1v1 WP Moltres Galar QC 2/2 GP 1/1

[July]

[SET]
Weakness Policy (Moltres-Galar) @ Weakness Policy
Ability: Berserk
EVs: 240 HP / 216 Def / 24 SpA / 28 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Fiery Wrath
- Hurricane
- Nasty Plot
- Air Slash / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
* Fiery Wrath lets Galarian Moltres easily clean up Ghost- and Psychic-type foes such as Spectrier, Cresselia, and Iron Crown.
* Hurricane enables Galarian Moltres to handle Fighting- and Grass-type Pokemon like Great Tusk, Ogerpon-W, and Iron Valiant.
* Nasty Plot allows Galarian Moltres to boost its Special Attack in order to compete with threats such as Take Heart Manaphy and specially defensive, Weakness Policy Iron Crown; it also lets it remove foes that are not OHKOed such as Pecharunt.
* Air Slash gives Galarian Moltres a second STAB option for the Encore + Disable Iron Valiant matchup while also providing a more reliable way to hit foes. Alternatively, Taunt can be used to disrupt foes such as Ogerpon-W, Weakness Policy Iron Crown, and Serperior.
* The EV spread allows Galarian Moltres to survive Spirit Break from Jolly Choice Band Iron Valiant and Moonblast from Timid Choice Specs Iron Valiant.
* Pair Galarian Moltres with Ground-types like Great Tusk, which covers its Electric weakness, protecting it from threats like Raging Bolt while also checking foes such as Choice Band Ursaluna and Tyranitar. In return, it checks Great Tusk answers like Ogerpon-W and Serperior. Steel-types like Iron Crown and Metagross are also good partners for Galarian Moltres, backing its Fairy weakness and checking foes such as Sylveon and Alolan Ninetales. In exchange, Galarian Moltres checks threats to these Steel-types such as Spectrier and Volcarona.

[SET CREDITS]
Set(s) by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/clerica.503725/

Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/

Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bern.563650/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/lumii.493772/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/rose.511181/

 

[bern]

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[SET]
Weakness Policy (Moltres-Galar) @ Weakness Policy
Ability: Berserk
EVs: 240 HP / 216 Def / 24 SpA / 28 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Fiery Wrath
- Hurricane
- Nasty Plot
- Air Slash / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
(quick bullet point basically saying what Weakness Policy allows Galarian Moltres to do)
*Fiery Wrath lets Galarian Moltres easily clean up Ghost- and Psychic-type foes such as Spectrier, Cresselia, and Iron Crown. (Oxford comma)
*Hurricane enables Galarian Moltres handle Fighting- and Grass-type foes such as Great Tusk, Serperior, and Iron Valiant.
*Nasty Plot allows Galarian Moltres to boost it's Special Attack stat in order to compete with foes for example threats such as Take Heart Manaphy, and also removes foes that are not OHKOed such as Choice Band (spdef wp exists too) Annihilape.
*Air Slash gives it a second STAB option for the Encore + Disable Iron Valiant matchup, while also providinges a more reliable way to hit foes. Alternatively, Taunt can also be used to disrupt foes such as Sneasler and Corviknight.
*The EV spread allows Galarian Moltres to survive Spirit Break from Choice Band Iron Valiant and Moonblast from Choice Specs Iron Valiant.
*It is suggested to pair Galarian Moltres with Ground- and Steel- types like Iron Crown and Great Tusk which covers it's weakenesses, protecting it from threats like Raging Bolt, Sylveon, and Alolan Ninetales.

[SET CREDITS]
Set(s) by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/clerica.503725/

Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/

Quality checked by:
[insert user link]

Grammar checked by:
[insert user link]

qc 1/2, good job

 

[July]

Implemented

 

[bellchime]

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[SET]
Weakness Policy (Moltres-Galar) @ Weakness Policy
Ability: Berserk
EVs: 240 HP / 216 Def / 24 SpA / 28 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Fiery Wrath
- Hurricane
- Nasty Plot
- Air Slash / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
* (add space)Weakness Policy allows Galarian Moltres to setup on super effective hits and paired with Berserk it becomes a powerhouse. (why is this important? Can you list some of the matchups this allows Galarian Moltres to flip? Otherwise, this sorta just feels like fluff.)
* (add space)Fiery Wrath lets Galarian Moltres easily clean up Ghost- and Psychic-type foes such as Spectrier, Cresselia, and Iron Crown.
* (add space)Hurricane enables Galarian Moltres handle Fighting- and Grass-type foes such as Great Tusk, Serperior (24 SpA Moltres-Galar Hurricane vs. 248 HP / 0 SpD Serperior: 254-300 (71.9 - 84.9%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery, probs find another option here), and Iron Valiant.
* (add space)Nasty Plot allows Galarian Moltres to boost it's Special Attack stat in order to compete with threats such as Take Heart Manaphy, and also removes foes that are not OHKOed such as Annihilape. (I think mentioning SpDef WP Crown here is a good idea because you need to click Taunt into Nasty Plot for best odds in that matchup. I also think mentioning Pecharunt here could be a good idea.)
* (add space)Air Slash gives it a second STAB option for the Encore + Disable Iron Valiant matchup, while also providing a more reliable way to hit foes. Alternatively, Taunt can also be used to disrupt foes such as Sneasler and Corviknight. (I wanna make the argument that Taunt should be the first slash here. Anyways, we're actually too slow for Corviknight and end up getting Taunted first with this set, so I'd find other options like Weakness Policy Iron Crown or Serperior.)
* (add space)The EV spread allows Galarian Moltres to survive Spirit Break from Choice Band Iron Valiant and Moonblast from Choice Specs Iron Valiant.
* (add space)It is suggested to pair Galarian Moltres with Ground- and Steel- types like Iron Crown and Great Tusk which covers it's weakenesses weaknesses, protecting it from threats like Raging Bolt, Sylveon, and Alolan Ninetales. (I think you could be a bit more specific here on what it specifically is weak to, being Electric- and Fairy-types. This is fine as is, but I think it can be made better with a reword if you so choose.

[SET CREDITS]
Set(s) by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/clerica.503725/

Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/

Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bern.563650/

Grammar checked by:
[insert user link]

Definitely a very good start, I'll give the 2/2 after another look though!

 

[July]

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[SET]
Weakness Policy (Moltres-Galar) @ Weakness Policy
Ability: Berserk
EVs: 240 HP / 216 Def / 24 SpA / 28 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Fiery Wrath
- Hurricane
- Nasty Plot
- Air Slash / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
* (add space)Weakness Policy allows Galarian Moltres to setup on super effective hits and paired with Berserk it becomes a powerhouse. (why is this important? Can you list some of the matchups this allows Galarian Moltres to flip? Otherwise, this sorta just feels like fluff.)
* (add space)Fiery Wrath lets Galarian Moltres easily clean up Ghost- and Psychic-type foes such as Spectrier, Cresselia, and Iron Crown.
* (add space)Hurricane enables Galarian Moltres handle Fighting- and Grass-type foes such as Great Tusk, Serperior (24 SpA Moltres-Galar Hurricane vs. 248 HP / 0 SpD Serperior: 254-300 (71.9 - 84.9%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery, probs find another option here), and Iron Valiant.
* (add space)Nasty Plot allows Galarian Moltres to boost it's Special Attack stat in order to compete with threats such as Take Heart Manaphy, and also removes foes that are not OHKOed such as Annihilape. (I think mentioning SpDef WP Crown here is a good idea because you need to click Taunt into Nasty Plot for best odds in that matchup. I also think mentioning Pecharunt here could be a good idea.)
* (add space)Air Slash gives it a second STAB option for the Encore + Disable Iron Valiant matchup, while also providing a more reliable way to hit foes. Alternatively, Taunt can also be used to disrupt foes such as Sneasler and Corviknight. (I wanna make the argument that Taunt should be the first slash here. Anyways, we're actually too slow for Corviknight and end up getting Taunted first with this set, so I'd find other options like Weakness Policy Iron Crown or Serperior.)
* (add space)The EV spread allows Galarian Moltres to survive Spirit Break from Choice Band Iron Valiant and Moonblast from Choice Specs Iron Valiant.
* (add space)It is suggested to pair Galarian Moltres with Ground- and Steel- types like Iron Crown and Great Tusk which covers it's weakenesses weaknesses, protecting it from threats like Raging Bolt, Sylveon, and Alolan Ninetales. (I think you could be a bit more specific here on what it specifically is weak to, being Electric- and Fairy-types. This is fine as is, but I think it can be made better with a reword if you so choose.

[SET CREDITS]
Set(s) by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/clerica.503725/

Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/

Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bern.563650/

Grammar checked by:
[insert user link]

Definitely a very good start, I'll give the 2/2 after another look though!

Implemented

 

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* Air Slash gives it a second STAB option for the Encore + Disable Iron Valiant matchup, while also providing a more reliable way to hit foes. Alternatively, Taunt can also be used to disrupt foes such as Sneasler, Weakness Policy Iron Crown and Serperior.

Sneasler can win by attacking twice so probs find another example.

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* It is suggested to pair Galarian Moltres with Ground-types for instance Great Tusk which covers it's Electric weakness, protecting it from threats like Raging Bolt. Steel-types like Iron Crown are also good partners for Galarian Moltres backing it's Fairy weakness, checking foes such as Sylveon and Alolan Ninetales.

Honestly more of a nitpick but you can say what Moltres does for Great Tusk / Iron Crown too. You can also add something like Metagross as an example because it's a little low on the examples right now. Great Tusk also covers things like Tyranitar and Choice Band Ursaluna for example.

I'll check one more time but it's barely anything, I'd let this pass usually if I was the first qc but yeah. Very nice implementation so far, keep it up!

 

[July]

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* Air Slash gives it a second STAB option for the Encore + Disable Iron Valiant matchup, while also providing a more reliable way to hit foes. Alternatively, Taunt can also be used to disrupt foes such as Sneasler, Weakness Policy Iron Crown and Serperior.

Sneasler can win by attacking twice so probs find another example.

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* It is suggested to pair Galarian Moltres with Ground-types for instance Great Tusk which covers it's Electric weakness, protecting it from threats like Raging Bolt. Steel-types like Iron Crown are also good partners for Galarian Moltres backing it's Fairy weakness, checking foes such as Sylveon and Alolan Ninetales.

Honestly more of a nitpick but you can say what Moltres does for Great Tusk / Iron Crown too. You can also add something like Metagross as an example because it's a little low on the examples right now. Great Tusk also covers things like Tyranitar and Choice Band Ursaluna for example.

I'll check one more time but it's barely anything, I'd let this pass usually if I was the first qc but yeah. Very nice implementation so far, keep it up!

Implemented.

 

[bellchime]

Nasty Plot allows Galarian Moltres to boost it's Special Attack stat in order to compete with threats such as Take Heart Manaphy, SpDef WP Crown and also removes foes that are not OHKOed such as Annihilape and Pecharunt.

Annihilape can click Encore and beat you that way. Just remove it, no need to really find a replacement.

* The EV spread allows Galarian Moltres to survive Spirit Break from Choice Band Iron Valiant and Moonblast from Choice Specs Iron Valiant.

I think you should specify natures here.
252 Atk Choice Band Iron Valiant Spirit Break vs. 240 HP / 216 Def Moltres-Galar: 320-380 (83.9 - 99.7%) -- guaranteed 2HKO
252 SpA Choice Specs Iron Valiant Moonblast vs. 240 HP / 28+ SpD Moltres-Galar: 320-380 (83.9 - 99.7%) -- guaranteed 2HKO

1/2 after this, nice job with the implementations

 

[July]

Annihilape can click Encore and beat you that way. Just remove it, no need to really find a replacement.


I think you should specify natures here.
252 Atk Choice Band Iron Valiant Spirit Break vs. 240 HP / 216 Def Moltres-Galar: 320-380 (83.9 - 99.7%) -- guaranteed 2HKO
252 SpA Choice Specs Iron Valiant Moonblast vs. 240 HP / 28+ SpD Moltres-Galar: 320-380 (83.9 - 99.7%) -- guaranteed 2HKO

1/2 after this, nice job with the implementations

Wouldn't it be 2/2?

 

[bellchime]

that's what I meant yes ;w;

2/2 my bad

 

[July]

that's what I meant yes ;w;

2/2 my bad

Ty Implemented.

 

[July]

GP Team

 

[Rose]

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GP Check

[SET]
Weakness Policy (Moltres-Galar) @ Weakness Policy
Ability: Berserk
EVs: 240 HP / 216 Def / 24 SpA / 28 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Fiery Wrath
- Hurricane
- Nasty Plot
- Air Slash / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
* Fiery Wrath lets Galarian Moltres easily clean up Ghost- and Psychic-type foes such as Spectrier, Cresselia, and Iron Crown.
* Hurricane enables Galarian Moltres to handle Fighting- and Grass-type foes such as Pokemon like Great Tusk, Ogerpon-W, and Iron Valiant.
* Nasty Plot allows Galarian Moltres to boost it's its Special Attack stat in order to compete with threats such as Take Heart Manaphy, SpDef WP Crown and also removes Manaphy and specially defensive, Weakness Policy Iron Crown; it also lets it remove foes that are not (usually?) OHKOed such as Pecharunt.
* Air Slash gives it Galarian Moltres a second STAB option for the Encore + Disable Iron Valiant matchup, (comma) while also providing a more reliable way to hit foes. Alternatively, Taunt can also be used to disrupt foes such as Ogerpon-W, Weakness Policy Iron Crown, (comma) and Serperior.
* The EV spread allows Galarian Moltres to survive Jolly Spirit Break from Jolly Choice Band Iron Valiant and Moonblast from Jolly (do you mean Timid?) Choice Specs Iron Valiant.
* It is suggested to pair Pair Galarian Moltres with Ground-types for instance like Great Tusk, (comma) which covers it's its Electric weakness, protecting it from threats like Raging Bolt while also checking foes such as Choice Band Ursaluna and Tyranitar. In return, (comma) it checks Great Tusk checks answers like Ogerpon-W and Serperior. Steel-types like Iron Crown and Metagross are also good partners for Galarian Moltres, (comma) backing it's its Fairy weakness, weakness and checking foes such as Sylveon and Alolan Ninetales. In exchange, (comma) Galarian Moltres checks threats to these Steel-types such as Spectrier and Volcarona which threaten Iron Crown and Metagross. Volcarona.

[SET CREDITS]
Set(s) by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/clerica.503725/
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bern.563650/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/lumii.493772/
Grammar checked by:
[insert user link]

1/1 GP Team done

 

[July]

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GP Check

[SET]
Weakness Policy (Moltres-Galar) @ Weakness Policy
Ability: Berserk
EVs: 240 HP / 216 Def / 24 SpA / 28 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Fiery Wrath
- Hurricane
- Nasty Plot
- Air Slash / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
* Fiery Wrath lets Galarian Moltres easily clean up Ghost- and Psychic-type foes such as Spectrier, Cresselia, and Iron Crown.
* Hurricane enables Galarian Moltres to handle Fighting- and Grass-type foes such as Pokemon like Great Tusk, Ogerpon-W, and Iron Valiant.
* Nasty Plot allows Galarian Moltres to boost it's its Special Attack stat in order to compete with threats such as Take Heart Manaphy, SpDef WP Crown and also removes Manaphy and specially defensive, Weakness Policy Iron Crown; it also lets it remove foes that are not (usually?) OHKOed such as Pecharunt.
* Air Slash gives it Galarian Moltres a second STAB option for the Encore + Disable Iron Valiant matchup, (comma) while also providing a more reliable way to hit foes. Alternatively, Taunt can also be used to disrupt foes such as Ogerpon-W, Weakness Policy Iron Crown, (comma) and Serperior.
* The EV spread allows Galarian Moltres to survive Jolly Spirit Break from Jolly Choice Band Iron Valiant and Moonblast from Jolly (do you mean Timid?) Choice Specs Iron Valiant.
* It is suggested to pair Pair Galarian Moltres with Ground-types for instance like Great Tusk, (comma) which covers it's its Electric weakness, protecting it from threats like Raging Bolt while also checking foes such as Choice Band Ursaluna and Tyranitar. In return, (comma) it checks Great Tusk checks answers like Ogerpon-W and Serperior. Steel-types like Iron Crown and Metagross are also good partners for Galarian Moltres, (comma) backing it's its Fairy weakness, weakness and checking foes such as Sylveon and Alolan Ninetales. In exchange, (comma) Galarian Moltres checks threats to these Steel-types such as Spectrier and Volcarona which threaten Iron Crown and Metagross. Volcarona.

[SET CREDITS]
Set(s) by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/clerica.503725/
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ahmedxwaleed.667394/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bern.563650/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/lumii.493772/
Grammar checked by:
[insert user link]

1/1 GP Team done

Implemented.

 

[bern]

sorry for the wait
https://www.smogon.com/dex/sv/pokemon/moltres-galar/1v1/