sub review and vetoes again, you know how it is
As stated in the OP, during the Veto / Review Phase, we'll give people a chance to fix potentially broken or extremely weak submissions. Any sub that's vetoed and isn't appropriately nerfed/buffed/replaced will not be eligible for voting. New submissions can be made and all submissions can be edited during the Veto / Review Phase, but note that newly added things can be vetoed without warning if they are too strong or too weak.
Additionally, this is also a sub review, I'll also be giving feedback on all subs, not just vetoed ones. These are just my opinion, so unless it is a veto, it's up to you whether or not you take my advice. You'll know if something would get vetoed if I put the word Veto in Bold in the review.
Not the most interesting thing in the world, but should be effective all the same, can't argue with Water/Electric STAB with all the coverage it needs
I was originally gonna do something very similar to this so I can't not like it
Already briefly reviewed on Discord but yeah I really like this one, good Tera Type choice, good flavor, good stat distribution, and I personally really like Toxic Chain, all around very good
Already talked with you about this a little but now that you've removed the signature move, it should be a great Offensive Utility mon with it being able to provide constant HP and status healing, being balanced by not having recovery and only being able to pivot with Volt Switch. Revival Blessing also sounds fun, since you can potentially bring a mon from dead to 75% if you switch to it
Was initially scared about this but its Dark STAB being weak and it still lacking good coverage moves keeps this very much in check. Should be a good fast pivot that messes with stuff with Valiant, it's good
I'm not gonna 100% say that this would get vetoed but without high Speed or a boosting ability like a lot of other subs, Mabosstiff's stats are a bit too low for this. I think this thing is mainly lacking in power, so I think just making the TeraForm Dark/Ghost and giving it Shadow Sneak should help with that, makes Poltergeist a nuke and Sneak gives it really good revenge killing potential
This one is interesting, that first Double Shock per switch-in does absolutely silly amounts of damage but you need to really have your predictions down to get anything out of it since you weaken yourself fast. Likely needs a bit more SpA to make that vision of it being a mixed attacker come true, like ~95-100, as well as Aura Sphere as an alternative to Focus Blast, and leaning into the mixed attacking identity makes it unique and makes the burden of prediction less serious
Should be an okay fast utility mon, it is quite lacking in power outside of Electric moves, so Ground-types are always a big answer to it esp since they're immune to Nuzzle. May want to bump up Attack a bit or maybe add a way to paralyze Ground-types so they have to risk getting crippled or owned by boosted coverage
Should alright, meh defensive typing but it's super fat and Grassy Surge is a big enough reason to want to drop Regen to justify
I was gonna post a calc of Stakeout-boosted Crunch doing a million damage to Great Tusk and leave the review at that but it only does like 40% so nvm lol (Play Rough nukes it at least). Should be a alright breaker, its Speed tier really helps it out by forcing fast offensive mons out so you get the Stakeout-boosted damage, since its Attack is still low enough that fat stuff still kinda blanks it
I was originally gonna do Tera Stellar Contrary Hydrapple, would've been very funny. This is a much more viable version of that since it has an actual defensive typing, Leaf Storm/Draco/Earth Power/Recover as a bulky wincon sounds very effective, we're lucky it's still so slow (could even argue that it should be slower)
Definitely will be effective, two turns to get a Hone Claws and a Trailblaze off makes for easy sweeps, but you're opponent does need to give you those two turns first so it should be fine (plus the longer you wait to Tera to get setup opportunities, the longer you don't have Simple)
Very funny gimmick I approve of. Fake Out technically wouldn't activate the ability with the way it's worded, since the move is still able to be clicked but will fail (same with Last Resort), but since you specified it I would code it so that they would count, so no worries there
This should be good, Spin-immune Spiker that eats Knock in Great Tusk's OU is pretty huge, though I'm not sure if I get how Eviction works. Does the mon get forced out before or after the move is used? If it's the former, that sounds kinda insane but the later sounds just alright. Also, Mabosstiff already gets Pain Split
And that's all! I might extend submissions a little bit both to get more subs and to get the end of the slate closer to next weekend, when we'll be having our first playtesting roomtours, but I'll let you all know by tomorrow. In the meantime, keep the submissions coming!
As stated in the OP, during the Veto / Review Phase, we'll give people a chance to fix potentially broken or extremely weak submissions. Any sub that's vetoed and isn't appropriately nerfed/buffed/replaced will not be eligible for voting. New submissions can be made and all submissions can be edited during the Veto / Review Phase, but note that newly added things can be vetoed without warning if they are too strong or too weak.
Additionally, this is also a sub review, I'll also be giving feedback on all subs, not just vetoed ones. These are just my opinion, so unless it is a veto, it's up to you whether or not you take my advice. You'll know if something would get vetoed if I put the word Veto in Bold in the review.
Not the most interesting thing in the world, but should be effective all the same, can't argue with Water/Electric STAB with all the coverage it needsI was originally gonna do something very similar to this so I can't not like itAlready briefly reviewed on Discord but yeah I really like this one, good Tera Type choice, good flavor, good stat distribution, and I personally really like Toxic Chain, all around very goodAlready talked with you about this a little but now that you've removed the signature move, it should be a great Offensive Utility mon with it being able to provide constant HP and status healing, being balanced by not having recovery and only being able to pivot with Volt Switch. Revival Blessing also sounds fun, since you can potentially bring a mon from dead to 75% if you switch to itWas initially scared about this but its Dark STAB being weak and it still lacking good coverage moves keeps this very much in check. Should be a good fast pivot that messes with stuff with Valiant, it's goodI'm not gonna 100% say that this would get vetoed but without high Speed or a boosting ability like a lot of other subs, Mabosstiff's stats are a bit too low for this. I think this thing is mainly lacking in power, so I think just making the TeraForm Dark/Ghost and giving it Shadow Sneak should help with that, makes Poltergeist a nuke and Sneak gives it really good revenge killing potentialyeah these are pretty good, you should remember to replace hydrapple with something else if you think of something though
This one is interesting, that first Double Shock per switch-in does absolutely silly amounts of damage but you need to really have your predictions down to get anything out of it since you weaken yourself fast. Likely needs a bit more SpA to make that vision of it being a mixed attacker come true, like ~95-100, as well as Aura Sphere as an alternative to Focus Blast, and leaning into the mixed attacking identity makes it unique and makes the burden of prediction less seriousShould be an okay fast utility mon, it is quite lacking in power outside of Electric moves, so Ground-types are always a big answer to it esp since they're immune to Nuzzle. May want to bump up Attack a bit or maybe add a way to paralyze Ground-types so they have to risk getting crippled or owned by boosted coverageShould alright, meh defensive typing but it's super fat and Grassy Surge is a big enough reason to want to drop Regen to justifyI was gonna post a calc of Stakeout-boosted Crunch doing a million damage to Great Tusk and leave the review at that but it only does like 40% so nvm lol (Play Rough nukes it at least). Should be a alright breaker, its Speed tier really helps it out by forcing fast offensive mons out so you get the Stakeout-boosted damage, since its Attack is still low enough that fat stuff still kinda blanks itI was originally gonna do Tera Stellar Contrary Hydrapple, would've been very funny. This is a much more viable version of that since it has an actual defensive typing, Leaf Storm/Draco/Earth Power/Recover as a bulky wincon sounds very effective, we're lucky it's still so slow (could even argue that it should be slower)Definitely will be effective, two turns to get a Hone Claws and a Trailblaze off makes for easy sweeps, but you're opponent does need to give you those two turns first so it should be fine (plus the longer you wait to Tera to get setup opportunities, the longer you don't have Simple)Very funny gimmick I approve of. Fake Out technically wouldn't activate the ability with the way it's worded, since the move is still able to be clicked but will fail (same with Last Resort), but since you specified it I would code it so that they would count, so no worries thereThis should be good, Spin-immune Spiker that eats Knock in Great Tusk's OU is pretty huge, though I'm not sure if I get how Eviction works. Does the mon get forced out before or after the move is used? If it's the former, that sounds kinda insane but the later sounds just alright. Also, Mabosstiff already gets Pain SplitAnd that's all! I might extend submissions a little bit both to get more subs and to get the end of the slate closer to next weekend, when we'll be having our first playtesting roomtours, but I'll let you all know by tomorrow. In the meantime, keep the submissions coming!
Haven't seen either of these yet but, aside from TealPon being nerfed from being item-locked now, these function the same as they do in vanilla OU
Might be the best TeraForm but like it's Ogerpon-Wellspring, we knew this would happen lol. Very splashable as, along with Rockpon, you don't have to commit to Terastallizing it when building your team since its so good before it Teras. Honestly, the actual TeraForm isn't nearly as big of a buff as all the new TeraForms are, but it still gets to rank so high by default since it's on an extremely good mon. Council will keep our eyes on this thing as the meta goes on, but currently I don't find it anymore overwhelming than it is in regular OU, just that it'll be more common
Feels kinda awkward to use so far, not having Boots sucks pre-Tera but Unaware is such a good ability that it's hard to give up in some matchups. Owns Ogerpon-W at least, but that's it. Probably the worst new TeraForm right now but it's not the end of the world since every other one feels good, Dirge probably just needs more time
Also hasn't gotten much shine in battles so far but, even moreso than Dirge, give this some time and it'll start cooking, I believe. Samu is another mon that hates losing Boots in order to use this, but at least you can save your Tera until you actually need the Speed and Samu is the second best base form of a mon that can Tera, so this thing is in a good place
One of the best TeraForms and most buffed base form by far, Wish goes crazy on Tink and Flip Turn is amazing in combination with Gigaton Hammer and other stuff like Encore. Has generational 4MSS now but you should be able to figure it out
Definitely need to see this more but right now I feel like I underrated this when I sub reviewed Slate 2, Blissey with actual offensive presence is pretty darn good. It's like if Life Orb Clefable traded Magic Guard for better stats, the same type Tera boost hits like crack
Hilarious mon, I DEFINITELY underrated this mon when I sub reviewed it, dual STABs do crazy damage while Surge Surfer gives you infinite Speed and you get to support Iron Crown and Valiant at the same time. Only huge weakness is relying on landing an Arcane Rush after terrain ends to get your power and Speed back, so if you're up against this demon, either leverage your Fairy-type since Rising Voltage does nothing without terrain or apply enough offensive pressure to force Pinch to switch or die before getting Terrain back up
From the TeraForm with the lowest stats to the one with the highest stats. This one 100% needs more time but shockingly it hasn't impressed me as much as I thought it would so far, mainly from how it competes with Kingambit as a fat priority-spamming Steel-type and how easy it is to wear down and undermine that insane bulk. But like Skeledirge, it should be fine in the end
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Poisoning stuff with Toxic Chain/Toxic Spikes and then Tera'ing lategame to smash stuff with crits is a sick concept, plus Dark is great Okidogi, I like this a lot
Good and simple, should be fine on fat teams
I know from the lack of a description that you probably didn't have many ideas here but I can almost see some vision here, Hoopa's stats are so insane that you don't need to boost its offenses and can focus on bulk or Speed while giving it a STAB Tera makes it still offensively threatening (tough Tera Dark would definitely be better, but your Tera Dark sub is already great so this is fine). With Hoopa's best set right now being Assault Vest, you could maybe lean more into adding bulk, probably not TOO much on either side since its poor physical bulk is a big reason why Hoopa is balanced, but maybe something like 90 Defense and 140 SpD could work. It's also up to you whether to keep that Speed boost or not, outspeeding Gholdengo and Great Tusk is amazing but keeping it at 80 could let it be an offensive Trick Room mon, so it depends on what you want there
Quite funny and effective, basically a fast Lurantis, I like it. Good thing sleep is banned.
This would get vetoed, Gengar is a lackluster Pokemon in OU as is and Tera Psychic doesn't do much for it aside from reversing its Psychic weakness, and the ability is very good but not enough to lift up an unimpressive base. I think all this really needs is a little bit of Speed, a better Speed tier (like exactly 120) means that you get to revenge kill stuff like Ogerpon or Cinderace or unboosted Roaring Moon, all of which are mons that can run U-turn so you get a real reward for making an aggressive callout. Maybe a tiny power buff to 140 SpA would help as well, but you mainly need that Speed buff
This one was one bordering on getting vetoed for low viability, I think it's just barely alright enough to not get formally vetoed but I do still have some concerns with it. All of these buffs are great for Luxray but the main worry is that, especially with Psychic being an overall lackluster typing, it's still pretty lacking in everything other than power. The tough part is that its stats are already pretty optimized, so it's a bit hard to squeeze out more optimization, but if you can either add ~10 more Speed or a significant amount of bulk, this should get more justifiable to use. Also, you can keep Electroweb on this, if Luxray wants to lower something's Speed it'll use Thunder Wave
After looking at it a bunch of times, I still don't really know how to feel about this one, I'm not gonna lie to you lol. Rocks and TWave are both massive buffs for base, though
Seems fine, will definitely compete with Zamazenta but hopefully Synthesis and the potential of making dedicated Electric Terrain teams viable hopefully keeps it afloat. Losing Swords Dance does really suck for it moreso than the other two, since that would be something else it'd have over Zama, but hopefully it's still good without it
Sadly gets Iron Defense but not Body Press so no 124 Speed Cotton Guard + Body Press for me. In all seriousness, this one seems very interesting but I honestly can't really predict how it would pan out in practice, we would have to wait and see
Seems very strong, I do agree that most of the TeraForms have leaned on the fat side so far, so this takes advantage of them very easily, feels like a Deoxys-Speed but it hits hard with more moves than just Psychic ones. 
Mienshao if it was fat, should be a very good pivot for offense and fat alike. Having the Tera STAB boost on CC could actually be quite scary on something this fast and bulky, since for example this thing just cleanly OHKOs Ogerpon-Wellspring after Rocks, so I recommend lowering its Attack a bit (to like 95-100) or make the type of the TeraForm Fairy/Psychic and put the full 50 into Attack instead of 45