Published [NatDex] Alomomola

[Murphy Lawden]

Alomomola @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Flip Turn
- Knock Off
- Mirror Coat
- Scald / Liquidation

Unlike the Mola mola that seems to drift aimlessly, Alomomola flips in and out of the battlefield! With its newfound Special Defense from Assault Vest, it checks special attackers like Gholdengo, Mega Charizard Y, Terapagos, and Tapu Lele. Flip Turn lets Alomomola safely bring in teammates like Mega Latios and Kingambit. Knock Off punishes switch-ins like Toxapex and Galarian Slowking by removing their Heavy-Duty Boots. Mirror Coat allows Alomomola to capitalize on its high HP and special bulk to grab a surprise KO on the aforementioned special attackers plus others like Tapu Koko. Scald's burn keeps physical attackers like Mega Scizor and Dragonite at bay and hinders walls like Ferrothorn, while Liquidation allows Alomomola to win its duel against Substitute Volcarona. Gholdengo pairs well with Alomomola, as Alomomola handles Fire- and Ground-types like Mega Charizard Y and Great Tusk and shuts down threats like Kingambit with burns. In return, Gholdengo provides a safe switch-in against Toxic and defeats walls like Toxapex and Ferrothorn. Alomomola struggles against Grass-types like Ogerpon-W and most Electric-types like Raging Bolt, making allied checks like Pecharunt and Ting-Lu valuable.

 

[Wildfiree]

Doing

 

[Wildfiree]

Add remove comment

Good work my friend QC 1/1

Alomomola @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Flip Turn
- Knock Off
- Mirror Coat
- Scald / Liquidation

Unlike the Ocean Sunfish that mostly drifts, Alomomola flips in and out of the battle! With its newfound Special Defense from Assault Vest, it checks special attackers like Volcarona Mega Charizard Y Volcarona is kinda eh since this set could technically be setup on especially if its not liquidation, Gholdengo, and Tapu Lele. Flip Turn lets Alomomola safely bring in both faster and slower offensive threats teammates like Mega Latios and Kingambit. Knock Off punishes switch-ins like Toxapex and Galarian Slowking by removing their Heavy-Duty Boots. Mirror Coat allows Alomomola to capitalize on its high HP and special bulk to grab a KO on the aforementioned special attackers as well as others like Tapu Koko. Scald's burn keeps physical attackers like Mega Scizor and Dragonite at bay and hinders walls like Ferrothorn, while Liquidation allows Alomomola to defeat Substitute Volcarona one-on-one. Gholdengo pairs well with Alomomola, as Alomomola handles Fire- and Ground-types like Mega Charizard Y and Great Tusk and cripples threats like Kingambit with burns. In return, Gholdengo provides a safe switch-in against Toxic and threatening walls like Toxapex. Alomomola struggles against Grass-types like Ogerpon-W and most Electric-types like Raging Bolt, making teammates that can handle them like Pecharunt and Ting-Lu valuable.

 

[Murphy Lawden]

Add remove comment

Good work my friend QC 1/1

Alomomola @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Flip Turn
- Knock Off
- Mirror Coat
- Scald / Liquidation

Unlike the Ocean Sunfish that mostly drifts, Alomomola flips in and out of the battle! With its newfound Special Defense from Assault Vest, it checks special attackers like Volcarona Mega Charizard Y Volcarona is kinda eh since this set could technically be setup on especially if its not liquidation, Gholdengo, and Tapu Lele. Flip Turn lets Alomomola safely bring in both faster and slower offensive threats teammates like Mega Latios and Kingambit. Knock Off punishes switch-ins like Toxapex and Galarian Slowking by removing their Heavy-Duty Boots. Mirror Coat allows Alomomola to capitalize on its high HP and special bulk to grab a KO on the aforementioned special attackers as well as others like Tapu Koko. Scald's burn keeps physical attackers like Mega Scizor and Dragonite at bay and hinders walls like Ferrothorn, while Liquidation allows Alomomola to defeat Substitute Volcarona one-on-one. Gholdengo pairs well with Alomomola, as Alomomola handles Fire- and Ground-types like Mega Charizard Y and Great Tusk and cripples threats like Kingambit with burns. In return, Gholdengo provides a safe switch-in against Toxic and threatening walls like Toxapex. Alomomola struggles against Grass-types like Ogerpon-W and most Electric-types like Raging Bolt, making teammates that can handle them like Pecharunt and Ting-Lu valuable.

View attachment 750326

Thanks implemented!

Funfact: I watched more than 10 videos (5 videos, rest were all shorts) on Sunfish while writing this! My favourite one:

Hello! GP Team

 

[SolarBeam]

1/1, GP Team done

Copyedit

blue = add
red = remove
(orange) = comment

(this was really well-written with no grammar mistakes, almost all changes were done purely for character cutting purposes. had to do a lot to get it down to <1050 so if i changed any phrasing important to you let me know)


Alomomola @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Flip Turn
- Knock Off
- Mirror Coat
- Scald / Liquidation

Unlike the Mola mola mola that mostly drifts along the ocean surface, Alomomola flips in and out of the battlefield! With its newfound Special Defense from Assault Vest, it checks special attackers like Mega Charizard Y, Gholdengo, and Tapu Lele. Flip Turn lets Alomomola safely bring in teammates like Mega Latios and Kingambit. Knock Off punishes switch-ins like Toxapex and Galarian Slowking by removing their Heavy-Duty Boots. Mirror Coat allows Alomomola to capitalize on its high HP and special capitalizes on Alomomola's bulk to grab a KO on the aforementioned special attackers as well as plus others like Tapu Koko. Scald's burn keeps hinders physical attackers like Mega Scizor and Dragonite at bay and hinders walls like Ferrothorn, while Liquidation allows lets Alomomola to defeat beat Substitute Volcarona one-on-one. Gholdengo pairs well with Alomomola, as Alomomola handles Fire- and Ground-types like Mega Charizard Y and Great Tusk and cripples threats like Kingambit with burns. In return, Gholdengo provides is a safe switch-in against to Toxic and eliminates beats walls like Toxapex. Alomomola struggles against Grass-types with most Grass- and Electric-types like Ogerpon-W and most Electric-types like Raging Bolt, making teammates that can handle them allied checks like Pecharunt and Ting-Lu valuable.

1047 characters

 

[Murphy Lawden]

1/1, GP Team done

Copyedit

blue = add
red = remove
(orange) = comment

(this was really well-written with no grammar mistakes, almost all changes were done purely for character cutting purposes. had to do a lot to get it down to <1050 so if i changed any phrasing important to you let me know)


Alomomola @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Flip Turn
- Knock Off
- Mirror Coat
- Scald / Liquidation

Unlike the Mola mola mola that mostly drifts along the ocean surface, Alomomola flips in and out of the battlefield! With its newfound Special Defense from Assault Vest, it checks special attackers like Mega Charizard Y, Gholdengo, and Tapu Lele. Flip Turn lets Alomomola safely bring in teammates like Mega Latios and Kingambit. Knock Off punishes switch-ins like Toxapex and Galarian Slowking by removing their Heavy-Duty Boots. Mirror Coat allows Alomomola to capitalize on its high HP and special capitalizes on Alomomola's bulk to grab a KO on the aforementioned special attackers as well as plus others like Tapu Koko. Scald's burn keeps hinders physical attackers like Mega Scizor and Dragonite at bay and hinders walls like Ferrothorn, while Liquidation allows lets Alomomola to defeat beat Substitute Volcarona one-on-one. Gholdengo pairs well with Alomomola, as Alomomola handles Fire- and Ground-types like Mega Charizard Y and Great Tusk and cripples threats like Kingambit with burns. In return, Gholdengo provides is a safe switch-in against to Toxic and eliminates beats walls like Toxapex. Alomomola struggles against Grass-types with most Grass- and Electric-types like Ogerpon-W and most Electric-types like Raging Bolt, making teammates that can handle them allied checks like Pecharunt and Ting-Lu valuable.

1047 characters

Two thing sir/mam.
1. Characters without spaces.

> Please keep all spotlights around the 1000 character limit. While not a hard limit, spotlights should be kept short and sweet and should not read like an analysis. QCers and GPers should both trim down on unnecessary information if the spotlight exceeds the limit. Also, do keep in mind that this limit does NOT include spaces or sentences containing replay links.

1028

2. In scientific names, the Genus name is always capitalized, and the Species epithet is written in lowercase. (They are also italicized or underlined when handwritten, but that doesn't matter here.) So, Mola mola is the correct way to write it.

 

[SolarBeam]

Two thing sir/mam.
1. Characters without spaces.

> Please keep all spotlights around the 1000 character limit. While not a hard limit, spotlights should be kept short and sweet and should not read like an analysis. QCers and GPers should both trim down on unnecessary information if the spotlight exceeds the limit. Also, do keep in mind that this limit does NOT include spaces or sentences containing replay links.

1028

View attachment 750438

2. In scientific names, the Genus name is always capitalized, and the Species epithet is written in lowercase. (They are also italicized or underlined when handwritten, but that doesn't matter here.) So, Mola mola is the correct way to write it.

My mistake, it's been a while since I've done this and forgot about the space exception. Approved as-is in that case.