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Crobat
Item: Wide Lens
Nature: Timid
Ability: Inner Focus
Evs: 160 hp, 132 sp att, 216 speed
Attacks: Hypnosis, Taunt, Air Slash, U-Turn
Stratagy: Crobat is my lead, my stratagy for him is for him 2 come out first, and put my oponent 2 sleep before they get a chance to attack., so i can switch to ninjask and start baton passing, it has wide lens to improve hypnosis' accuracy, taunt mostly for baton passers, U-Turn so it can leave after its job of hypnotising is done, and air slash, just incase he needs to go on the offencive. I'm focusing mostly on his speed, in hopes that he can out speed most oposing leads.

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Ninjask
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Speed Boost
Evs: 252 att, 252 speed, 6 def
Attacks: Baton Pass, Swords Dance, Substitute, X-Scissor
Stratagy: Ninjask comes in right after Crobat puts my oponent to sleep, then i substitute to survive, and swords dance when i get the chance, then when i get a decent speed boost and att boost, i baton pass it it one of my sweepers(Vire or sal). It also has X-Scissor for occasional offencive stands(if i get a chance to hit azelf or cresselia or something after a swords dance or two).

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Electivire
Item: Expert Belt
Nature: Naughty
Ability: Motor Drive
Evs: 252 att, 80 sp att, 176 speed
Attacks: Earthquake, Thunderbolt, Cross chop, Ice Punch
Stratagy: My main sweeper, my mixvire. He has mostly physical moves, but also thunderbolt for its extra power, and so it cant be walled as eazyily. He has expert belt, and a decent variety of moves to help him sweep better.

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Starmie
Item: Wise Glasses
Nature: Timid
Ability: Natural Cure
Evs: 172 hp, 120 sp att, 216 speed
Attacks: Thuderbolt, Rapid Spin, Surf, Recover
Stratagy: Starmie is my special sweeper, it has thunderbolt and surf for sweeping, rapid spin for...well, rapid spinning, and recover for healing(obviously), it has wise glasses to help it sweep, and speed boosting nat to giv it alittle of an upper hand on the opposition.

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Salamence
Item: Life Orb
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Intimidate
Evs: 252 att, 252 speed, 6 hp
Attacks: Dragon Dance, Dragon Claw, Earthquake, Fire Blast
Stratagy: Salamence is another physical sweeper, it has DDance for if i dont BP to it, dragon claw, for STAB, earthquake, for power and some coverage, and fire blast, for thos steel types that EQ wont hit(skarmory, bronzong, ect). It has life orb, for added power, jolly nat, to boost his speed, and its evs r solely for making him a better physical sweeper.

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Cresselia
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Calm
Ability: Levitate
Evs: 172 hp, 240 def, 96 sp def
Attacks: Psychic, Moonlight, Reflect, Toxic
Stratagy: Cresselia is my mixed wall, i hav calm nat to boost sp def, but hav most of my evs going toward def to balance it out, i hav psychic, cuz my pokes already hav ice and electric attacks, moonlight to heal, reflect to protect me from pursuit, and to even up the def-sp def relationship, and toxic for damage/oposing walls.

So thats my team, im focusing on crobat-ninjask to set up my sweepers, and electivire, starmie and sal can counter for each other(EQ on vire is countered by sal, ice beam on sal is countered by starmie, thunderbolt on starmie is countered by vire). And i also hav cresselia bringing up the rear to serve as my mix wall, and with reflect/toxic, it can help my sweepers tak out thos tough, ground-in pokes.
 
Any team that has Blissey, Bronzong, Vaporeon or others a like with Stealth Rock isn't going to even consider this team worthy of opposition (and they're pokemon who are in fact non-offensive pokemon). There's too many weaknesess in this team for it to be fixed to provide a stabilized , and if it was to be, it means that it would require in a complete transformation which would result in atleast 3 changes.

There is also a rule against writing only a sentence / phrase under each pokemon.

My advice to you is add a Bronzong / Rosarade over Cressilia and leading with it. Also, taking out Crobat for something else that can, in theory, break stall, which would be something like Infernape. Playing with an offensive style and trying to win at any cost is the best option for you.
 
what kind of weaknesses? i see electiric on crobat, ninjask, and starmie, and ice on crobat ninjask and sal, but crobat isnt supposed to be in battle long enought to tak a hit, and ninjask isnt supposed to take direct hits, only the sub is, and electivire-starmie-salamence counter for each other(EQ on electivire is countered by sal, ice beam on sal is countered by starmie, thunderbolt on starmie is countered by electivire), and i hav cresselia as my mixed wall, nat and evs + reflect even out its defences.
 
what kind of weaknesses? i see electiric on crobat, ninjask, and starmie, and ice on crobat ninjask and sal, but crobat isnt supposed to be in battle long enought to tak a hit, and ninjask isnt supposed to take direct hits, only the sub is, and electivire-starmie-salamence counter for each other(EQ on electivire is countered by sal, ice beam on sal is countered by starmie, thunderbolt on starmie is countered by electivire), and i hav cresselia as my mixed wall, nat and evs + reflect even out its defences.

I think he means a weakness to certain popular pokemon that could wreck every member on your team*coughTyranitarcough*
 
i hav cross chop, surf, and earthquake to deal with ttar, cresselia is weak to him due to sand stream and crunch, but reflect will help paralize him long enough for me to counter without being hurt too bad. my only worry with ttar would be if he were scarfed, but even so reflect + toxic would wear him down.
 
I'm not talking about weaknesess to types, and I'm talking in general; Pokemon, certain sets and the extra effects in the game. Not attack-types.
 
~ Nothing can come in on a CBTar Crunch.

~ Hidden Power Ice Yanmega 6:0's you.

~ Weavile will do serious damage to your team.

etc.etc, that kind of thing.
 
cross chop is x4 on ttar and weavile, so if i can BP enough speed to electivire i should be fine, and yanmega...hmm, thats a question of speed to, if i could tak it out with thunderbolt/ice punch/thunderbolt/fireblast b4 it got its speed up id be ok, if not, id hav 2 get creative(max speed with ninjask somehow, and baton pass it to sal(my fastest sweeper))
 
You can't switch in to these attacks. It's ok you saying you can OHKO the Pokemon, but each time they're brought in you can't do anything but let something die just so you can attempt a revenge kill.
 
or just keep sweeping with whoever is out, all 3 of my sweepers hav moves super effective against ttar for example, so no matter which one is already out, i should be able to if not kill it, deal enough damage.
 
ugh!!, ok, iv decided on everything for my team(all the stuff thats up there), but i cant deside on wheather i should keep thunderbolt on starmie, or if i should replace it with ice beam...ice beam would be good for dealing with dragons, but i hav ice punch and dragon claw for that, but thunderbolt would probably giv me more coverage, although, vire already has that...??? suggestions?
 
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