RU Rain Sweeper Overqwil [GP 1/1]

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[SET]
name: Rain Sweeper
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Gunk Shot
move 3: Crunch
move 4: Liquidation
item: Life Orb
ability: Swift Swim
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Water

[SET COMMENTS]
Overqwil is a ferocious wallbreaker that utilizes its ability Swift Swim in rain to outspeed the entire unboosted RU metagame. Rain-boosted Liquidation allows Overqwil to hit Pokemon such as Krookodile and Hippowdon for super effective damage, both of which would otherwise check it. Swords Dance allows Overqwil to secure OHKOs against Pokemon such as Choice Specs Hisuian Goodra, Galarian-Weezing, and Vaporeon. Liquidation in conjunction with Tera Water allows Overqwil to OHKO Krookodile and 2HKO Hippowdon. Life Orb is used to guarantee an OHKO on Cyclizar and a 2HKO on Slowbro.

This Overqwil set is exclusively used on rain teams. Rain teams appreciate Overqwil’s ability to break through common rain answers like Vaporeon, Volcanion, and Hisuian Goodra. They also appreciate Overqwil being able to wear down other weather setters such as Hippowdon. Overqwil also resists common priority moves like Bisharp's Sucker Punch and Mimikyu's Shadow Sneak, which would otherwise be threatening to rain teams. Swift Swim sweepers like Barraskewda appreciate their checks in Volcanion and Chesnaught being worn down by Overqwil. Overqwil mandates partners like Politoed to set up rain for its Swift Swim, and it appreciates Pokemon such as Basculegion-F, Close Combat Barraskewda, Volcanion, and Fighting types like Slither Wing to pressure Steel-type foes such as Registeel, Empoleon, and Bisharp, which check unboosted Overqwil. Overquil appreciates pivot support from Pokemon such as Kilowattrel, Barraskewda, and Jirachi to get on the field safely. Overqwil and its partners are vulnerable to being revenged killed by Gardevoir, so special tanks such as Jirachi and Empoleon are appreciated.
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[SET]

name: Rain Sweeper

move 1: Gunk Shot
move 2: Crunch
move 3: Liquidation
move 4: Swords dance
item: Life Orb
ability: Swift Swim
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk/ 4 Def/ 252 Spe
tera type: Water

[SET COMMENTS]
Overqwil is a ferocious breaker that utilizes its ability Swift Swim in rain to outspeed the entire unboosted RU metagame. Life Orb is used as the item as it is able to give it an immediate power boost to all of its moves. Although it lacks many coverage options, Overqwil has Liquidation for water Water-type coverage which is also boosted by rain that allows it to hit Pokémon such as Krookodile and Hippowdon for super-effective damage—both of which would otherwise check it. It’s STAB such as Crunch can be bolstered by Fluff, plus SD boosts non-STAB moves Swords dance Dance securing secures an OHKO on Pokémon such as Choice Specs Hisuian Goodra when boosted by Swords Dance at +2 Attack. Additionally, boosting Gunk Shot to OHKO Vaporeon. Additionally, Liquidation can be used in conjunction with Tera Water which further boosts its power. Which allows Liquidation to go from a 2HKO to a OHKO on Krookodile and a 3HKO to a 2HKO on Hippowdon respectively.



This Overqwil set is exclusively on rain teams. Rain teams appreciates Overqwil’s ability to break through common rain answers such as Vaporeon, Volcanion, and Goodra-Hisui Hisuian Goodra. Overqwil being able to outspeed the entire unboosted RU metagame means it’s harder to revenge kill, even resisting common priority such as Bisharp Sucker Punch. Not relevant to team discussion. Rain teams also appreciates Overqwil being able to wear down other weather setters such as Hippowdon for rain. Other rain Pokémon such as Barraskewda appreciates it’s checks such as Volcanion and Vaporeon being worn down by Overqwil. Overqwil appreciates partners such as Politoed to set up rain for its Swift Swim, and it appreciates Pokémon such as Basculegion-F to pressure Pokemon such as Registeel which checks non Swords Dance-boosted Overqwil. Add how pivot support can help Overqwil enter the field. Additionally, Liquidation can be used in conjunction with Tera Water which further boosts its power. Which allows Liquidation to go from a 2HKO to a OHKO on Krookodile and A 3HKO to a 2HKO on Hippowdon respectively. These sentences belong in the first paragraph as they discuss the set.

[SET CREDITS]
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[SET]

name: Rain Sweeper
move 1: Gunk Shot Move order should be 1. SD 2. Crunch 3. Gunk 4. Liquidation as stated in the reservation index
move 2: Crunch
move 3: Liquidation
move 4: Swords dance
item: Life Orb
ability: Swift Swim
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Water

[SET COMMENTS]
Overqwil is a ferocious wallbreaker that utilizes its ability Swift Swim in rain to outspeed the entire unboosted RU metagame. Life Orb is used as the item as it is able to give it an immediate power boost to all of its moves dex info, you can instead talk about it guaranteeing stuff like an OHKO on cyclizar and a 2hko on slowbro. LO sentence should go after moves, order is moves -> item -> others; take a look at the format Overqwil has Liquidation for Water-type coverage which is also boosted by rain that allows it to hit Pokémon such as Krookodile and Hippowdon for super-effective damage—both of which would otherwise check it. Swords Dance secures OHKOs on Pokemon Such such as Choice Specs Hisuian Goodra, Galarian Weezing, and Vaporeon at +2 attack. Additionally, boosting Gunk Shot to OHKO Vaporeon. Liquidation can be used in conjunction with Tera Water which further boosts its power. <- combine these two sentences -> Which allows Liquidation to go from a 2HKO to a OHKO on Krookodile and A 3HKO to a 2HKO on Hippowdon respectively.


This Overqwil set is exclusively on rain teams. Rain teams appreciate Overqwil’s ability to break through common rain answers such as Vaporeon, Volcanion, and Hisuian Goodra. Rain teams also appreciate Overqwil being able to wear down other weather setters such as Hippowdon for rain. Other rain Pokémon Swift Swim sweepers such as Barraskewda appreciates it’s checks such as Volcanion and Vaporeon Chesnaught being worn down by Overqwil. Overqwil appreciate partners such as Politoed to set up rain for its Swift Swim, and it appreciates Pokémon such as Basculegion-F to pressure Pokemon such as Registeel expand this to talk about steel-types in general since bisharp, empo, and regi all pose a problem to overqwil, and volcanion and cc barra, as well as bulky fighting-types like slither wing, are appreciated to take them down which checks non Swords Dance-boosted Overqwil. Mention that overqwil resists common priority like bisharp sucker punch and mimikyu shadow sneak that could otherwise make short work of rain teams Overwquil appreciates pivot support from Pokemon such as Kilowattrel, Barraskewda, and Jirachi to get in safely. Add that overqwil and its swift swim partners are vulnerable to getting revenge killed by gardevoir, so a special tank like jirachi or empoleon is helpful.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/wildfiree.542295/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/machjacob.555741/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sir-tetris.655207/
Grammar checked by:

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[SET]

name: Rain Sweeper

move 1: Swords dance Dance
move 2: Gunk Shot
move 3: Crunch
move 4: Liquidation
item: Life Orb
ability: Swift Swim
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk/4SpD/ 252 Spe 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Water

[SET COMMENTS]
Overqwil is a ferocious wallbreaker that utilizes its ability Swift Swim in rain to outspeed the entire unboosted RU metagame. Overqwil has Rain-boosted Liquidation for Water-type coverage which is also boosted by rain that allows it allow Overqwil to hit Pokémon Pokemonsuch as Krookodile and Hippowdon for super-effective super effective damage—, (AC) both of which would otherwise check it. Swords Dance secures allows Overqwil to secure OHKOs on (Swords Dance itself doesn't secure OHKOs, rather it allows Overqwil to do so) against Pokemon such as Choice Specs Hisuian Goodra, (AS)Galarian-Weezing, (AS)and Vaporeon at +2 (implied) . Liquidation can be used in conjunction with Tera Water which further boosts its power which allows Liquidation Overqwil to go from a 2HKO to a OHKO on Krookodile and A 3HKO to a 2HKO on Hippowdon respectively. Life Orb is used as the item, (AC) as it secures guarantees an OHKO on Cyclizar and a 2HKO on Slowbro.

This Overqwil set is used exclusively on rain teams. Rain teams appreciate Overqwil’s ability to break through common rain answers like (vary usage of introductory terms, as "such as" is used repeatedly throughout) Vaporeon, Volcanion, and Hisuian Goodra. Rain teams They also appreciate Overqwil being able to wear down other weather setters, (AC) such as Hippowdon. Overqwil also resists common priority moves like Bisharp's Sucker Punch and Mimikyu's Shadow Sneak, which would otherwise be threatening to Rain teams. (I moved this sentence here because it did not make sense structurally to have it below. Here, it emphasizes why Overqwil is used on rain before discussing potential partners. Alternatively, it could be placed after the next sentence discussing Swift Swim Sweepers) Other Swift Swim Sweepers such as like Barraskewda appreciates it’s appreciate their checks such as in Volcanion and (RS)Chesnaught being worn down by Overqwil. Overqwil appreciates mandates (in keeping with Overqwil only being used on rain) partners such as like Politoed to set up rain for its Swift Swim, and it appreciate appreciates Pokémon Pokemon such as Basculegion-F,(RS) Barraskewda with Close Combat Barraskewda(RS), (AS)Volcanion, and bulky Fighting types such as Fighting-types like Slither Wing to pressure Steel Steel-type Pokemon foes such as Registeel, Empoleon(RS), (AS)and Bisharp,Bisharp which checks non Swords Dance-boosted check unboosted Overqwil. Overqwil resists common priority such as Bisharp Sucker Punch and Mimikyu Shadow Sneak, Which would otherwise be threatening to Rain teams. Overwquil appreciate Overqwil appreciates pivot support from Pokemon such as like Kilowattrel, (AS)Barraskewda, and Jirachi to get in on the field (less casual) safely. Overqwil and its partners are vulnerable to getting revenged being revenge killed by Gardevoir, (AC) so special tanks such as Jirachi and Empoleon are appreciated.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/wildfiree.542295/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/machjacob.555741/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sir-tetris.655207/
Grammar checked by:

Wanted to mention that there a lot of errors with spacing. I tried to catch all of them but I may have missed a few, but it is important to only use one space between words, and in regards to comma spacing, to always have a space before the comma but never before.
For example: I went to the store and bought cheese, crackers, and milk. There is a space before crackers and "and" but not after cheese or after crackers.

To the GP team member who checks this
In regards to such as, can you comment on comma usage surrounding the term? It seems it should be used if the clause is non-essential?
Additionally, what is considered "too casual" when writing?
Finally, what are terms other than "such as" or "like" that can be used to introduce a list of Pokemon?
 
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[SET]

name: Rain Sweeper

move 1: Swords dance Dance
move 2: Gunk Shot
move 3: Crunch
move 4: Liquidation
item: Life Orb
ability: Swift Swim
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk/4SpD/ 252 Spe 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Water

[SET COMMENTS]
Overqwil is a ferocious wallbreaker that utilizes its ability Swift Swim in rain to outspeed the entire unboosted RU metagame. Overqwil has Rain-boosted Liquidation for Water-type coverage which is also boosted by rain that allows it allow Overqwil to hit Pokémon Pokemonsuch as Krookodile and Hippowdon for super-effective super effective damage—, (AC) both of which would otherwise check it. Swords Dance secures allows Overqwil to secure OHKOs on (Swords Dance itself doesn't secure OHKOs, rather it allows Overqwil to do so) against Pokemon such as Choice Specs Hisuian Goodra, (AS)Galarian-Weezing, (AS)and Vaporeon at +2 (implied) . Liquidation can be used in conjunction with Tera Water which further boosts its power which allows Liquidation Overqwil to go from a 2HKO to a OHKO on Krookodile and A 3HKO to a 2HKO on Hippowdon respectively. Life Orb is used as the item, (AC) as it secures guarantees an OHKO on Cyclizar and a 2HKO on Slowbro.

This Overqwil set is used exclusively on rain teams. Rain teams appreciate Overqwil’s ability to break through common rain answers like (vary usage of introductory terms, as "such as" is used repeatedly throughout) Vaporeon, Volcanion, and Hisuian Goodra. Rain teams They also appreciate Overqwil being able to wear down other weather setters, (AC) such as Hippowdon. Overqwil also resists common priority moves like Bisharp's Sucker Punch and Mimikyu's Shadow Sneak, which would otherwise be threatening to Rain teams. (I moved this sentence here because it did not make sense structurally to have it below. Here, it emphasizes why Overqwil is used on rain before discussing potential partners. Alternatively, it could be placed after the next sentence discussing Swift Swim Sweepers) Other Swift Swim Sweepers such as like Barraskewda appreciates it’s appreciate their checks such as in Volcanion and (RS)Chesnaught being worn down by Overqwil. Overqwil appreciates mandates (in keeping with Overqwil only being used on rain) partners such as like Politoed to set up rain for its Swift Swim, and it appreciate appreciates Pokémon Pokemon such as Basculegion-F,(RS) Barraskewda with Close Combat Barraskewda(RS), (AS)Volcanion, and bulky Fighting types such as Fighting-types like Slither Wing to pressure Steel Steel-type Pokemon foes such as Registeel, Empoleon(RS), (AS)and Bisharp,Bisharp which checks non Swords Dance-boosted check unboosted Overqwil. Overqwil resists common priority such as Bisharp Sucker Punch and Mimikyu Shadow Sneak, Which would otherwise be threatening to Rain teams. Overwquil appreciate Overqwil appreciates pivot support from Pokemon such as like Kilowattrel, (AS)Barraskewda, and Jirachi to get in on the field (less casual) safely. Overqwil and its partners are vulnerable to getting revenged being revenge killed by Gardevoir, (AC) so special tanks such as Jirachi and Empoleon are appreciated.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/wildfiree.542295/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/machjacob.555741/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sir-tetris.655207/
Grammar checked by:

Wanted to mention that there a lot of errors with spacing. I tried to catch all of them but I may have missed a few, but it is important to only use one space between words, and in regards to comma spacing, to always have a space before the comma but never before.
For example: I went to the store and bought cheese, crackers, and milk. There is a space before crackers and "and" but not after cheese or after crackers.

To the GP team member who checks this
In regards to such as, can you comment on comma usage surrounding the term? It seems it should be used if the clause is non-essential?
Additionally, what is considered "too casual" when writing?
Finally, what are terms other than "such as" or "like" that can be used to introduce a list of Pokemon?
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[SET]
name: Rain Sweeper (remove line break above and below set name)
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Gunk Shot
move 3: Crunch
move 4: Liquidation
item: Life Orb
ability: Swift Swim (remove space before Swift)
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Water

[SET COMMENTS]
Overqwil is a ferocious wallbreaker that utilizes its ability Swift Swim in rain to outspeed the entire unboosted RU metagame. Rain-boosted Liquidation allow allows Overqwil to hit Pokemon such as Krookodile and Hippowdon for super effective damage, both of which would otherwise check it. Swords Dance allows Overqwil to secure OHKOs against Pokemon such as Choice Specs Hisuian Goodra, Galarian-Weezing, and Vaporeon. Liquidation in conjunction with Tera Water which allow allows Overqwil to OHKO Krookodile and 2HKO Hippowdon. Life Orb is used as the item, as it guarantees to guarantee an OHKO on Cyclizar and a 2HKO on Slowbro. (remove extra line breaks before next paragraph)

This Overqwil set is exclusively used on rain teams. Rain teams appreciate Overqwil’s ability to break through common rain answers like Vaporeon, Volcanion, and Hisuian Goodra. They also appreciate Overqwil being able to wear down other weather setters such as Hippowdon. Overqwil also resists common priority moves like Bisharp's Sucker Punch and Mimikyu's Shadow Sneak, which would otherwise be threatening to Rain rain teams. Swift Swim Sweepers sweepers like Barraskewda appreciate their checks in Volcanion and Chesnaught being worn down by Overqwil. Overqwil mandates partners like Politoed to set up rain for its Swift Swim, and it appreciates Pokemon such as Basculegion-F, Close Combat Barraskewda, Volcanion, and Fighting-types (ah) like Slither Wing to pressure Steel-type foes such as Registeel, Empoleon, and Bisharp, (ac) which checks check unboosted Overqwil. Overwquil Overqwil appreciates pivot support from Pokemon such as Kilowattrel, Barraskewda, and Jirachi to get on the field safely. Overqwil and its partners are vulnerable to being revenged killed by Gardevoir, so special tanks such as Jirachi and Empoleon are appreciated.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/wildfiree.542295/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/machjacob.555741/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sir-tetris.655207/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/clouds.356215/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/danbear02.589016/
be sure to check for my notes regarding extra spaces and line breaks; let me know if you have any questions
added credits for both myself and dan, GP Team done

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[SET]
name: Rain Sweeper (remove line break above and below set name)
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Gunk Shot
move 3: Crunch
move 4: Liquidation
item: Life Orb
ability: Swift Swim (remove space before Swift)
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Water

[SET COMMENTS]
Overqwil is a ferocious wallbreaker that utilizes its ability Swift Swim in rain to outspeed the entire unboosted RU metagame. Rain-boosted Liquidation allow allows Overqwil to hit Pokemon such as Krookodile and Hippowdon for super effective damage, both of which would otherwise check it. Swords Dance allows Overqwil to secure OHKOs against Pokemon such as Choice Specs Hisuian Goodra, Galarian-Weezing, and Vaporeon. Liquidation in conjunction with Tera Water which allow allows Overqwil to OHKO Krookodile and 2HKO Hippowdon. Life Orb is used as the item, as it guarantees to guarantee an OHKO on Cyclizar and a 2HKO on Slowbro. (remove extra line breaks before next paragraph)

This Overqwil set is exclusively used on rain teams. Rain teams appreciate Overqwil’s ability to break through common rain answers like Vaporeon, Volcanion, and Hisuian Goodra. They also appreciate Overqwil being able to wear down other weather setters such as Hippowdon. Overqwil also resists common priority moves like Bisharp's Sucker Punch and Mimikyu's Shadow Sneak, which would otherwise be threatening to Rain rain teams. Swift Swim Sweepers sweepers like Barraskewda appreciate their checks in Volcanion and Chesnaught being worn down by Overqwil. Overqwil mandates partners like Politoed to set up rain for its Swift Swim, and it appreciates Pokemon such as Basculegion-F, Close Combat Barraskewda, Volcanion, and Fighting-types (ah) like Slither Wing to pressure Steel-type foes such as Registeel, Empoleon, and Bisharp, (ac) which checks check unboosted Overqwil. Overwquil Overqwil appreciates pivot support from Pokemon such as Kilowattrel, Barraskewda, and Jirachi to get on the field safely. Overqwil and its partners are vulnerable to being revenged killed by Gardevoir, so special tanks such as Jirachi and Empoleon are appreciated.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/wildfiree.542295/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/machjacob.555741/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sir-tetris.655207/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/clouds.356215/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/danbear02.589016/
be sure to check for my notes regarding extra spaces and line breaks; let me know if you have any questions
added credits for both myself and dan, GP Team done

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