A double battle (battle) log

For this double battle, my leads were strong,
Smeargle, of course, and exploding Bronzong.
Smeargle, with its scarf, put opponents to sleep,
While Bronzong put up rocks to help with the sweep.

Both opponents switched out, so too did Smeargel,
Jolteon came in to be skill swapped as well.
Now Jolteon levitated merrily along,
To heal with discharge a volt absorb Bronzong.

The opponent’s switchins were Rhyperior and Floatzel,
Rhyperior threatened bronzing, is earthquake hopeful.
Rhyperior looked like stone, Floatzel an otter,
And Jolteon took down Rhyperior with Hidden Power Water.

Floatzel was next, and chose to protect,
And Bronzong as well, as it can’t detect.
In came a Pokémon with a fiery explosion,
It was none other than mighty Scarflosion.

Jolteon just laughed and began to discharge.
Which made Floatzel faint but left Typhlosion at large.
Typhlosion attacked before I could relax,
Fortunately for me, I got parahax.

And then Bronzong’s Earthquake took Scarflosion down,
While Jolteon’s levitate dodged attacks from the ground.
In came Scizor and a sleeping Zapdos,
Oh, how I wish it were Garados!

Jolteon’s Discharge didn’t do much,
But Scizor’s Brick Break left Bronzong mush.
Zapdos just slept, feeling superior,
Giving me time to bring in my Rhyperior.

Scizor’s bullet punch ended Jolteon’s game,
But Rhyperior’s Hammer Arm left Scizor feeling quite lame.
Zapdos awoke, but could only Roost,
Which gave his team absolutely no boost.

In came a Gliscor, of Ground-Flying fame,
Which left my Zapdos looking quite tame.
Gliscor’s slumber meant it could do not a thing,
While Zapdos’ Extrasensory made its head ring.

Their Zapdos did much to us but naught to their own,
But Rhyperior took it down with edges of stone.
My remaining Pokemon numbered but four,
But my lone opponent was a sleeping Gliscor.

Gliscor awoke and roosted away a blow,
But Zapdos’ Extrasensory brought its HP low.
Rhyperior’s Stone Edge finished the battle,
And thus ended my opponents prattle.​
 
Epic. VERY EPIC.

This is how a warstory should be.



I hope that was sarcasm...

There are no sprites, no descriptions as to your thoughts during the battle. All you did was tell who used what move. It's plain and boring. I think you could've done a much better job on making this somewhat interesting.

edit: i feel stupid, i didn't realize this was in firebot .____.
 
this is fucking excellent lol

5 damn stars my friend

EDIT: i would recommend ignoring users Locopoke and Scrubs. they are ...
 
Your warstory was brilliant for sure,
And even more so for it was your post #4.
I definitely look forward to more from you,
And welcome to smogon.

5 stars =).
 
Your last line did not rhyme,
and that is a crime,
for you have not the way,
of the poet today.

And for once in appears, when I look at those lines,
That finally you have your syllables in time.

Just something you should keep in mind in the future.
And no, I will not find a word that rhymes with future.
 
Gen. Empoleon now has to meet this new standard.

This should be in the Warstory Archive once it's done in Firebot.
 
Pretty good, I eagerly await one entirely in iambic pentameter.

I've got one that I'm writing up when I have time actually.

"Roserade my revenge killer beith,
Sleep Powder an end to his sweep shalt bring.

His fiery breath my hermit resists,
My Slowbro can wall Arcanine all day."
 
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