basically nullifies Memento.
Moveset
Other Options
Meh.
Checks and Counters
So, before I officially stamp this - and I apologize for asking, I would like to that you tag me once more and I'll give you the okay to proceed. I'll discuss more with QC because there's a lot.
This should help a little bit to describe - ignore the loss and the misplay, but focus on the general gist of the strategy and think of what Pokemon are commonly run on Baton Pass teams.
Implement those changes, tag me, and I'll discuss everything with QC once more before giving it the official 3/3...
...but since AccidentalGreed made this nice stamp and I want to use it...
3/3
Once, of course, everything is re-reviewed.
Yeah.
Quality Control.
FMK TDK Ciele Finchinator
???
Overview
Let's consider the context of the sentence and the set in general:* Whimsicott holds an astounding base 116 Speed for a utility-based Pokemon, allowing it to naturally outspeed Pokemon such as Mew, Rotom-W, and Tapu Fini.
move 1: Memento
move 2: Tailwind
move 3: Taunt
move 4: Encore
item: Focus Sash / Darkinium-Z
ability: Prankster
Unless you're using Infiltrator, which is what needs to be noted in that sentence (albeit differently), what Whimsicott outspeeds is irrelevant since it will always get the jump on them thanks to Prankster. Notice - none of the Pokemon listed here have Prankster either.
This definitely can be merged. In fact, a lot of the Overview has a lot of fluff. It mentions Speed almost 3-4 times. I think you can cut it down. I'll show in a moment.* The combination of Whimsicott's supportive movepool and high base Speed allows it to function well on Baton Pass teams.
Not really noteworthy IMO.* Since Whimsicott has a vast movepool, it suffers from four-moveslot-syndrome.
Could be cleaned up a bit as well.* The nerf to Prankster allow Dark-types such as Bisharp, Greninja, and Mega-Gyarados to switch in without worrying about being crippled by Whimsicott's support moves. While the addition of Psychic Terrain further hampers Whimsicott's ability to take advantage of Prankster.
Here, we'll start with the Overview like so:
* In here mention about its access to Prankster and a wide array of Support moves are the reason to use Whimsicott in Baton Pass teams - as they disrupt the opponent and support your team.
* You can continue on with its typing - definitely not bad, but definitely not great either.
* In here you can mention that Whimsicott has a rather powerful Speed stat that still can be supported with Infiltrator - you can mention the Support Pokemon it outspeeds.
* I know this isn't really a con per se, but I would mention that Whimsicott only fits on an extreme niche with Baton Pass support. So many people still make the mistake of including Whimsicott in their team without knowing its purpose or utility. Other QC might disagree with me, but considering that this was actually mistaken before I think it's worthwhile to add this detial.
* Lack of Recovery and durability make it difficult to keep alive. Still a good con.
* Psychic Terrain and Dark-types take a dumpster on the set. Note Bisharp especially - Bisharp basically nullifies Memento.
Moveset
Also mention about Z Memento being used with Darkinium Z to fully heal the recipient (usually Scolipede / Mew, but can be others).* Memento allows Whimsicott to safely bring in a Baton Pass or set up user while also providing them a safe way to boost up at the expense of Whimsicott.
Mention that, in a pinch, it can also warm up the game since +2 Speed Mega Metagross can be difficult to switch into. This can be really useful in situations where Whimsicott is in the back and a Plan B is needed (say Scolipede / Mew somehow fucked up).* Tailwind provides an easier time for set up users such as Scolipede and Mew.
Also mention that it can punish entry hazards.* Encore is used to lock down other set up users such as Mega Charizard X, Quiver Dance Pheromosa, and Landorus-T.
Mention that this is crucial for Infiltrator Whimsicott as well since you need Speed investment to outspeed your example targets.* Full investment in Speed allows Whimsicott to quickly set up Tailwind, Taunt, or Encore before falling.
The major thing is this even though Prankster is superior in most case, the reason it is used that outside of the Psychic Terrain and Dark-types it will always be superior. Basically - you're right but expand why.* Since Whimsicott is naturally fast, Infiltrator can be used over Prankster to allow Whimsicott to bypass Psychic Terrain and Dark-types. However, Prankster is still superior in most cases.
Merge these two together - mention that Whimsicott is used exclusively for supporting Baton Pass teams. Mention that Focus Sash is used more for a suicide lead whereas Darkinium Z sits in the sidelines to deploy annoyances or Z Memento.* Whimsicott is exclusively used as a support Pokemon, thus, it is important to take advantage of its ability to support the team's set up users.
* Whimsicott can be used as a suicide lead to quickly set up Tailwind and then Memento on out to a set up or Baton Pass user.
When does Prankster ever matter on this? I'd just axe it or mention that Whimsicott can still Taunt or Encore levitating Pokemon even in Psychic Terrain.* Remember that due to Prankster, Whimsicott will be able to Taunt other non-Dark-type Taunt users such as Tapu Fini and Gliscor.
If you could, focus more on Baton Pass recipients. Think in these examples - Mega Metagross who doesn't always need a Speed Boost or just Tailwind, Necrozma to ease setting up,or Manaphy which can still cripple bulkier teams.* Whimsicott can help safely bring in set-up sweepers such as Mega Charizard X, Volcarona, and Mega Pinsir with Memento. They also appreciate Tailwind since it will also allow them to outspeed their threats to either recover up or boost up further.
Other Options
Meh.
Checks and Counters
No Bisharp? Bisharp basically worries nothing from Whimsicott aside from not being able to set up Swords Dance.**Dark-types**: Dark-types such as Greninja, Mega Gyarados, and Hoopa-U can easily switch into Whimsicott's supportive moves or use it as set-up bait due to their immunity to moves affected by Prankster. Mandibuzz can Taunt Whimsicott without worrying about being taunted back, preventing Whimsicott from providing any utility.
Needs more elaboration - especially since in those cases they would just go for the kill with their Steel-type attacks.**Steel-types**: Common Steel-types such as Celesteela, Magnezone, and Heatran are able to threaten Whimsicott out with Steel-type STAB. However, Mega Scizor and Kartana must be wary of being locked into Swords Dance.
You can also mention Mamoswine.**Fast Priority Attackers**: Fast attackers with access to priority such as Mega Scizor, Mega Pinsir, and Weavile are capable of knocking out Whimsicott after some prior damage.
So, before I officially stamp this - and I apologize for asking, I would like to that you tag me once more and I'll give you the okay to proceed. I'll discuss more with QC because there's a lot.
This should help a little bit to describe - ignore the loss and the misplay, but focus on the general gist of the strategy and think of what Pokemon are commonly run on Baton Pass teams.
Implement those changes, tag me, and I'll discuss everything with QC once more before giving it the official 3/3...
...but since AccidentalGreed made this nice stamp and I want to use it...
3/3
Once, of course, everything is re-reviewed.