Monotype Crown Holder Iron Crown Psychic ( QC 2/2 GP 1/1)

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[SET]
Iron Crown @ Weakness Policy
Name: Double Dance Sweeper (Psychic)
Ability: Quark Drive
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 20 Atk
Timid / Modest Nature
- Calm Mind / Focus Blast
- Agility
- Stored Power
- Tachyon Cutter / Focus Blast

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Crown is an amazing Stored Power setup sweeper for Psychic due to its access to multiple useful setup moves, like Calm Mind and Agility, and a type combination that lets it activate Weakness Policy easily. On top of that, its typing means it's immune to Toxic and also has important resistances to types such as Dragon and Fairy. Calm Mind and Agility allow Iron Crown to boost its stats and Stored Power while also punishing opponents that play passively, trying to stall out dual screens. Behind dual screens, Iron Crown survives attacks like Fiery Dance from Choice Specs Iron Moth, Earth Power from Life Orb Landorus, and Knock Off from Alolan Muk, allowing it to capitalize on its weaknesses by activating Weakness Policy and boosting the power of Stored Power. Additionally, after activating its Weakness Policy and using a single Agility, Iron Crown can take on walls like Skarmory and Galarian Slowking, OHKOing the former after Stealth Rock damage and 2HKOing the latter; similarly, in this position, it makes quick work of offensive foes like Choice Band Dragapult, Landorus-T, and Ogerpon-H and -W. Tachyon Cutter is a secondary move that is meant to hit foes that are immune to Stored Power, such as Alolan Muk and Meowscarada, and it also bypasses enemies with Focus Sash and Sturdy, such as Glimmora and Ogerpon-C, respectively. Focus Blast can be used in place of Tachyon Cutter or Calm Mind to hit Steel-type foes, which resist Stored Power, and Dark-type foes, which are immune to it. Once Weakness Policy is activated, Focus Blast can eliminate special walls such as Ting-Lu and Heatran after they are mildly chipped. However, it is considered risky, as Focus Blast can miss. A Timid nature is preferred, since it lets Iron Crown outspeed Choice Scarf Dragapult after an Agility. However, a Modest nature can also be considered, as it still outspeeds Choice Scarf Meowscarada after an Agility, and at +2 Special Attack, Iron Crown can OHKO Heatran.

Deoxys-S and Scream Tail set up entry hazards and dual screens, allowing Iron Crown to survive hits and set up successfully. Indeedee-M is immune to Ghost and sets Psychic Terrain for Iron Crown, shielding it from priority moves such as Ceruledge's Shadow Sneak and Hisuian Samurott's Sucker Punch. It also provides Healing Wish support to bring Iron Crown back into shape if it gets worn down. Galarian Slowking assists Iron Crown by spreading poison through Toxic Spikes or Toxic, pressuring bulky special walls such as Ting-Lu, while also providing pivoting with Chilly Reception. Hatterene prevents foes from setting up hazards, allowing Iron Crown to come in safely, and it can also help weaken Dark-types. Iron Boulder heavily damages special walls that trouble Iron Crown such as Heatran and Hisuian Goodra. Additionally, Iron Boulder checks Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon-H, Volcarona, and Cinderace while also dissuading Cinderace from using Court Change to steal dual screens. Choice Specs Flutter Mane overwhelms Iron Crown, but Choice Scarf Iron Boulder outspeeds it and removes it. Latios provides a switch-in to Ground-type moves thanks to its immunity to them, and it removes Dragon-type foes such as Gouging Fire and Walking Wake. Hoopa-U helps in removing Ghost-types such as Gholdengo and Flutter Mane. Slowbro chips opposing Fire-type threats such as Hisuian Arcanine while also burning physical attackers, such as Barraskewda and Choice Band Excadrill, and setup sweepers, like Dragonite and Scizor, with Scald. Armarouge removes Steel-type threats that resist Iron Crown's STAB moves, such as Forretress and Iron Treads, with the combination of Aura Sphere and Armor Cannon.

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Iron Crown is amazing Stored Power setup sweeper for Psychic due to access of multiple useful setup moves in Calm Mind and Agility making it tough to take on and Stored Power. Weakness Policy allows Iron Crown to further abuse it's weakness's and increase the output of Stored Power. Calm Mind boosts Iron Crown's stabs and Special defense as well as the base power of Stored Power. (Filler) Agility allows Iron Crown to outspeed threats such as such as Zamazenta, Tornadus-Therian and Band Dragapult while increasing base power of Stored Power (Filler again). Stored Power allows Iron Crown to eliminate almost any threat such as Band Dragapult, Landorus and Ogerpon Hearthflame and Wellspring, once it has set up a single Agility and activated it's Weakness Policy or set up 2 Calm Minds. Tachyon Cutter is used as secondary option to hit foes which are immune to Stored Power such as Lokix (scared of sucker without Psychic Terrain) Alolan Muk and Weavile Meowscarada (More relevant Dark in the tier) and it also gets rid of enemies with Focus Sash and Sturdy such as Ogerpon-Cornerstone, Frosslass (Lass is faster and could either try a trade with DBond or just smack us with Shadow Ball before we get setup and we get in trouble) and Glimmora.

Deoxys-S and Scream Tail setup hazards and screens in order to allow Iron Crown to survive hits and allow it to setup successfully. Indeedee is Immune to Ghost and sets Psychic Terrain for Iron Crown to prevent it from Priority moves such as Shadow Sneak from Ceruledge and Sucker Punch from Hisuian Samurott. Galarian Slowking increases Iron Crown durability by spreading poison through Toxic Spikes and Toxic creating and provides a pivot using Chilly Reception. (Reword, I get what your trying to do here but it reads weird right now, mention how Toxic pressure bulky Special walls line Ting-Lu) Hattrene prevents foes from setting up hazards allowing Iron Crown to come in safely. Iron Boulder eliminates special walls which trouble Iron Crown such as Heatran and Hisuian Goodra. Iron Boulder also outspeeds and eliminates fast Dark-type threats such as Meowscarada, Roaring Moon and Hisuian Samurrott. Iron Boulder also checks Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon Hearthflame, Volcarona and Cinderace; also preventing Cinderace to steal screens using Court Change. Gallade survives Shadow Ball from Flutter Mane which OHKOes Iron Crown and OHKOes it back (AV Sample is for Fighting, and Gallade also can't really switch in since Shadow Ball does too much) and also removes other Special Attacking Ghost- and Dark-types such as Pecharunt, Hisuian Zoroark and Greninja. Latios provides immunity to Groung-type moves and improves Iron Crown's matchups against Dragon-type such as Gouging Fire and Walking Wake. It also keeps Defog to remove screens by foes such as Corviknight and Zapdos in check. (This isn't NDM) Hoopa-U also helps removing Ghost-types such as Gholdengo and Flutter Mane while resisting their Ghost moves. (We're slower and doesn't resist, just take neutral damage, reword again) Slowbro hits the opposing Fire-type threats such as Iron Moth and Hisuian Aracanine; while also Burning with Scald Physical Attackers and Setup sweepers like Dragonite, Zamazenta and Scizor.
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Iron Crown is amazing Stored Power setup sweeper for Psychic due to access of multiple useful setup moves in Calm Mind and Agility making it tough to take on and Stored Power. Weakness Policy allows Iron Crown to further abuse it's weakness's and increase the output of Stored Power. Calm Mind boosts Iron Crown's stabs and Special defense as well as the base power of Stored Power. (Filler) Agility allows Iron Crown to outspeed threats such as such as Zamazenta, Tornadus-Therian and Band Dragapult while increasing base power of Stored Power (Filler again). Stored Power allows Iron Crown to eliminate almost any threat such as Band Dragapult, Landorus and Ogerpon Hearthflame and Wellspring, once it has set up a single Agility and activated it's Weakness Policy or set up 2 Calm Minds. Tachyon Cutter is used as secondary option to hit foes which are immune to Stored Power such as Lokix (scared of sucker without Psychic Terrain) Alolan Muk and Weavile Meowscarada (More relevant Dark in the tier) and it also gets rid of enemies with Focus Sash and Sturdy such as Ogerpon-Cornerstone, Frosslass (Lass is faster and could either try a trade with DBond or just smack us with Shadow Ball before we get setup and we get in trouble) and Glimmora.

Deoxys-S and Scream Tail setup hazards and screens in order to allow Iron Crown to survive hits and allow it to setup successfully. Indeedee is Immune to Ghost and sets Psychic Terrain for Iron Crown to prevent it from Priority moves such as Shadow Sneak from Ceruledge and Sucker Punch from Hisuian Samurott. Galarian Slowking increases Iron Crown durability by spreading poison through Toxic Spikes and Toxic creating and provides a pivot using Chilly Reception. (Reword, I get what your trying to do here but it reads weird right now, mention how Toxic pressure bulky Special walls line Ting-Lu) Hattrene prevents foes from setting up hazards allowing Iron Crown to come in safely. Iron Boulder eliminates special walls which trouble Iron Crown such as Heatran and Hisuian Goodra. Iron Boulder also outspeeds and eliminates fast Dark-type threats such as Meowscarada, Roaring Moon and Hisuian Samurrott. Iron Boulder also checks Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon Hearthflame, Volcarona and Cinderace; also preventing Cinderace to steal screens using Court Change. Gallade survives Shadow Ball from Flutter Mane which OHKOes Iron Crown and OHKOes it back (AV Sample is for Fighting, and Gallade also can't really switch in since Shadow Ball does too much) and also removes other Special Attacking Ghost- and Dark-types such as Pecharunt, Hisuian Zoroark and Greninja. Latios provides immunity to Groung-type moves and improves Iron Crown's matchups against Dragon-type such as Gouging Fire and Walking Wake. It also keeps Defog to remove screens by foes such as Corviknight and Zapdos in check. (This isn't NDM) Hoopa-U also helps removing Ghost-types such as Gholdengo and Flutter Mane while resisting their Ghost moves. (We're slower and doesn't resist, just take neutral damage, reword again) Slowbro hits the opposing Fire-type threats such as Iron Moth and Hisuian Aracanine; while also Burning with Scald Physical Attackers and Setup sweepers like Dragonite, Zamazenta and Scizor.
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[SET]
Iron Crown @ Weakness Policy
name: Double Dance Sweeper (Psychic)
Ability: Quark Drive
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 20 Atk
Timid Nature
- Calm Mind
- Agility
- Stored Power
- Tachyon Cutter

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Crown is amazing Stored Power setup sweeper for Psychic due to access of multiple useful setup moves in Calm Mind and Agility making it tough to take on (this frankly doesnt tell me anything. What does it help Psychic with though? There's lots of Setups on Psychic but why Iron Crown?). Weakness Policy allows Iron Crown to further abuse it's weakness's and increase the output of Stored Power (Put this later in the analyses, or mention it with Stored Power's line.). Agility allows Iron Crown to outspeed threats such as such as Zamazenta, Tornadus-Therian and Band Dragapult . (Mention how CM and Agility can punish passive play which opponents can do by stalling out dual screens) Stored Power allows Iron Crown to eliminate almost any threat such as Band Dragapult, Landorus and Ogerpon Hearthflame and Wellspring, once it has set up a single Agility and activated it's Weakness Policy or set up 2 Calm Minds (this sentence is a bit odd since well...its stab so...maybe more appealing targets are the ones that somehow die at +2 +2 +2 [Agility + WP Proc] but are "resists" like Skarm after SR?). Tachyon Cutter is used as secondary option to hit foes which are immune to Stored Power such as Alolan Muk and Meowscarada and it also gets rid of enemies with Focus Sash such as Glimmora and Sturdy such as Ogerpon-Cornerstone. (Mention Focus Miss as a moveset choice, but forces Iron Crown to get WP Procs, but lets you murder Heatran and Ting-Lu tho) (Mention here why timid matters: Timid outspeeds Scarf Pult at +2, Modest outspeeds Meowscarada Scarf but OHKO's Heatran w/ +2 Focus Miss if thats the option they want)

Deoxys-S and Scream Tail setup hazards and screens in order to allow Iron Crown to survive hits and allow it to setup successfully. Indeedee is Immune to Ghost and sets Psychic Terrain for Iron Crown to prevent it from Priority moves such as Shadow Sneak from Ceruledge and Sucker Punch from Hisuian Samurott. Galarian Slowking assists Iron Crown by spreading poison through Toxic Spikes or Toxic creating pressure on bulky Special walls such as Ting-Lu while also providing a pivot using Chilly Reception. Hattrene prevents foes from setting up hazards allowing Iron Crown to come in safely. Iron Boulder eliminates special walls which trouble Iron Crown such as Heatran and Hisuian Goodra. Iron Boulder also outspeeds and eliminates fast Dark-type threats such as Meowscarada, Roaring Moon and Hisuian Samurrott (Worth noting that these mons are the ones you actually want to be against if screens are up, would just remove these Imo). Iron Boulder also checks Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon Hearthflame, Volcarona and Cinderace; also preventing Cinderace to steal screens using Court Change. Gallade removes Special Attacking Ghost- and Dark-types such as Flutermane, Hisuian Zoroark and Greninja. Latios provides immunity to Groung-type moves and improves Iron Crown's matchups against Dragon-type such as Gouging Fire and Walking Wake. Hoopa-U also helps removing Ghost-types such as Gholdengo and Flutter Mane. Slowbro hits the opposing Fire-type threats such as Iron Moth and Hisuian Aracanine; while also Burning with Scald Physical Attackers and Setup sweepers like Dragonite, Zamazenta and Scizor. (There's a fair amount of typos in these four sentences, would also remove gallade for Armarouge (or any steel breaker really))

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/
Quality checked by:
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Grammar checked by:
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Will recheck after these edits thanks waleed
 
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[SET]
Iron Crown @ Weakness Policy
name: Double Dance Sweeper (Psychic)
Ability: Quark Drive
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 20 Atk
Timid Nature
- Calm Mind
- Agility
- Stored Power
- Tachyon Cutter

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Crown is amazing Stored Power setup sweeper for Psychic due to access of multiple useful setup moves in Calm Mind and Agility making it tough to take on (this frankly doesnt tell me anything. What does it help Psychic with though? There's lots of Setups on Psychic but why Iron Crown?). Weakness Policy allows Iron Crown to further abuse it's weakness's and increase the output of Stored Power (Put this later in the analyses, or mention it with Stored Power's line.). Agility allows Iron Crown to outspeed threats such as such as Zamazenta, Tornadus-Therian and Band Dragapult . (Mention how CM and Agility can punish passive play which opponents can do by stalling out dual screens) Stored Power allows Iron Crown to eliminate almost any threat such as Band Dragapult, Landorus and Ogerpon Hearthflame and Wellspring, once it has set up a single Agility and activated it's Weakness Policy or set up 2 Calm Minds (this sentence is a bit odd since well...its stab so...maybe more appealing targets are the ones that somehow die at +2 +2 +2 [Agility + WP Proc] but are "resists" like Skarm after SR?). Tachyon Cutter is used as secondary option to hit foes which are immune to Stored Power such as Alolan Muk and Meowscarada and it also gets rid of enemies with Focus Sash such as Glimmora and Sturdy such as Ogerpon-Cornerstone. (Mention Focus Miss as a moveset choice, but forces Iron Crown to get WP Procs, but lets you murder Heatran and Ting-Lu tho) (Mention here why timid matters: Timid outspeeds Scarf Pult at +2, Modest outspeeds Meowscarada Scarf but OHKO's Heatran w/ +2 Focus Miss if thats the option they want)

Deoxys-S and Scream Tail setup hazards and screens in order to allow Iron Crown to survive hits and allow it to setup successfully. Indeedee is Immune to Ghost and sets Psychic Terrain for Iron Crown to prevent it from Priority moves such as Shadow Sneak from Ceruledge and Sucker Punch from Hisuian Samurott. Galarian Slowking assists Iron Crown by spreading poison through Toxic Spikes or Toxic creating pressure on bulky Special walls such as Ting-Lu while also providing a pivot using Chilly Reception. Hattrene prevents foes from setting up hazards allowing Iron Crown to come in safely. Iron Boulder eliminates special walls which trouble Iron Crown such as Heatran and Hisuian Goodra. Iron Boulder also outspeeds and eliminates fast Dark-type threats such as Meowscarada, Roaring Moon and Hisuian Samurrott (Worth noting that these mons are the ones you actually want to be against if screens are up, would just remove these Imo). Iron Boulder also checks Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon Hearthflame, Volcarona and Cinderace; also preventing Cinderace to steal screens using Court Change. Gallade removes Special Attacking Ghost- and Dark-types such as Flutermane, Hisuian Zoroark and Greninja. Latios provides immunity to Groung-type moves and improves Iron Crown's matchups against Dragon-type such as Gouging Fire and Walking Wake. Hoopa-U also helps removing Ghost-types such as Gholdengo and Flutter Mane. Slowbro hits the opposing Fire-type threats such as Iron Moth and Hisuian Aracanine; while also Burning with Scald Physical Attackers and Setup sweepers like Dragonite, Zamazenta and Scizor. (There's a fair amount of typos in these four sentences, would also remove gallade for Armarouge (or any steel breaker really))

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/
Quality checked by:
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Grammar checked by:
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Will recheck after these edits thanks waleed
Implemented. Also did some minor edits please check them as well thank Trichotomy for reminding the screens point with his game and also Pengairxan for being no help.
 
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[SET]
Iron Crown @ Weakness Policy
Name: Double Dance Sweeper (Psychic)
Ability: Quark Drive
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 20 Atk
Timid Nature
- Calm Mind
- Agility
- Stored Power
- Tachyon Cutter / Focus Blast

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Crown is amazing Stored Power setup sweeper for Psychic due to access of multiple useful setup moves in Calm Mind and Agility and a Type combination which lets it activate Weakness Policy more easily while being Immune to Toxic which doesn't wear it out and also providing it important resistances such as Dragon and Fairy (this sentence is correct, its too long winded tho, maybe you can reword this/wait for GP to help if you cant?). Calm Mind and Agility allows Iron Crown to boosts it's stats and stored power while also punishing foes which tend to play passively trying to stall out dual screens. Weakness Policy allows Iron Crown to further abuse it's weakness's (maybe mention its bulk instead of its weaknesses? Especially under dual screens, you can mention it surviving some Supereffective attacks of your liking) and increase the output of Stored Power and once a single Agility is setted up Iron Crown can take on walls likes Skarmory OHKO's after Stealth Rock Damage and Galarian Slowking 2HKO's it as well as offensive foes like Band Dragapult, Landorus and Ogerpon Hearthflame and Wellspring.Tachyon Cutter is used as secondary option to hit foes which are immune to Stored Power such as Alolan Muk and Meowscarada and it also gets rid of enemies with Focus Sash such as Glimmora and Sturdy such as Ogerpon-Cornerstone. Focus Blast can also be used in place of Tachyon Cutter to hit Steel-type foes which resist Stored Power and Dark-types foes which are immune to Stored Power but it is considered risky as Focus Blast can miss.(focus miss can go over cm too.) Once Weakness Policy is activated it lets Focus Blast eliminate (Idt it "eliminates", its still a 2hko at +2 iirc. But it lets you pick them off if they're low maybe) Special Walls such as Ting Lu and Heatran. Timid Nature is preferred since it lets Iron Crown outspeed Scarf Dragapult while Modest Nature can be considered as it still outspeeds Scarf Meowscarada and also OHKO's Heatran.

Deoxys-S and Scream Tail setup hazards and screens in order to allow Iron Crown to survive hits and allow it to setup successfully. Indeedee is Immune to Ghost and sets Psychic Terrain for Iron Crown to prevent it from Priority moves such as Shadow Sneak from Ceruledge and Sucker Punch from Hisuian Samurott (Healing Wish?). Galarian Slowking assists Iron Crown by spreading poison through Toxic Spikes or Toxic creating pressure on bulky Special walls such as Ting-Lu while also providing a pivot using Chilly Reception. Hattrene prevents foes from setting up hazards allowing Iron Crown to come in safely (it weakens Dark-types and helps out in stallbreaking sometimes too). (Swords Dance?) Iron Boulder eliminates special walls which trouble Iron Crown such as Heatran and Hisuian Goodra. Iron Boulder checks Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon Hearthflame, Volcarona and Cinderace; also preventing Cinderace to steal screens using Court Change (can mention scarf sets for outspeeding and removing Specs FM which kinda overwhelms Crown). Gallade removes Special Attacking Ghost- and Dark-types such as Flutter Mane, Hisuian Zoroark and Greninja. Latios provides immunity to Ground-type moves and improves (it doesnt improve, you just remove these haha) Iron Crown's matchups against Dragon-type foes such as Gouging Fire and Walking Wake. It also keeps in check foes such as Corviknight and Zapdos which try to remove screens using Defog. (Zapdos doesnt have defog and crown can just...setup on corv) Hoopa-U also helps in removing Ghost-types foes such as Gholdengo and Flutter Mane. Slowbro hits (hits is correct, but its not exactly "offensive". Also takes on CB Exca and Barra quite amazingly tho) the opposing Fire-type threats such as Hisuian Aracanine; while also Burning Physical Attackers and Setup sweepers like Dragonite, Zamazenta (Scald cant break sub) and Scizor with Scald. Armarouge removes Steel-type threats which resist Iron Crown's moves such as Forretress and Iron Treads with the combination of Aura Sphere and Armor Cannon.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
Grammar checked by:
-
QC 2/2, implement carefully
Thankie Waleed
 
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[SET]
Iron Crown @ Weakness Policy
Name: Double Dance Sweeper (Psychic)
Ability: Quark Drive
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 20 Atk
Timid Nature
- Calm Mind
- Agility
- Stored Power
- Tachyon Cutter / Focus Blast

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Crown is amazing Stored Power setup sweeper for Psychic due to access of multiple useful setup moves in Calm Mind and Agility and a Type combination which lets it activate Weakness Policy more easily while being Immune to Toxic which doesn't wear it out and also providing it important resistances such as Dragon and Fairy (this sentence is correct, its too long winded tho, maybe you can reword this/wait for GP to help if you cant?). Calm Mind and Agility allows Iron Crown to boosts it's stats and stored power while also punishing foes which tend to play passively trying to stall out dual screens. Weakness Policy allows Iron Crown to further abuse it's weakness's (maybe mention its bulk instead of its weaknesses? Especially under dual screens, you can mention it surviving some Supereffective attacks of your liking) and increase the output of Stored Power and once a single Agility is setted up Iron Crown can take on walls likes Skarmory OHKO's after Stealth Rock Damage and Galarian Slowking 2HKO's it as well as offensive foes like Band Dragapult, Landorus and Ogerpon Hearthflame and Wellspring.Tachyon Cutter is used as secondary option to hit foes which are immune to Stored Power such as Alolan Muk and Meowscarada and it also gets rid of enemies with Focus Sash such as Glimmora and Sturdy such as Ogerpon-Cornerstone. Focus Blast can also be used in place of Tachyon Cutter to hit Steel-type foes which resist Stored Power and Dark-types foes which are immune to Stored Power but it is considered risky as Focus Blast can miss.(focus miss can go over cm too.) Once Weakness Policy is activated it lets Focus Blast eliminate (Idt it "eliminates", its still a 2hko at +2 iirc. But it lets you pick them off if they're low maybe) Special Walls such as Ting Lu and Heatran. Timid Nature is preferred since it lets Iron Crown outspeed Scarf Dragapult while Modest Nature can be considered as it still outspeeds Scarf Meowscarada and also OHKO's Heatran.

Deoxys-S and Scream Tail setup hazards and screens in order to allow Iron Crown to survive hits and allow it to setup successfully. Indeedee is Immune to Ghost and sets Psychic Terrain for Iron Crown to prevent it from Priority moves such as Shadow Sneak from Ceruledge and Sucker Punch from Hisuian Samurott (Healing Wish?). Galarian Slowking assists Iron Crown by spreading poison through Toxic Spikes or Toxic creating pressure on bulky Special walls such as Ting-Lu while also providing a pivot using Chilly Reception. Hattrene prevents foes from setting up hazards allowing Iron Crown to come in safely (it weakens Dark-types and helps out in stallbreaking sometimes too). (Swords Dance?) Iron Boulder eliminates special walls which trouble Iron Crown such as Heatran and Hisuian Goodra. Iron Boulder checks Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon Hearthflame, Volcarona and Cinderace; also preventing Cinderace to steal screens using Court Change (can mention scarf sets for outspeeding and removing Specs FM which kinda overwhelms Crown). Gallade removes Special Attacking Ghost- and Dark-types such as Flutter Mane, Hisuian Zoroark and Greninja. Latios provides immunity to Ground-type moves and improves (it doesnt improve, you just remove these haha) Iron Crown's matchups against Dragon-type foes such as Gouging Fire and Walking Wake. It also keeps in check foes such as Corviknight and Zapdos which try to remove screens using Defog. (Zapdos doesnt have defog and crown can just...setup on corv) Hoopa-U also helps in removing Ghost-types foes such as Gholdengo and Flutter Mane. Slowbro hits (hits is correct, but its not exactly "offensive". Also takes on CB Exca and Barra quite amazingly tho) the opposing Fire-type threats such as Hisuian Aracanine; while also Burning Physical Attackers and Setup sweepers like Dragonite, Zamazenta (Scald cant break sub) and Scizor with Scald. Armarouge removes Steel-type threats which resist Iron Crown's moves such as Forretress and Iron Treads with the combination of Aura Sphere and Armor Cannon.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
Grammar checked by:
-
QC 2/2, implement carefully
Thankie Waleed
Implemented, only keeping the first sentence same because ehh bad english.
 
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[SET]
Iron Crown @ Weakness Policy
Name: Double Dance Sweeper (Psychic)
Ability: Quark Drive
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 20 Atk
Timid / Modest Nature
- Calm Mind / Focus Blast
- Agility
- Stored Power
- Tachyon Cutter / Focus Blast

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Crown is an amazing Stored Power setup sweeper for Psychic due to its access to of multiple useful setup moves, (AC) like in Calm Mind and Agility, (AC) and a type (lowercase) combination which that lets it activate Weakness Policy more easily. (Add period) On top of that, its typing means it's while being immune (lowercase) to Toxic which doesn't wear it out (saying it’s immune and then including this clause is a bit redundant) and also has providing it important resistances to types such as Dragon and Fairy. Calm Mind and Agility allows Iron Crown to boosts its (Remove apostrophe) stats and Stored Power (capitalize both) while also punishing foes which tend to opponents that play passively, (AC) trying to stall out dual screens. Iron Crown Behind dual screens, (AC) Iron Crown survives attacks like Fiery Dance from Choice Specs Iron Moth, Earth Power from Life Orb Landorus-I, (AC) and Knock Off from Alolan Muk, (AC) thus activating Weakness Policy allowing it to abuse capitalize on its (Remove apostrophe) weakness's weaknesses by activating Weakness Policy and boosting the power of increase the output of Stored Power. (Add period) And, after activating its Weakness Policy and using and once a single Agility, (AC) is setted up Iron Crown can take on walls likes Skarmory and Galarian Slowking, OHKOing the former OHKO's after Stealth Rock damage (lowercase) and Galarian Slowking 2HKO's it 2HKOing the latter; (Add semicolon) similarly, in this position, it makes quick work of as well as offensive foes like Choice Band Dragapult, Landorus, (AC) (seeing that you used “Landorus-I” to refer to Landorus-Incarnate, i’m unsure if you’re using “Landorus” here to refer to Landorus-Therian. if this is the case, change it to “Landorus-T”) and Ogerpon-H (Add hyphen) Hearthflame and -W (Add hyphen) Wellspring. (Add space after the period) Tachyon Cutter is used as a secondary option move that is meant to hit foes which that are immune to Stored Power, (AC) such as Alolan Muk and Meowscarada, (AC) and it also bypasses gets rid of enemies with Focus Sash and Sturdy, (AC) such as Glimmora and Sturdy such as Ogerpon-C, (AC) respectively ornerstone. Focus Blast can also be used in place of Tachyon Cutter or Calm Mind to hit Steel-type foes, (AC) which resist Stored Power, (AC) and Dark-types foes, (AC) which are immune to Stored Power it. (Add period) However, (AC) but it is considered risky, (AC) as Focus Blast can miss. (separating it into two sentences allows the warning to be emphasized, and it also clarifies each idea) Once Weakness Policy is activated, (AC) it lets Focus Blast can eliminate special walls (both lowercase) such as Ting-Lu (Add hyphen) and Heatran when after they are mildly chipped. A Timid nature (lowercase) is preferred, (AC) since it lets Iron Crown outspeed Choice Scarf Dragapult after an Agility. (Add period) However, (AC) a while Modest nature (lowercase) can also be considered, (AC) as it still outspeeds Choice Scarf Meowscarada after an Agility, (AC) and at +2 Special Attack, Iron Crown can OHKO also OHKO's Heatran.

Deoxys-S and Scream Tail set (Add space) up entry hazards and dual screens, (AC) allowing in order to allow Iron Crown to survive hits and allow it to set (Add space) up successfully. Indeedee-M (Add hyphen) is immune (lowercase) to Ghost and sets Psychic Terrain for Iron Crown to prevent , (AC) shielding it from priority (lowercase) moves such as Ceruledge's Shadow Sneak from Ceruledge and Hisuian Samurott's Sucker Punch from Hisuian Samurott. It also provides Healing Wish support to bring Iron Crown back into shape if it gets worn down in the battle. Galarian Slowking assists Iron Crown by spreading poison through Toxic Spikes or Toxic, (AC) creating pressure on pressuring bulky special (lowercase) walls such as Ting-Lu, (AC) while also providing a pivot using pivoting with Chilly Reception. Hattrene Hatterene prevents foes from setting up hazards, (AC) allowing Iron Crown to come in safely, (AC) and can also help weaken while also weakening Dark-types. Iron Boulder heavily damages special walls that which trouble Iron Crown such as Heatran and Hisuian Goodra. Additionally, (AC) Iron Boulder checks Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon-H (Add hyphen) earthflame, Volcarona, (AC) and Cinderace (Remove semicolon) while also dissuading preventing Cinderace from using Court Change to steal dual screens using Court Change. Choice Specs Flutter Mane overwhelms Iron Crown, but Choice Scarf Iron Boulder outspeeds and removes it. Latios provides a switch-in to immunity to Ground-type moves thanks to its immunity to them, (AC) and it removes Dragon-type foes such as Gouging Fire and Walking Wake. Hoopa-U also helps in removing Ghost-types foes such as Gholdengo and Flutter Mane. Slowbro chips the opposing Fire-type threats such as Hisuian Aracanine (Remove semicolon) while also burning physical attackers (three lowercase), (AC) such as Barraskewda and Choice Band Excadrill, (AC) and setup (lowercase) sweepers, (AC) like Dragonite and Scizor, (AC) with Scald. Armarouge removes Steel-type threats that which resist Iron Crown's STAB moves, (AC) such as Forretress and Iron Treads, (AC) with the combination of Aura Sphere and Armor Cannon.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
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[SET]
Iron Crown @ Weakness Policy
Name: Double Dance Sweeper (Psychic)
Ability: Quark Drive
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 20 Atk
Timid / Modest Nature
- Calm Mind / Focus Blast
- Agility
- Stored Power
- Tachyon Cutter / Focus Blast

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Crown is an amazing Stored Power setup sweeper for Psychic due to its access to of multiple useful setup moves, (AC) like in Calm Mind and Agility, (AC) and a type (lowercase) combination which that lets it activate Weakness Policy more easily. (Add period) On top of that, its typing means it's while being immune (lowercase) to Toxic which doesn't wear it out (saying it’s immune and then including this clause is a bit redundant) and also has providing it important resistances to types such as Dragon and Fairy. Calm Mind and Agility allows Iron Crown to boosts its (Remove apostrophe) stats and Stored Power (capitalize both) while also punishing foes which tend to opponents that play passively, (AC) trying to stall out dual screens. Iron Crown Behind dual screens, (AC) Iron Crown survives attacks like Fiery Dance from Choice Specs Iron Moth, Earth Power from Life Orb Landorus-I, (AC) and Knock Off from Alolan Muk, (AC) thus activating Weakness Policy allowing it to abuse capitalize on its (Remove apostrophe) weakness's weaknesses by activating Weakness Policy and boosting the power of increase the output of Stored Power. (Add period) And, after activating its Weakness Policy and using and once a single Agility, (AC) is setted up Iron Crown can take on walls likes Skarmory and Galarian Slowking, OHKOing the former OHKO's after Stealth Rock damage (lowercase) and Galarian Slowking 2HKO's it 2HKOing the latter; (Add semicolon) similarly, in this position, it makes quick work of as well as offensive foes like Choice Band Dragapult, Landorus, (AC) (seeing that you used “Landorus-I” to refer to Landorus-Incarnate, i’m unsure if you’re using “Landorus” here to refer to Landorus-Therian. if this is the case, change it to “Landorus-T”) and Ogerpon-H (Add hyphen) Hearthflame and -W (Add hyphen) Wellspring. (Add space after the period) Tachyon Cutter is used as a secondary option move that is meant to hit foes which that are immune to Stored Power, (AC) such as Alolan Muk and Meowscarada, (AC) and it also bypasses gets rid of enemies with Focus Sash and Sturdy, (AC) such as Glimmora and Sturdy such as Ogerpon-C, (AC) respectively ornerstone. Focus Blast can also be used in place of Tachyon Cutter or Calm Mind to hit Steel-type foes, (AC) which resist Stored Power, (AC) and Dark-types foes, (AC) which are immune to Stored Power it. (Add period) However, (AC) but it is considered risky, (AC) as Focus Blast can miss. (separating it into two sentences allows the warning to be emphasized, and it also clarifies each idea) Once Weakness Policy is activated, (AC) it lets Focus Blast can eliminate special walls (both lowercase) such as Ting-Lu (Add hyphen) and Heatran when after they are mildly chipped. A Timid nature (lowercase) is preferred, (AC) since it lets Iron Crown outspeed Choice Scarf Dragapult after an Agility. (Add period) However, (AC) a while Modest nature (lowercase) can also be considered, (AC) as it still outspeeds Choice Scarf Meowscarada after an Agility, (AC) and at +2 Special Attack, Iron Crown can OHKO also OHKO's Heatran.

Deoxys-S and Scream Tail set (Add space) up entry hazards and dual screens, (AC) allowing in order to allow Iron Crown to survive hits and allow it to set (Add space) up successfully. Indeedee-M (Add hyphen) is immune (lowercase) to Ghost and sets Psychic Terrain for Iron Crown to prevent , (AC) shielding it from priority (lowercase) moves such as Ceruledge's Shadow Sneak from Ceruledge and Hisuian Samurott's Sucker Punch from Hisuian Samurott. It also provides Healing Wish support to bring Iron Crown back into shape if it gets worn down in the battle. Galarian Slowking assists Iron Crown by spreading poison through Toxic Spikes or Toxic, (AC) creating pressure on pressuring bulky special (lowercase) walls such as Ting-Lu, (AC) while also providing a pivot using pivoting with Chilly Reception. Hattrene Hatterene prevents foes from setting up hazards, (AC) allowing Iron Crown to come in safely, (AC) and can also help weaken while also weakening Dark-types. Iron Boulder heavily damages special walls that which trouble Iron Crown such as Heatran and Hisuian Goodra. Additionally, (AC) Iron Boulder checks Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon-H (Add hyphen) earthflame, Volcarona, (AC) and Cinderace (Remove semicolon) while also dissuading preventing Cinderace from using Court Change to steal dual screens using Court Change. Choice Specs Flutter Mane overwhelms Iron Crown, but Choice Scarf Iron Boulder outspeeds and removes it. Latios provides a switch-in to immunity to Ground-type moves thanks to its immunity to them, (AC) and it removes Dragon-type foes such as Gouging Fire and Walking Wake. Hoopa-U also helps in removing Ghost-types foes such as Gholdengo and Flutter Mane. Slowbro chips the opposing Fire-type threats such as Hisuian Aracanine (Remove semicolon) while also burning physical attackers (three lowercase), (AC) such as Barraskewda and Choice Band Excadrill, (AC) and setup (lowercase) sweepers, (AC) like Dragonite and Scizor, (AC) with Scald. Armarouge removes Steel-type threats that which resist Iron Crown's STAB moves, (AC) such as Forretress and Iron Treads, (AC) with the combination of Aura Sphere and Armor Cannon.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
Grammar checked by:
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Implemented, but I kept the Stored Power because Crown also carries a Steel typing, Dark foes are not completely immune thus writing immune to it doesnt make much sense to me. Person who GP's this please confirm me if I am wrong because I am not much into grammar.
 
Implemented, but I kept the Stored Power because Crown also carries a Steel typing, Dark foes are not completely immune thus writing immune to it doesnt make much sense to me. Person who GP's this please confirm me if I am wrong because I am not much into grammar.
which part specifically are you referring to here?

1/1 GP Team done credit both of us
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[SET]
Iron Crown @ Weakness Policy
Name: Double Dance Sweeper (Psychic)
Ability: Quark Drive
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 20 Atk
Timid / Modest Nature
- Calm Mind / Focus Blast
- Agility
- Stored Power
- Tachyon Cutter / Focus Blast

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Crown is an amazing Stored Power setup sweeper for Psychic due to its access to multiple useful setup moves, like Calm Mind and Agility, and a type combination that lets it activate Weakness Policy easily. On top of that, its typing means it's immune to Toxic and also has important resistances to types such as Dragon and Fairy. Calm Mind and Agility allow Iron Crown to boost its stats and Stored Power while also punishing opponents that play passively, trying to stall out dual screens. Behind dual screens, Iron Crown survives attacks like Fiery Dance from Choice Specs Iron Moth, Earth Power from Life Orb Landorus, and Knock Off from Alolan Muk, allowing it to capitalize on its weaknesses by activating Weakness Policy and boosting the power of Stored Power. And Additionally, after activating its Weakness Policy and using a single Agility, Iron Crown can take on walls like Skarmory and Galarian Slowking, OHKOing the former after Stealth Rock damage and 2HKOing the latter; similarly, in this position, it makes quick work of offensive foes like Choice Band Dragapult, Landorus-T, and Ogerpon-H and -W. Tachyon Cutter is a secondary move that is meant to hit foes that are immune to Stored Power, such as Alolan Muk and Meowscarada, and it also bypasses enemies with Focus Sash and Sturdy, such as Glimmora and Ogerpon-C, respectively. Focus Blast can be used in place of Tachyon Cutter or Calm Mind to hit Steel-type foes, which resist Stored Power, and Dark-types Dark-type foes (or Dark-types), which are immune to Stored Power it. However, it is considered risky, as Focus Blast can miss. Once Weakness Policy is activated, Focus Blast can eliminate special walls such as Ting-Lu and Heatran after they are mildly chipped. However, it is considered risky, as Focus Blast can miss. (grouping the positives and negatives together) A Timid nature is preferred, since it lets Iron Crown outspeed Choice Scarf Dragapult after an Agility. However, a Modest nature can also be considered, as it still outspeeds Choice Scarf Meowscarada after an Agility, and at +2 Special Attack, Iron Crown can OHKO Heatran.

Deoxys-S and Scream Tail set up entry hazards and dual screens, allowing Iron Crown to survive hits and set up successfully. Indeedee-M is immune to Ghost and sets Psychic Terrain for Iron Crown, shielding it from priority moves such as Ceruledge's Shadow Sneak and Hisuian Samurott's Sucker Punch. It also provides Healing Wish support to bring Iron Crown back into shape if it gets worn down in the battle. Galarian Slowking assists Iron Crown by spreading poison through Toxic Spikes or Toxic, pressuring bulky special walls such as Ting-Lu, while also providing pivoting with Chilly Reception. Hatterene prevents foes from setting up hazards, allowing Iron Crown to come in safely, and it can also help weaken Dark-types. Iron Boulder heavily damages special walls that trouble Iron Crown such as Heatran and Hisuian Goodra. Additionally, Iron Boulder checks Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon-H, Volcarona, and Cinderace (does the cind mention have to be here as well as in the 'while also' part that's specifically about it) while also dissuading Cinderace from using Court Change to steal dual screens. Choice Specs Flutter Mane overwhelms Iron Crown, but Choice Scarf Iron Boulder outspeeds it and removes it. Latios provides a switch-in to Ground-type moves thanks to its immunity to them, and it removes Dragon-type foes such as Gouging Fire and Walking Wake. Hoopa-U helps in removing Ghost-types foes such as Gholdengo and Flutter Mane. Slowbro chips opposing Fire-type threats such as HisuianAracanine Arcanine while also burning physical attackers, such as Barraskewda and Choice Band Excadrill, and setup sweepers, like Dragonite and Scizor, with Scald. Armarouge removes Steel-type threats that resist Iron Crown's STAB moves, such as Forretress and Iron Treads, with the combination of Aura Sphere and Armor Cannon.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
Grammar checked by:
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which part specifically are you referring to here?

1/1 GP Team done credit both of us
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[SET]
Iron Crown @ Weakness Policy
Name: Double Dance Sweeper (Psychic)
Ability: Quark Drive
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 20 Atk
Timid / Modest Nature
- Calm Mind / Focus Blast
- Agility
- Stored Power
- Tachyon Cutter / Focus Blast

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Crown is an amazing Stored Power setup sweeper for Psychic due to its access to multiple useful setup moves, like Calm Mind and Agility, and a type combination that lets it activate Weakness Policy easily. On top of that, its typing means it's immune to Toxic and also has important resistances to types such as Dragon and Fairy. Calm Mind and Agility allow Iron Crown to boost its stats and Stored Power while also punishing opponents that play passively, trying to stall out dual screens. Behind dual screens, Iron Crown survives attacks like Fiery Dance from Choice Specs Iron Moth, Earth Power from Life Orb Landorus, and Knock Off from Alolan Muk, allowing it to capitalize on its weaknesses by activating Weakness Policy and boosting the power of Stored Power. And Additionally, after activating its Weakness Policy and using a single Agility, Iron Crown can take on walls like Skarmory and Galarian Slowking, OHKOing the former after Stealth Rock damage and 2HKOing the latter; similarly, in this position, it makes quick work of offensive foes like Choice Band Dragapult, Landorus-T, and Ogerpon-H and -W. Tachyon Cutter is a secondary move that is meant to hit foes that are immune to Stored Power, such as Alolan Muk and Meowscarada, and it also bypasses enemies with Focus Sash and Sturdy, such as Glimmora and Ogerpon-C, respectively. Focus Blast can be used in place of Tachyon Cutter or Calm Mind to hit Steel-type foes, which resist Stored Power, and Dark-types Dark-type foes (or Dark-types), which are immune to Stored Power it. However, it is considered risky, as Focus Blast can miss. Once Weakness Policy is activated, Focus Blast can eliminate special walls such as Ting-Lu and Heatran after they are mildly chipped. However, it is considered risky, as Focus Blast can miss. (grouping the positives and negatives together) A Timid nature is preferred, since it lets Iron Crown outspeed Choice Scarf Dragapult after an Agility. However, a Modest nature can also be considered, as it still outspeeds Choice Scarf Meowscarada after an Agility, and at +2 Special Attack, Iron Crown can OHKO Heatran.

Deoxys-S and Scream Tail set up entry hazards and dual screens, allowing Iron Crown to survive hits and set up successfully. Indeedee-M is immune to Ghost and sets Psychic Terrain for Iron Crown, shielding it from priority moves such as Ceruledge's Shadow Sneak and Hisuian Samurott's Sucker Punch. It also provides Healing Wish support to bring Iron Crown back into shape if it gets worn down in the battle. Galarian Slowking assists Iron Crown by spreading poison through Toxic Spikes or Toxic, pressuring bulky special walls such as Ting-Lu, while also providing pivoting with Chilly Reception. Hatterene prevents foes from setting up hazards, allowing Iron Crown to come in safely, and it can also help weaken Dark-types. Iron Boulder heavily damages special walls that trouble Iron Crown such as Heatran and Hisuian Goodra. Additionally, Iron Boulder checks Fire-type threats such as Ogerpon-H, Volcarona, and Cinderace (does the cind mention have to be here as well as in the 'while also' part that's specifically about it) while also dissuading Cinderace from using Court Change to steal dual screens. Choice Specs Flutter Mane overwhelms Iron Crown, but Choice Scarf Iron Boulder outspeeds it and removes it. Latios provides a switch-in to Ground-type moves thanks to its immunity to them, and it removes Dragon-type foes such as Gouging Fire and Walking Wake. Hoopa-U helps in removing Ghost-types foes such as Gholdengo and Flutter Mane. Slowbro chips opposing Fire-type threats such as HisuianAracanine Arcanine while also burning physical attackers, such as Barraskewda and Choice Band Excadrill, and setup sweepers, like Dragonite and Scizor, with Scald. Armarouge removes Steel-type threats that resist Iron Crown's STAB moves, such as Forretress and Iron Treads, with the combination of Aura Sphere and Armor Cannon.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
Grammar checked by:
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Implemented, No problems You also crossed it maybe it's wrong. Also keeping the Cinderace line because screens are mandatory for Crown so their important interactiona are must to add.
 
Implemented, No problems You also crossed it maybe it's wrong. Also keeping the Cinderace line because screens are mandatory for Crown so their important interactiona are must to add.
I removed it because you had both Stored Power and it in the same sentence - you only need one

Focus Blast can be used in place of Tachyon Cutter or Calm Mind to hit Steel-type foes, which resist Stored Power, and Dark-type foes, which are immune to Stored Power it.

You only need one subject, not two, so both of

Focus Blast can be used in place of Tachyon Cutter or Calm Mind to hit Steel-type foes, which resist Stored Power, and Dark-type foes, which are immune to Stored Power.

and

Focus Blast can be used in place of Tachyon Cutter or Calm Mind to hit Steel-type foes, which resist Stored Power, and Dark-type foes, which are immune to it.

are grammatically correct.

the reason the “it” is better than saying stored power there is to avoid repeating “steel-types, which resist stored power, and dark-types, which are immune to stored power”. the “it” is clear and refers to stored power (not tachyon cutter) because you’re talking about focus blast being an alt option to synergise with stored power, so the resistances/immunities to tachyon cutter don’t affect the sentence
 
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