Star Power!!An OU Warstory by CntTchTis

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Ive been hanging on Shoddy a lot, and have decided that I am going to try to bring myself up on the ladder. I just made a new team which is looking great, and I was really going through opponents until I came across a great challenger. This battle was up to date with all the Platinum threats, as well as old ones and we both played really well. I managed to hold my own, and it was a great battle. Watch the end of the battle to see what happens.

CntTchTis Team:
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Torchamp’s Team
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Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause
-All comments will omitted
-Torchamp's moves will be in Red
-CntTchTis's moves will be in Blue
-My thoughts will be in Italics
-Leftovers will NOT be omitted, and wil be in Black Bold
-Burn will NOT be omitted, and will be in Green Bold
-Life Orb will be part of the attacking pokemon's turn
-At the end of the turn the Pokemon’s out health are shown, after the comments
-Status will be next to pokemon’s health in parentheses, in abbreviated form
-Scores will be after the health and show only after a pokemon has fainted


torchamp sent out Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).
HSB-CntTchTis sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom
).


I think the option was pretty clear here, running my jolly Breloom, I was gunna Spore, and start some falcon punching.

Breloom-100%
Metagross-100%

Metagross used Ice Punch.
It's super effective!

Breloom lost 83% of its health.
Breloom used Spore.
Metagross fell asleep!
Breloom was badly poisoned!

Brain fart, I should have known that it was going to be a scarf lead, now i cant set up a sub, but i did get his Metagross to sleep, which cripples a huge threat to my team, at the cost of Breloom.

Metagross-100%(SLP)
Breloom-17%(PSN)
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torchamp switched in Gyarados (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Gyarados's intimidate cut Breloom's attack!

HSB-CntTchTis switched in Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ?).

Crap, a great counter to scizor, instead if letting it set up I switch out, with nothing to hurt it, being naive would make me lose, which has happened to me before.

Scizor-100%
Gyarados-100%
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Jolteon (lvl 100 Jolteon ?).
Gyarados used Waterfall.

Jolteon lost 60% of its health
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I expected him to DD up, but he played smart, and Jolteon just got a chunk bitten out of it, Timid Jolteon outspeeds Adamant Gyrados after one DD, so thats wat was going on in my head. But now to of my pokemon are already pretty badly bruised up.

Jolteon-40%
Gyrados-100%
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torchamp switched in Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).
Jolteon used Discharge.

Metagross lost 65% of its health.


I decided to stay in and launch a discharge, which would kill Gyrados if he stayed in, and would paralyze the switch in. Unfortunately he sent in Metgross who was already statused, and didn’t fear the discharge. I was hopefully gunna finish of the Metagross right here.

Jolteon-40%
Metgross-35%(SLP)
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torchamp switched in Porygon2 (lvl 100 Porygon2).
Porygon2 traced Jolteon's Volt Absorb!

Jolteon used Discharge.

Darn it, great move, I have to switch out because my Jolteon has Choice Specs, this Porygon2 is going to be a pain to take out.
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Rotom-h (lvl 100 Rotom-h).
Porygon2 used Ice Beam.

Rotom-h lost 25% of its health.

Brand new guy making his debut, takes ice beam like a beast, the new Rotom Forms are pretty awesome, I didn’t want to reveal my sweepers to early.

Rotom-75%
Porygon2-100%




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torchamp switched in Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).
Rotom-h used Trick.
Rotom-h obtained Choice Scarf!
Metagross obtained Choice Scarf!


Another great move, it was predictable, but it really pissed me off, since I still have a Choice Scarf.

Metagross-35%(SLP)
Rotom-25%
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Metagross is fast asleep!
Rotom-h used Overheat.
It's super effective!
Metagross lost 35% of its health.
torchamp's Metagross fainted.
Rotom-h's special attack was harshly lowered.


I strike first with a huge hit to his Metagross which stood in my way of getting this Choice Scarf off me, I was planning on T-Bolting, but I wasn’t sure if it would kill, and I didn’t want to lose anymore health.

Metagross-0%(FNT)
Rotom-75%

Score: 6-5(CntTchTis)
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torchamp switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Salamence's intimidate cut Rotom-h's attack!


I see now that his team focuses more on offense, and finishing off his opponent early, I wasn’t sure whether it was DDMence or mixMence, so I switched to Starmie, because I had nothing else to switch to, and hoped for the best.

Rotom-75%
Salamence-100%
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie).
Salamence used Fire Blast.
It's not very effective...
Starmie lost 33% of its health.
Salamence lost 10% of its health.


Starmie-67%
Salamence-90%

Yes perfect, I can breathe a sigh of relief as it is not the DD set, and Starmie came in perfectly, and is now ready to do some damage.
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torchamp switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Starmie used Ice Beam.
Heracross lost 43% of its health.
Starmie lost 10% of its health.


A Heracross, it has been a while since I’ve seen one, I had to resist the temptation to Surf, and I’m guessing its Choice Scarf, otherwise it would die to a surf, so I make the safe switch.

Heracross-57%
Starmie-57%
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Rotom-h (lvl 100 Rotom-h).
Heracross used Megahorn.
It's not very effective...
Rotom-h lost 27% of its health.

Only now do I realize, that he could have pursuited, and have just dodged a bullet, I know that he won’t stay in so its time to pull the old Switcheroo......Trickeroo? Forget it, it’s time to swap our items with his switch in.

Rotom-48%
Heracross-57%
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torchamp switched in Porygon2 (lvl 100 Porygon2).
Porygon2 traced Rotom-h's Levitate!
Rotom-h used Trick.
Rotom-h obtained Leftovers!
Porygon2 obtained Choice Scarf!
Rotom-h's leftovers restored its health a little!
Rotom-h restored 6% of its health.


Perfect turn, I crippled that Porygon2, and got me some munchies to snack on, this was a huge play that affected the outcome of the battle.

Rotom-54%
Porygon2-100%
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Porygon2 used Thunderbolt.
It's not very effective...
Rotom-h lost 12% of its health.

Rotom-h used Will-o-wisp.
Porygon2 was burned!
Porygon2 was hurt by its burn!
Porygon2 lost 12% of its health.
Rotom-h's leftovers restored its health a little!
Rotom-h restored 6% of its health.


He was probably predicting a switch, and so was I, my Rotom laughs off the T-bolt and gets down a burn, and Porygon, pretty stale turn, just a lot of writing.

Porygon2-88%(BRN)
Rotom-48%
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torchamp switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ).
HSB-CntTchTis switched in Jolteon (lvl 100 Jolteon ).


I dont know what to do at this point, Im staring down what I think is a ScarfCross, and I don’t want to lose health on any other pokemon, so I decide to use Jolteon as Fodder.

Jolteon-40%
Heracross-57%
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Heracross used Stone Edge.
Jolteon lost 40% of its health.

HSB-CntTchTis's Jolteon fainted.


My suspicions have been confirmed it is definitely scarfed, so I get a free switch to my pokemon of choice, who will roast that bug....get it.

Jolteon-0%(FNT)
Hercross-57%

Score: 5-5(Tie)
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Rotom-h (lvl 100 Rotom-h).
torchamp switched in Porygon2 (lvl 100 Porygon2).
Porygon2 traced Rotom-h's Levitate!
Rotom-h used Overheat.
Rotom-h's attack missed!
Porygon2 was hurt by its burn!
Porygon2 lost 12% of its health.

Rotom-h's leftovers restored its health a little!
Rotom-h restored 6% of its health.


This damn Porygon2 is back, and Overheat misses, thats so gay, 90% my Rotom’s electrical cord.....fine no more jokes.

Porygon2-75%(BRN)
Rotom-54%
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?).
Porygon2 used Ice Beam.
It's super effective!
Breloom lost 17% of its health.
HSB-CntTchTis's Breloom fainted.
Porygon2 was hurt by its burn!
Porygon2 lost 12% of its health.


I wasn’t too keen on taking an Ice Beam, and Porygon2 are generally pretty specially bulky so overheat is useless, so I decide to send in my forgotten mushroom fighter as fodder, and get some extra burn damage.

Breloom-0%(FNT)
Porygon2-62%

Score: 5-4(torchamp)
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ?).
torchamp switched in Gyarados (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Gyarados's intimidate cut Scizor's attack!
Scizor used Swords Dance.
Scizor's attack was sharply raised.


Now I can bring in Scizor to set up, but that Gyrados rears its ugly face again, so I have no choice but to switch out, of my +1 Scizor which is a real shame, and I am going to switch into something to handle the Loch Ness monster....RAWR

Scizor-100%
Gyrados-100%
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Rotom-h (lvl 100 Rotom-h).
Gyarados used Waterfall.
Rotom-h lost 29% of its health.

Rotom-h's leftovers restored its health a little!
Rotom-h restored 6% of its health.


I am loving this Rotom its such a beast, and took that Waterfall like an oven, its obvious what I am going to do, and its obvious what hes gunna do, but I’m in no place for ballsy prediction.

Rotom-32%
Gyrados-100%
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torchamp switched in Porygon2 (lvl 100 Porygon2).
Porygon2 traced Rotom-h's Levitate!
Rotom-h used Thunderbolt.
Porygon2 lost 30% of its health.
Porygon2 was hurt by its burn!
Porygon2 lost 12% of its health.

Rotom-h's leftovers restored its health a little!
Rotom-h restored 6% of its health.


Porygon2 takes some huge damage this turn, and is now ready to be killed, by my Rotom, I doubt that he will switch, since his Porygon2 is next to useless at this point.

Porygon-21%(BRN)
Rotom-38%
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Porygon2 used Thunder Wave.
Rotom-h is paralysed! It may be unable to move!

Rotom-h used Thunderbolt.
Porygon2 lost 21% of its health.
torchamp's Porygon2 fainted.

Rotom-h's leftovers restored its health a little!
Rotom-h restored 6% of its health.

Porygon2 T-waves me as its last which was odd, as I expected him to try to do some damage so Rotom would be picked of easier. Rotom has done a great Job so far in the match, and took down an annoying poke.

Porygon2-0%(FNT)
Rotom-44%

Score: 4-4(Tie)
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torchamp switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Salamence's intimidate cut Rotom-h's attack!
Salamence used Draco Meteor.
Rotom-h lost 45% of its health.
HSB-CntTchTis's Rotom-h fainted.
Salamence's special attack was harshly lowered.
Salamence lost 10% of its health.


Salamence comes in and uses its beastliness to finish off my Rotom with a powerful Draco Meteor, he was almost useless at this point, as he couldnt take too many more powerful hits. But now Salamence is severley weakened in the Sp Atk. department, and at this point I am pretty sure he is Speczed.


Rotom-0%(FNT)
Salamence-80%

Score: 3-4(Torchamp)
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie).
torchamp switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Starmie used Ice Beam.
Heracross lost 41% of its health.
Starmie lost 10% of its health.

He makes another move as I try to finish of that mence, I had a huge brain fart again, because I forgot Hercross was still alive, but it is now almost useless, and I have jsut the thing to wall it.

Starmie-47%
Hercross-15%
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Zapdos (lvl 100 Zapdos).
Zapdos is exerting its pressure!

Heracross used Close Combat.
It's not very effective...
Zapdos lost 31% of its health.
Heracross's defence was lowered.
Heracross's special defence was lowered.

Zapdos's leftovers restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health.


I have been saving this Zapados, for the perfect time when Hercross was low enough, to be taken out, it took a lot from CC since this one is more Sp Def oriented, but not much, I can finally set up my sweep with Hercross out of the way.

Hercross-15%
Zapados-75%
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Heracross used Close Combat.
It's not very effective...
Zapdos lost 35% of its health.
Heracross's defence was lowered.
Heracross's special defence was lowered.

Zapdos used Thunderbolt.
Heracross lost 15% of its health.
torchamp's Heracross fainted.

Zapdos's leftovers restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health.


Good turn since he didn’t switch, if he decided that he wanted to switch he may very well have one this game, but I Zapados is unfortunately fairly weakened, and almost useless at this point, there is one pokemon hiding from me at this point, and this troubles me quite a bit, since I don’t know what is in poke ball number 6. I was very scared at this point since now he has a pokemon that might outspeed starmie.


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torchamp switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Salamence's intimidate cut Zapdos's attack!
Salamence used Draco Meteor.
Zapdos lost 46% of its health.
HSB-CntTchTis's Zapdos fainted.
Salamence's special attack was harshly lowered.
Salamence lost 10% of its health.


Zapados did his job, and was taken out by Salamence, who has proven to be an extremely potent attacker in this match, and I hav to take it out before it rears it ugly face which makes my pokemon whimper at its ugliness, this Mence has given me many problems and this late in the match my choices are limited.....epic

Zapados-0%(FNT)
Salamence-70%

Score: 2-3(Torchamp)
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie).
torchamp switched in Machamp (lvl 100 Machamp ?).
Starmie used Ice Beam.
Machamp lost 37% of its health.
Starmie lost 10% of its health.

Machamp's leftovers restored its health a little!
Machamp restored 6% of its health.

Crap, staring down the barrel of a bulky Machamp, who is gunna b hard to take down, there is only one viable switch left, at this point and thats the difference between life and death, for my Starmie.

Starmie-37%
Machamp-69%...lol
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ?).
Machamp used Payback.
It's not very effective...
Scizor lost 22% of its health.

Machamp's leftovers restored its health a little!
Machamp restored 6% of its health.

Scizor takes the hit like a champ, and I have to get this thing down, because it needs to be in KO range for Starmie to do anything, and do its final sweep.

Scizor-78%
Machamp-75%
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Scizor used Bullet Punch.
Machamp lost 35% of its health.
Machamp used Dynamicpunch.
Scizor lost 59% of its health.
Scizor became confused!

Machamp's leftovers restored its health a little!
Machamp restored 6% of its health.


Scizor-19%(Confusion)
Machamp- 46%
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Scizor is confused!
Scizor used Bullet Punch.
Machamp lost 31% of its health.

Machamp used Dynamicpunch.
Scizor lost 19% of its health.
HSB-CntTchTis's Scizor fainted.

Machamp's leftovers restored its health a little!
Machamp restored 6% of its health.

Can’t say I’m happy with Scizor this match but if he had gotten confuse hax this game would have resulted in my loss, stupid GAYrados, but he did his job now Starmie can come in, and sweep the rest off his team, unless Machamp has Bullet Punch, which is the only thing stopping my sweep(GULP)

Scizor-(FNT)
Machamp-22%
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HSB-CntTchTis switched in Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie).
Starmie used Surf.
Machamp lost 22% of its health.
torchamp's Machamp fainted.
Starmie lost 10% of its health.


Its basically GG at this point he cant really win, so I think u know what’s going through my head, look at the bright side...no more reading my boring thoughts.

Starmie-27%
Machamp-(FNT)
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torchamp switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Salamence's intimidate cut Starmie's attack!

Starmie used Ice Beam.
It's super effective!
Salamence lost 70% of its health.
torchamp's Salamence fainted.
Starmie lost 10% of its health.


Starmie-17%
Salamence-(FNT)
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torchamp switched in Gyarados (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Gyarados's intimidate cut Starmie's attack!
Starmie used Thunderbolt.

It's super effective!
Gyarados lost 100% of its health.
torchamp's Gyarados fainted.
HSB-CntTchTis wins! (AND THE CROWED GOES WILD), Jk i haz no friends =(


Starmie-7%
Gyrados-(FNT)
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PERFORMANCES:

Good:
Gyrados for walling the shit out of my Scizor
Salamence for beasting my team
Rotom for walling his physical walls
Starmie for getting 3 kills

Bad:
Breloom for doing nothing
Scizor for failing to use bullet Punch in that uber manner
Metagross for not doing well


GG dude, I can’t wait for our next fight.
 
Good warstory, but not very visually appealing. Maybe colour yiu and your opponents moves differently, it got a bit confusing.

At least the comments weren't totally terrible like some warstories I've seen recently :)
 
nice battle and all, but keep it all black. It's a pleasure for the eyes :)
Too many colours are unappealing for many people, even if it's just 2.
 
Decent battle, though you did kind of give away the endings with comments like "he would have won if..."

Yeah, Red/Blue doesn't work ery well. Not very pleasent, but the battle and commentary makes up for it. Next time go a little more indepth with your thought process and the possibilities like what could happen, what potentially hidden pokemon will cause your downfall, etc. You kind of just posted your reaction and how you would respond to the previous move.

Not a bad warstory though. Props.


EDIT: Lol, should've noticed what Nubchos pointed out. XD
 
Salamence used Draco Meteor.
Rotom-h lost 45% of its health.
HSB-CntTchTis's Rotom-h fainted.
Salamence's special attack was harshly lowered.
Salamence lost 10% of its health.

But now Salamence is severley weakened in the Sp Atk. department, and at this point I am pretty sure he is Speczed.

It wasn't bad, apart from the above part which confused me a little.

3.5 stars.
 
Olie why can't we all get along? Colours are superior.

This warstory is one of those with an author of good writing skills, but the battle isn't anything really special. I've seen some great battles ruined by a lack of comments/presentation.

Still say this is a good warstory, hoping to see more!
 
Salamence used Draco Meteor.
Rotom-h lost 45% of its health.
HSB-CntTchTis's Rotom-h fainted.
Salamence's special attack was harshly lowered.
Salamence lost 10% of its health.

But now Salamence is severley weakened in the Sp Atk. department, and at this point I am pretty sure he is Speczed.

It wasn't bad, apart from the above part which confused me a little.

3.5 stars.


When I read that I figured he was saying that the Salamence was a special attacking one and not a mix . . . but I could have been wrong and he might have made a huge error.

For what it's worth I perfer my watstories with splashes of color to make sure that i know what is going on and not staring down walls of text.
 
yeah you did give away the ending i also like being kept in suspense i think colours are better as the shows who is making what move not so great battle good comments though some of the ones recently have been good battles spoiled by bad comments lol
 
Erm, make sure you know what "epic" is before concluding that >__>;

And use softer colors next time. That red is too bright.
 
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