please RMT i need this

I have been playing pokemon since the Blue days and have not stopped since.This is my second RMT and the first one did not go so well(didn't Ev train nothing)But now I am the best in my group (like 4 people)and thing it is time for Competitive battle.I have worked real hard with this team an I think this might be the one.I need every thing you got so I can become better.
You're Experts and I want Expert opinion.


Team Sin:

Greed/Gengar:Wide lens
Ability:Levitate
Evs:6hp/252atk/252spd
Nature:Timid
Shadow ball
Thunder
Energy ball
Hyponsis

My lead,and a good one at that put them to sleep and open on the attack use what ever move has the best coverage.I went with thunder instead of bolt because of my item wide lens and thunder has more power.Energy ball for bulky water types like swampert.Shadow ball for anything else.


Sloth/Cradily:Enigma berry
Ability:Suction Cups
EVS: 252hp/252atk/6def
Nature: Adamant
Grass Knot
Toxic
Stealth Rock
Earthquake

He is here as my Wall/Scout/annoyer.Setup Stealth rock for damage then hit them with Toxic to force switch ins which cause Stealth rock to occur.
Grass knot for Stab and EQ for a nice hit.

Envy/Heracross:Leftovers/Focus sash
Ability:Guts
EVS:6hp/252atk/252spd
Nature:Adamant
Close Combat
Stone Edge
Swords Dance
Megahorn

My powerhouse hit Swords Dance to boost power,Close combat and Megahorn for Stab.Then Stone edge if things get out of hand.
One of the strongest ones in my team.

Lust/Gyarados:?
Ability:Intimidate
EVS:252hp/252atk/6spd
Nature:Jolly
Waterfall
Dragon Dance
Ice fang
EQ

Ahhh my pride and joy just a normal Gyarados DD and try to sweep.simple.

Rage/Garchomp:Life Orb/focus sash
Ability:Sand Veil
EVS:16hp/252atk/240spd
Nature:Jolly
Swords Dance
Dragon Claw
Fire Fang
Earthquake

Garchomp the main threat in my team swords dance once and nothing stands in its way fire fang for steels dragon claw for Stab EQ just to fill space.yeah yeah the whole ice thingi switch if that happens.






Gluttony/Lickilicky:Silk Scarf
Ability:Own Tempo
EVS:252hp/252atk/6def
Nature:Adamant
Return
Explosion
EQ
Gyro Ball

Fat guy in a little coat.If you could not tell by now i am a huge fan EQ.
Return for the power.Gyro ball for the Attack an Explosion for anything I can't handle


Well there they are now its in your hands.
 
Well. I'd sugest for Garchomp, It would be like this

Garchomp@ Yache Berry/Choice Scarf
Adamant
-Outrage
-Earthquake
-Flamethrower/Stone Edge
-Swords Dance/Flamethrower

 
I have been playing pokemon since the Blue days and have not stopped since.This is my second RMT and the first one did not go so well(didn't Ev train nothing)But now I am the best in my group (like 4 people)and thing it is time for Competitive battle.I have worked real hard with this team an I think this might be the one.I need every thing you got so I can become better.
You're Experts and I want Expert opinion.


Team Sin:

Greed/Gengar:Wide lens
Ability:Levitate
Evs:6hp/252atk/252spd
Nature:Timid
Shadow ball
Thunder
Energy ball
Hyponsis

My lead,and a good one at that put them to sleep and open on the attack use what ever move has the best coverage.I went with thunder instead of bolt because of my item wide lens and thunder has more power.Energy ball for bulky water types like swampert.Shadow ball for anything else.

Why not run the average scarfed gengar? otherwise you'll be put to sleep by other, scarfed gengar leads.i wouldn't suggest energy ball, but if you want to run a grass type move, might i suggest giga drain to sap HP from sleeping foes, provided you don't run a scarfed version.

Sloth/Cradily:Enigma berry
Ability:Suction Cups
EVS: 252hp/252atk/6def
Nature: Adamant
Grass Knot
Toxic
Stealth Rock
Earthquake

He is here as my Wall/Scout/annoyer.Setup Stealth rock for damage then hit them with Toxic to force switch ins which cause Stealth rock to occur.
Grass knot for Stab and EQ for a nice hit.

??? what do you have a special move for? you invested all those ev's into attack so pick a physical move,or maybe recover to quickly heal?

Envy/Heracross:Leftovers/Focus sash
Ability:Guts
EVS:6hp/252atk/252spd
Nature:Adamant
Close Combat
Stone Edge
Swords Dance
Megahorn

My powerhouse hit Swords Dance to boost power,Close combat and Megahorn for Stab.Then Stone edge if things get out of hand.
One of the strongest ones in my team.
ok i guess but still scarfed versions do much better.
Lust/Gyarados:?
Ability:Intimidate
EVS:252hp/252atk/6spd
Nature:Jolly
Waterfall
Dragon Dance
Ice fang
EQ

Ahhh my pride and joy just a normal Gyarados DD and try to sweep.simple.
Drop some atk ev's for def/sp.def and then run taunt over ice fang to prevent being roared/whirlwinded or to prevent spikes/SR and stat set ups.
Rage/Garchomp:Life Orb/focus sash
Ability:Sand Veil
EVS:16hp/252atk/240spd
Nature:Jolly
Swords Dance
Dragon Claw
Fire Fang
Earthquake

Garchomp the main threat in my team swords dance once and nothing stands in its way fire fang for steels dragon claw for Stab EQ just to fill space.yeah yeah the whole ice thingi switch if that happens.

Why the big gap?? nevermind. pretty nice but can be walled. i would run fire blast over fire fang for skarm/forry.as for switching from ice moves, why no yache? you'll just have to set up again.




Gluttony/Lickilicky:Silk Scarf
Ability:Own Tempo
EVS:252hp/252atk/6def
Nature:Adamant
Return
Explosion
EQ
Gyro Ball

Fat guy in a little coat.If you could not tell by now i am a huge fan EQ.
Return for the power.Gyro ball for the Attack an Explosion for anything I can't handle
...... wow. i would really run power whip over eq and wishilicky would be a great help for you team.

Well there they are now its in your hands.
would you mind rating my team?
 
gengar, garchomp, weavile, gyarados, deoxys-s, yanmega, and suicune are a few threats that i notice can run straight through your team. running some variant of bronzong over cradily would be a nice defense against all of those but suicune and gyarados; standard bronzong would work nicely, as it sets up stealth rocks and has the ability to provide some sort of status support for your team.

scarfgar is a far superior choice to what you've got up there. note that shadow ball and focus blast provide at least a neutral hit on everything in the game, so i would strongly recommend you ditch grass knot in favor of focus blast. grass knot won't hit anything that your other two moves in combination with focus blast can't: consider that you're sacrificing coverage against steel-types and dark-types in favor of redundant water-type and rock-type coverage, with only a ground-SE hit to show for it.

moreover, NEVER use thunder just because wide lens provides an accuracy boost, because 77% accuracy is still nowhere near as reliable as the 100% found in thunderbolt. running t-bolt will be a sure prevention against opposing gyarados, as scarfgar definitely outruns it after a DD. if you're using bronzong, you can run him in the lead and tack hypnosis onto the moveset; this would allow you to give gengar hidden power ice on his scarf set, which is always useful and would add an extra layer of chomp protection.

non-scarf heracross always desperately needs speed, so max it by using jolly. if you're not going to use scarfcross and he's not your main sweeper, might i suggest using a flame orb set? it runs identical to the set you have, except with flame orb over focus sash and facade over stone edge. it'll beat gliscor, as a major example of how it might be useful. if you don't like the 12.5% damage each turn, note that focus sash isn't doing much on a slow pokemon like heracross, so use life orb, or maybe a salac berry, the latter of which would definitely help him get up to speed.

since you're mostly depending on garchomp to sweep, run the yachechomp set (sd, outrage, fire fang, earthquake, with a yache berry). the extra power couldn't hurt.
 
I personally use cradilly too. he is a huge beast but your moveset is all wrong. it looks like you want it to toxicstall and sweep which is really not focused enough, and you have no sandstorm for the SpD boost.
 
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