Swords Dance Brelloom [QC 0/2]

TheFurretStar

TheFurretStar

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[SET]
name: swords dance
move 1: swords dance
move 2:bullet seed/seed bomb
move 3:Mach punch
move 4: Aerial Ace/buldoze/rock tomb
item: Loaded dice/Life orb
ability: Technician
nature: Jolly/Adamant
evs: 252 Atk 252 speed 4special defense
tera type: steel/fighting/rock

[SET COMMENTS]
Breloom boasts an amazing 120 attack before evs, with a swords dance it can KO Water Types like Inteleon and Vaporieon. Aerial Ace can deal with Vileplume, one of its most prominent checks, and Buldoze can deal with Slowbro-g Tera Steel can make up for no poison heal, fighting can add extra power to its punches, Tera rock can make rock tomb hit hard and hit most flying types.

Since Breloom struggles with Poison-types, Munkidori, Uxie, and Flygon make for good teammates. Breloom can take care of steel types, and that can help out teammates like porygon-Z and Booster energy scream tail. Flying-types like Kilowattrel, Tornadus, and Galarian Articuno can check Breloom, meaning partners such as Diancie, Toxtricity, and Oricorio-E are appreciated. These partners as well as others like Overqwil and Toxicroak enjoy how Breloom can capitalize on Ground-types like Swampert and Flygon.


[Set Credits]
Written by me :) TheFurretStar I think this is where it goes
 
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put what’s in the hidden tag as ur first post n fill it in as the set / comment ask
[SET]
name:
move 1:
move 2:
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move 4:
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evs:
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[SET COMMENTS]

Preview-length analyses should get across a general idea of what the set does but be nowhere near as extensive as an Overview in a traditional analysis. Explain any relevant coverage moves and slashings in the set, as well as non-252 / 252 EV spreads. A couple examples of relevant teammates should be included too.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user1.100/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user3.102/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.103/
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ok so, before i can truly qc this, we need to change this up quite a bit, which if you’re willing to do, great, and if not, you can drop it. however, assuming you want to continue, we’ll need to make this more formal. on top of that, there should be two paragraphs: the first talking about the set, and the second mentioning teammates. now, while it may seem like this is quite a bit from what you have right now, i don’t believe it’d be too difficult to do if you wish to get into analyses. you can start a conversation with me here, on smogon, or hit me up on discord to continue this transaction, though, and i could give you pointers, clarify stuff, etc.
 
I want to drop this because I don’t know what to FUCKING do
I write a full length one, they say write a preview so I write a preview, then they say write a full length one.
I follow the template after all of this, and because I wrote my credits SLIGHTLY DIFFFRENTLY, I am appparently not following the template. I am NEVER coming back to C&C EVER again
 
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