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Haxorus @ Life Orb / Choice Band
Jolly Nature, 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 4 HP
-Dragon Claw
-Brick Break
-Earthquake
-Dual Chop / Outrage

(Has Mold Breaker)

My one and only Physical Sweeper for this team, but with only one it still works great. Dragon Claw, Brick Break, and Earthquake give coverage over anything, i believe. Hits everything for quite nice damage =)
Outrage over Dual Chop on a CB?

Reuniclus @ Life Orb
Modest Nature, 252 Defense, 252 Sp. Attack, 4 HP
-Calm Mind
-Recover
-Focus Blast
-Shadow Ball / Psychic

Beastly. One of my Special Sweepers on my team, and probably the most deadly on the team. Switches in, Calm Minds to raise stats to obscenely high levels, Recovers off damage, and Focus Blast and Shadow Ball for decent coverage. Psychic over Shadow Ball for STAB?

Togekiss @ Leftovers
Calm Nature, 252 Sp. Def, 4 Sp. Attack, 252 HP
-Air Slash
-Thunder Wave
-Aura Sphere
-Roost

(Has Serene Grace)

Serebii's Para-Flinch set. Works nice. I think it's self-explanitory, though. Thunder Wave and Air Slash to cause damage and make almost no chance for the opponent to hit Togekiss, Roost's damage off incase of a few hits or a critical. Also takes away Flying-type for a bit, which helps if facing Electrics. Aura Sphere cause it's flippin' nice =)

Jellicent @ Leftovers
Bold Nature, 4 HP, 252 Sp. Def, 252 Def
-Will-o-Wisp
-Taunt
-Recover
-Scald

Special Wall. Taunts other Walls into switching out, burns Physical Sweepers, and Recovers damage. Again, self-explanitory. Thinking about switching Scald for Surf, as i already burn with Will-o-wisp, when it hits. Surf also has more power, but Scald seems to be the better deal... damage AND 30% burn.

Hydreigon @ Choice Scarf
Naive Nature, 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 4 Sp. Attack
-Earthquake
-Crunch / Dark Pulse
-Fire Blast / Fire Fang
-Draco Meteor / Outrage

Unorthodox, yes. Effective, YES. People expect a Scarf-ed / Specs-ed / Orb-ed 'Gon, and switch for the Special Wall, then i hammer with Physical and obliterate. Hits quite a bit for decent damage. Crunch for Pulse and Blast for Fire Fang, and Draco for Outrage, to have more of a Physical Spectrum? I switch them around every few weeks to see which suits more, but all of the options are viable for the team. Help?

Ferrothorn @ Leftovers
Careful Nature, 252 Defense, 252 Sp. Defense, 4 HP
-Spikes
-Leech Seed
-Substitute
-Power Whip / Stealth Rock

Yes, a Careful nature. I dont know what the standard is, but It needs a little Omph in the Special Defense area to make it a full-blown Annoying 'thang / SubSeeder for my team. It's not like 'Thorn's gonna be outspeeding anything any time soon. Stealth Rock over Power Whip to set up Rocks AND Spikes? Or should i keep the Attack in there?


I do believe that I should switch Hydreigon and / or Haxorus for something that would better benefit the team, which is mostly based around Reuniclus / Jellicent / Ferrothorn.

Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated, no matter how harsh!!!!
 
You should try placing some sprites for the Pokemon, make things colorful. And perhaps have some kind of introduction. You should also follow the official format. Or else people won't bother rating your team.

Here are my suggestions for your team. Instead of Dual Chop, give your Haxorus Outrage. It's a much better option due to the power of the move.

For Reuniclus, Psychic is a MUCH better option than Shadow Ball. For Jellicent, use the following EV spread: 252 HP / 212 Def / 44 Spe

For Hydreigon, use the following EV spread: 4 HP / 252 SpAtk / 252 Spe, Modest Nature. With Draco Meteor, Fire Blast, Surf, Dark Pulse.

And for Ferrothorn, remove Substitute for Protect. SubSeeding is a terrible idea on a very slow Pokemon.
 
The biggest thing I see wrong with your team is a Mamo weakness. He can come in and ice shard your dragons. IDK how often you see him, but I see him running around to KO chomp and mence
 
Quick note: Use this spread instead on Togekiss
252 Sp. Def, 8 Sp. Attack, 248 HP (assuming 31 Ivs in HP)

This allows Togekiss to switch into Stealth Rock 4 times as opposed to 3.
 
Just a nitpick going over the team, try Haxorus with Adamsnt and Outrage. Haxorus' niche is a very hard hitting band Outrage and that's what it should be doing. Good luck!!!!
 
Out of personal preference I prefer leftovers on Reuniclus as it makes Calm Minding to high levels VERY easy. Also I'd highly recommend taking Psyshock on him over Shadow Ball. It can be used to catch special walls off guard early and it has helped me countless times win calm mind battles
 
Something else I noticed is that if you have Will-o-Wisp I'd recommend Surf over Scald, as the extra burning move isn't really worth it ass apposed to extra damage.
 
DrCutePuppies said:
The biggest thing I see wrong with your team is a Mamo weakness. He can come in and ice shard your dragons. IDK how often you see him, but I see him running around to KO chomp and mence
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i think he is fine, neither of his dragons take x4 damage from shard, and both have relavtive bulk, so an ice shard shouldnt OHKO either, and allowing him to KO momoswine back
 
You have a solid team in general just horrible movesets.lol Ok let's start with hax.

Haxorus (M) @ Choice Band
Trait: Rivalry
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Outrage
- Dual Chop
- Earthquake
- Brick Break

This set is great. With the rivalry ability it gives 25% more power on top of choice band. Outrage 2 hit kills a standard ferrothorn set and hippowdowns. Dual chop for subs and sashes.

Reuniclus @ Life Orb
Nature: Quiet
Ability: Magic Guard
Evs: 172 HP/32 Def/252 SpA/52 SpD
- Psychic
- Shadow Ball
- Focus Blast *
- Trick Room

Trick room ABUSER. That's pretty much it

Togetkiss is good

Jellicent @ Leftovers
Bold Nature, 4 HP, 252 Sp. Def, 252 Def
-Toxic
-Taunt
-Recover
-Scald

Since you have scald there's no point to have Willo- Wisp. Toxic is better.

I don't know much about hydreigon but since you have max Attack Evs I'll run:

-Earthquake
-Crunch
-Outrage
-U-Turn

Ferrothorn @ leftovers
Ability: Iron Barbs
Nature: Impish
Evs: 252 Hp/252 Def
- Spikes
- Leech Seed
- Power Whip
- Thunder Wave
 
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