random team I made today

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Bronzong@Leftovers
Relaxed Nature - Levitate
252 HP / 152 Atk / 8 Def / 96 SpD

Stealth Rock
Light Screen
Earthquake
Gyro Ball

Standard bronzong, but it does his job. Sleep opponont first, then they switch whitch gives you time to set up stealthrock. Gyro Ball for STAB and Earthquake for coverage.

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Breloom@Toxic orb
Adamant Nature - Poison Heal
44hp/252Atk/212spe

-Focus Punch
-Seed Bomb
-Substitute
-Spore

The heart of the team, I got a great IV'd one a while back from my friend kaito, I lliked it so I decided to build a team around it.
THe idea is simple, sleep opponont, then sub and attack when I get the chance. Poison Heal makes it a great status absorber.

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Weavile@Choice Band
Jolly Nature - Pressure
40hp/252atk/216spe

Ice Shard
Pursuit
Night Slash
Aerial ace

Physical Sweeper and Revenge Killer.

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Heatran@leftovers
Modest Nature - Flash Fire
244hp/136hp/128spe

Lavapume
Earthpower
Rest
Sleep Talk

Bulkytran, closest thing I have to a special sweeper. Lavapume over fireblast for the acc. and the 30% burn rate. 244hp gives maximum leftovers recovery iirc.

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Gliscor@Leftovers
Impish Nature -Sand Veil
252hp/252def/4spe

Earthquake
Ice Fang
Taunt
Roost

Physical Wall, I have Taunt here over SR Because Bronzong has Stealth Rock already. Ice fang for chomp and eq for STAB. Roost is to heal off the damage.

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Vaporeon@leftovers
Bold Nature - Water Absorb
188 HP / 252 Def / 68 SpA

Wish
Surf
Ice Beam
Hidden Power [Electric]

Wish Passer bulky pokemon and gyara counter. also helps to counter chomp
 
Well this is a pretty offensive looking team. I assume this is wi-fi. It does have a couple of problems though. Most notably:

Sub/SDChomp: Weezing is in no way a Garchomp counter. Substitute completly shuts it down and even without Sub WoW has a 48-55% chance of actually hiting. Even Weavile can't guarentee a revenge kill if you don't know if its Scarf or Yache or if it has a Sub up.

SDLuke: After a Sword Dance Weezing is 2HKOd with SandStorm or Stealth Rocks out while Weezing can 2HKO it but its slower. Even with the resistance your Tentacruel takes 96.98% - 114.29% from a SDLuke Close Combat. Everything else is easily OHKOd.

LOMamoswine: Weezing is 2HKOd by Blizzard while Earthquake/Ice Shard can take care of everything else.

LODeoxys-S: Well since its officially OU even wi-fi should have to worry about it now. It outspeeds and hits everything here but Electivire super effective. Easy 6-0 with no swtup.

Tyranitar: Both Boah and CBtar are problems here. Boah can set up a Sub on Weezing or Houndoom then OHKO everything except Tentacruel who is 2HKOd while nothing can switch into CBtar since even Weezing gets 2HKOd.

Well those were just the major problems I happened to see through your team, but you can still fix them. As you can see your Weezing is supposed to be a physical wall, but fails to beat the top 2 physical attackers in the metagame right now.

Anyways for the fixes. Well you said the team was supposed to be centered around Breloom so lets keep that. You are trying to counter Breloom counters, but it seems you can't switch well into the main one which is Celebi. I suggest you replace Houndoom with Heatran. You seem a bit paranoid with 2 Pursuiters on your team. TBH you won't need it too much since Cresselia is hardly used and Weavile doesn't even counter it or Gliscor. So yeah, Rest/Sleep Talk Heatran. Not as a lead though, we will work on the lead later. Heatran still counters Azelf very good and you get overall alot more durability and even power without the Stealth Rock weak. I don't see you not being able to beat anything you could before.

Anyways now lets adress some of the threats from above. Well anyways to me Bronzong would cover 3/4 of them pretty well so you would want that. Also a more durable fighting resist/flyer would go well to beat Lucario such as Gliscor. Anyways Bronzong and Gliscor (both standard) seem to be a better choice over Tentacruel and Weezing. These cover almost all physical threats (and even some special) rather well and the only thing that could break it easily would be Infernape and Gyarados. Yeah, I did kinda get rid of Tentacruel, but you didn't have enough Heracross coverage to use it anyways. Also you don't need Rapid Spin on this team really, you would be better off with Wish. Vaporeon with HP Electric/Surf/Wish/Ice Beam cover the last holes that you may have defensivly. Now you pretty much covered everything and also all of Breloom's counters making sweeping with Breloom much easier. I would replace Electivire. You lose alittle offensive power, but you get a big increase in team support and defense. The way I see it if you set up a sweep with Breloom then its all good.

Um, what is weavile supposed to have? Anyways Choice Band might be best. Use it as your revenge killer.

Well thats about it for now.
 
Tsurukawa said:
Well this is a pretty offensive looking team. I assume this is wi-fi. It does have a couple of problems though. Most notably:

Sub/SDChomp: Weezing is in no way a Garchomp counter. Substitute completly shuts it down and even without Sub WoW has a 48-55% chance of actually hiting. Even Weavile can't guarentee a revenge kill if you don't know if its Scarf or Yache or if it has a Sub up.

SDLuke: After a Sword Dance Weezing is 2HKOd with SandStorm or Stealth Rocks out while Weezing can 2HKO it but its slower. Even with the resistance your Tentacruel takes 96.98% - 114.29% from a SDLuke Close Combat. Everything else is easily OHKOd.

LOMamoswine: Weezing is 2HKOd by Blizzard while Earthquake/Ice Shard can take care of everything else.

LODeoxys-S: Well since its officially OU even wi-fi should have to worry about it now. It outspeeds and hits everything here but Electivire super effective. Easy 6-0 with no swtup.

Tyranitar: Both Boah and CBtar are problems here. Boah can set up a Sub on Weezing or Houndoom then OHKO everything except Tentacruel who is 2HKOd while nothing can switch into CBtar since even Weezing gets 2HKOd.

Well those were just the major problems I happened to see through your team, but you can still fix them. As you can see your Weezing is supposed to be a physical wall, but fails to beat the top 2 physical attackers in the metagame right now.

Anyways for the fixes. Well you said the team was supposed to be centered around Breloom so lets keep that. You are trying to counter Breloom counters, but it seems you can't switch well into the main one which is Celebi. I suggest you replace Houndoom with Heatran. You seem a bit paranoid with 2 Pursuiters on your team. TBH you won't need it too much since Cresselia is hardly used and Weavile doesn't even counter it or Gliscor. So yeah, Rest/Sleep Talk Heatran. Not as a lead though, we will work on the lead later. Heatran still counters Azelf very good and you get overall alot more durability and even power without the Stealth Rock weak. I don't see you not being able to beat anything you could before.

Anyways now lets adress some of the threats from above. Well anyways to me Bronzong would cover 3/4 of them pretty well so you would want that. Also a more durable fighting resist/flyer would go well to beat Lucario such as Gliscor. Anyways Bronzong and Gliscor (both standard) seem to be a better choice over Tentacruel and Weezing. These cover almost all physical threats (and even some special) rather well and the only thing that could break it easily would be Infernape and Gyarados. Yeah, I did kinda get rid of Tentacruel, but you didn't have enough Heracross coverage to use it anyways. Also you don't need Rapid Spin on this team really, you would be better off with Wish. Vaporeon with HP Electric/Surf/Wish/Ice Beam cover the last holes that you may have defensivly. Now you pretty much covered everything and also all of Breloom's counters making sweeping with Breloom much easier. I would replace Electivire. You lose alittle offensive power, but you get a big increase in team support and defense. The way I see it if you set up a sweep with Breloom then its all good.

Um, what is weavile supposed to have? Anyways Choice Band might be best. Use it as your revenge killer.

Well thats about it for now.
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Thanks ALOT

azntrumpet said:
Nitpicking, but use Leftovers>Black Sludge as it just gives Trickers an extra weapon to use.
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I actualy used black sludge because it would give trickers something they couldn't use
 
Black Sludge doesn't benefit you any more than Leftovers.

Trick users can steal the Black Sludge, then give it to your Houndoom, Weavile, or Electivire.

Seems like you just want to use it because it's not the typical Leftovers..

Imo, switch it.
 
Pokerade said:
Black Sludge doesn't benefit you any more than Leftovers.

Trick users can steal the Black Sludge, then give it to your Houndoom, Weavile, or Electivire.

Seems like you just want to use it because it's not the typical Leftovers..

Imo, switch it.
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not really.
but the problem wit this team now (editing on the thread on another forums)
is that it's to standard o_0
 
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