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Undefinedmaster

Hello, I am new here. Please tell me your thoughts about this team that, so far, hasn't been beaten. I know it's not perfect and I will edit it later. Feel free to correct me if post an incorrect format, or forget something, and sorry for the lack of pictures, I'll fix it later but I'm posting this from my phone.

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Victini @ shellbell
Ability: Victory Star
Moves: shadow ball, energy ball, brick break, flamethrower
Nature: gentle
Evs: hp: 252: sp. Def: 252 def: 6

Victini is (obviously) a special wall and is the first pokemon I ev trained in THIS game. The moves cover ALL of it's weaknesses and the shell bell will heal it. Sins there are many special sweepers out there, I think this is a good addition to my team

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Gliscor @ Toxic Orb
Ability: Poison heal
Ev: 252 Hp , 252 Def / 252 Hp , 180 Def , 72 Spd
Impish Nature ( Def + , SpAtt - )
Moves: EarthQuake , Ice Fang , Protect, Taunt

This set pretty much explains itself , this will be my physical wall.


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Darkrai @ dragon fang
Ability: bad dreams
Moves: dark void (sorry it said dark pulse before, i meant dark void), nasty plot, spacial rend, roar of time
Nature: mild
Evs: sp. Att 252 speed 252 hp 6

This is a pretty good special sweeper. With one of the top special attacks in the game, and a high speed, this event Darkrai is nearly unbeatable. It puts the opponent to sleep, giving me time for a nasty plot or two, then uses spacial rend or roar of time on the rest of the opposing team, powered up by the dragon fang.
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Rotom-W@Leftovers/ Choice Specs
Modest, 128 Def/252 Sp.Atk/128 Sp.Def
-Thunderbolt
-Hydro Pump
-trick
-Volt Switch/Pain Split
Rotom-W

This is a killer set. Thunderbolt and Hydro Pump provide STAB good coverage, WoW cripples physical attackers and Volt Switch is there to allow you to scout and get out of a nasty situation. You can also consider Pain Split to heal you in front of things like Blissey and Snorlax.

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Terrakion@Life Orb
Adamant/Jolly, 4 HP/252 Atk/ 252 Spe
-Swords Dance/Rock Polish
-Close Combat
-Stone Edge
-X-scissor/Quick Attack
Terrakion

The boosting move depends from which nature you chose, so you can boost the other stat. CC and SE give you awesome STABmoves, while X-scissor is there for coverage and Quick Attack gives you guaranteed priority.

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Ferrothorn @ Leftovers
-Leech Seed
-Stealth Rock
-Power Whip
-Protect
252 HP / 126 Def / 130 SpDef

Also make sure to check out my OU team (in my signature).

Post away!
 
Darkrai shouldnt have roar of time it may be a strong but it gives them a free turn of set up. like a Dragon dance/bulk up scrafty or any other set upper. Dark void can take its place. Dragon fang should be changed to a dragon gem or leftovers. Suicune should hace 252 in health as 252 in defence and special defence is the same so change the EVs to 252hp and split the defence.
 
Hi Undefinedmaster
First of all you must change the natures of your pkmns if you want a serious competitive team: Calm for Victini, Impish/jolly for Gliscor, Timid for Darkrai, Impish for Tangrowth, the other two are perfect.
I've seen also something wrong in your moveset: With a calm nature for victini, change BB with a special attack. Gliscor is ok except for one thing: change tailwind with Eartquake or Ice fang or you'll be too vulnerable to Taunt. Change Darkrai's RoT with Dark void and for Suicune replace Sheer cold with Tailwind (if you want a speed boost) or Reflect/Light screen. For Raichu change Wild charge with Volt tackle: it has got recoil too but it is more powerful. Your Tangrowht in good but change focus blast with brick break or rock slide beacuse Tangrowht's attack is better than his SP attack. The evs spreads are good for Victini, Darkrai and Raichu but the others have some problems: Gliscor needs to be fast, so if you choose the impish nature put 252 evs in speed, 200 in Spd and 56 in Def. Like Wacky saids, change the suicune's evs: 252 HP 128 Def 128 SpD or 252 Hp 164 Def 92 Spd as you want. The 6 evs of Tangrowht needs to be to Attack or SpD and not in SpA.
Keep in mind that you are using an Uber in your team, Darkrai, if you want a complete OU team replace Darkrai with an Alakazam or with Gengar.
In this way your team should work better! Good luck!
 
wacky tabaky said:
Darkrai shouldnt have roar of time it may be a strong but it gives them a free turn of set up. like a Dragon dance/bulk up scrafty or any other set upper. Dark void can take its place. Dragon fang should be changed to a dragon gem or leftovers. Suicune should hace 252 in health as 252 in defence and special defence is the same so change the EVs to 252hp and split the defence.
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Thanks for the advice. As fo Darkrai, I would only use roar of time when it's my opponents last pokemon, or Darkrai is about to die and I can't switch out. As for suicune, he already has a very good hp, as it has full Ivs in hp, and needs the defensive evs.
 
Braseg257 said:
Hi Undefinedmaster
First of all you must change the natures of your pkmns if you want a serious competitive team: Calm for Victini, Impish/jolly for Gliscor, Timid for Darkrai, Impish for Tangrowth, the other two are perfect.
I've seen also something wrong in your moveset: With a calm nature for victini, change BB with a special attack. Gliscor is ok except for one thing: change tailwind with Eartquake or Ice fang or you'll be too vulnerable to Taunt. Change Darkrai's RoT with Dark void and for Suicune replace Sheer cold with Tailwind (if you want a speed boost) or Reflect/Light screen. For Raichu change Wild charge with Volt tackle: it has got recoil too but it is more powerful. Your Tangrowht in good but change focus blast with brick break or rock slide beacuse Tangrowht's attack is better than his SP attack. The evs spreads are good for Victini, Darkrai and Raichu but the others have some problems: Gliscor needs to be fast, so if you choose the impish nature put 252 evs in speed, 200 in Spd and 56 in Def. Like Wacky saids, change the suicune's evs: 252 HP 128 Def 128 SpD or 252 Hp 164 Def 92 Spd as you want. The 6 evs of Tangrowht needs to be to Attack or SpD and not in SpA.
Keep in mind that you are using an Uber in your team, Darkrai, if you want a complete OU team replace Darkrai with an Alakazam or with Gengar.
In this way your team should work better! Good luck!
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I see your points. Your only wrong about Tangrowths stats. His base attack is 100 and his base special attack is 110. And as for the uber, this is just a random team for fighting, not made for specific rules. Thanks!
 
raichu is a horrible pokemon, you can run much better, like zapdos or something :L
and im pretty sure darkrai is an uber?
 
Darkrai is. This team is no restrictions. And raichu doesn't suck, he just has more even stats. Although his attack and sp. Att aren't as good as some other sweepers, he can servive a few hits without the focus sash.
 
If you want to replace darkrai, i suggest you go with something more 'consistent in general', not something like Furrett. Tiers or not, Furrett just doesn't perform very well.
Actually, no, i think you should keep Darkrai. As you have no tiers in mind, it's just a very good pokemon in general. I just suggest you change him a li'l bit:

Darkrai@Life Orb
Modest/Timid, 4 HP/252 Sp.Atk/252 Spe
-Dark Void
-Nasty Plot
-Dark Pulse
-Focus Blast/HP Fighting
Darkrai

This set seems like a killer set to me. Dark Void puts 'em to sleep, allowing you to set up NP's all over the place. Then the obvious unresisted DarkBlast combo. It's up to you to decide whether you should use Focus Blast or HP Fighting. One is powerful, the other one is accurate. Maybe you should just stick with HP Fighting as you raise your Sp.Atk anyway.

Moving on, I seriously suggest to change Raichu. Just like something like Furret, it won't do as much as other pokes can do. I suggest you replace him + Suicune (sort of, making another free spot) with Rotom-W:

Rotom-W@Leftovers/ Choice Specs
Modest, 128 Def/252 Sp.Atk/128 Sp.Def
-Thunderbolt
-Hydro Pump
-Will-o-wisp
-Volt Switch/Pain Split
Rotom-W

This is a killer set. Thunderbolt and Hydro Pump provide STAB good coverage, WoW cripples physical attackers and Volt Switch is there to allow you to scout and get out of a nasty situation. You can also consider Pain Split to heal you in front of things like Blissey and Snorlax.

Like this, you have a free spot, as Suicune would also be replaced by Rotom-W. I suggest you use a Fighting-type pokemon there, a pokemon like Terrakion:

Terrakion@Life Orb
Adamant/Jolly, 4 HP/252 Atk/ 252 Spe
-Swords Dance/Rock Polish
-Close Combat
-Stone Edge
-X-scissor/Quick Attack
Terrakion

The boosting move depends from which nature you chose, so you can boost the other stat. CC and SE give you awesome STABmoves, while X-scissor is there for coverage and Quick Attack gives you guaranteed priority.

You could also consider a poke like Breloom or Conkeldurr in this spot, just a good fighting type 'mon.

I would also consider changing Gliscors moveset to this:
-Substitute
-Protect
-Earthquake
-Ice Fang/Swords Dance

Just as annoying, but you focus on being untouchable with Protect+Sub+Poison Heal.
EQ as awesome STAB-move, the last move for coverage or to make EQ hit enormously hard.

I also suggest changing Tangrowths moveset to this:
-Leech Seed
-Substitute
-Giga Drain
-Focus Blast/Toxic

That's all for now. I'm not suggesting so many changes because your team sucks, nononono, i'm just suggesting many options in just one post. You can just pick what you think is correct and worth trying from all my suggestions.

I hope I helped,

Cap'n
 
Captain Dragan said:
If you want to replace darkrai, i suggest you go with something more 'consistent in general', not something like Furrett. Tiers or not, Furrett just doesn't perform very well.
Actually, no, i think you should keep Darkrai. As you have no tiers in mind, it's just a very good pokemon in general. I just suggest you change him a li'l bit:

Darkrai@Life Orb
Modest/Timid, 4 HP/252 Sp.Atk/252 Spe
-Dark Void
-Nasty Plot
-Dark Pulse
-Focus Blast/HP Fighting
Darkrai

This set seems like a killer set to me. Dark Void puts 'em to sleep, allowing you to set up NP's all over the place. Then the obvious unresisted DarkBlast combo. It's up to you to decide whether you should use Focus Blast or HP Fighting. One is powerful, the other one is accurate. Maybe you should just stick with HP Fighting as you raise your Sp.Atk anyway.

Moving on, I seriously suggest to change Raichu. Just like something like Furret, it won't do as much as other pokes can do. I suggest you replace him + Suicune (sort of, making another free spot) with Rotom-W:

Rotom-W@Leftovers/ Choice Specs
Modest, 128 Def/252 Sp.Atk/128 Sp.Def
-Thunderbolt
-Hydro Pump
-Will-o-wisp
-Volt Switch/Pain Split
Rotom-W

This is a killer set. Thunderbolt and Hydro Pump provide STAB good coverage, WoW cripples physical attackers and Volt Switch is there to allow you to scout and get out of a nasty situation. You can also consider Pain Split to heal you in front of things like Blissey and Snorlax.

Like this, you have a free spot, as Suicune would also be replaced by Rotom-W. I suggest you use a Fighting-type pokemon there, a pokemon like Terrakion:

Terrakion@Life Orb
Adamant/Jolly, 4 HP/252 Atk/ 252 Spe
-Swords Dance/Rock Polish
-Close Combat
-Stone Edge
-X-scissor/Quick Attack
Terrakion

The boosting move depends from which nature you chose, so you can boost the other stat. CC and SE give you awesome STABmoves, while X-scissor is there for coverage and Quick Attack gives you guaranteed priority.

You could also consider a poke like Breloom or Conkeldurr in this spot, just a good fighting type 'mon.

I would also consider changing Gliscors moveset to this:
-Substitute
-Protect
-Earthquake
-Ice Fang/Swords Dance

Just as annoying, but you focus on being untouchable with Protect+Sub+Poison Heal.
EQ as awesome STAB-move, the last move for coverage or to make EQ hit enormously hard.

I also suggest changing Tangrowths moveset to this:
-Leech Seed
-Substitute
-Giga Drain
-Focus Blast/Toxic

That's all for now. I'm not suggesting so many changes because your team sucks, nononono, i'm just suggesting many options in just one post. You can just pick what you think is correct and worth trying from all my suggestions.

I hope I helped,

Cap'n
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I will change the things I think are good when I get to my computer (this is my phone).

As for Darkrai, what does hp attack mean?

Tangrowth won't make for a very good annoyer as his sp. Def is horrible.

The rest is good though, and I will change it.
 
OK, For Victini, I wouldn't have Inferno, because you can't depend on it's accuracy. Maybe Flamethrower to replace it.


For Gliscor, I would give her agility instead of tailwind, because it lasts longer, unless you want it for double or triple battles, and in my experience, stalling doesn't work in doubles and triples. Also, if they are genderless like metagross, you will have huge problems.

For Darkrai, I wouldn't give him roar of time, because of the cool down. It's just unnecessary. Also, his ability is just dead weight. If this is no restrictions, I would give it Dark Void. Also, I think you don't need the Dragon Fang. Maybe Leftovers or Life Orb.

For Tangrowth, I wouldn't give him focus miss, because, well, it always misses (almost always). Someone could just double team and you would have to switch, giving him a free attack, or more double teams (Because this is no restrictions). Also, because your raising Sp attack, why do you have power whip. Because your trying to stall with him, I would give him giga drain for more hp input. Also, I would also give him Ancient Power/Rock Slide.

By the way, I feel like your pictures are unnecessarily large.

I understand that I might not be in the right position to give these changes.
 
Obbmud99 said:
OK, For Victini, I wouldn't have Inferno, because you can't depend on it's accuracy. Maybe Flamethrower to replace it.


For Gliscor, I would give her agility instead of tailwind, because it lasts longer, unless you want it for double or triple battles, and in my experience, stalling doesn't work in doubles and triples. Also, if they are genderless like metagross, you will have huge problems.

For Darkrai, I wouldn't give him roar of time, because of the cool down. It's just unnecessary. Also, his ability is just dead weight. If this is no restrictions, I would give it Dark Void. Also, I think you don't need the Dragon Fang. Maybe Leftovers or Life Orb.

For Tangrowth, I wouldn't give him focus miss, because, well, it always misses (almost always). Someone could just double team and you would have to switch, giving him a free attack, or more double teams (Because this is no restrictions). Also, because your raising Sp attack, why do you have power whip. Because your trying to stall with him, I would give him giga drain for more hp input. Also, I would also give him Ancient Power/Rock Slide.

By the way, I feel like your pictures are unnecessarily large.

I understand that I might not be in the right position to give these changes.
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Thanks dude. most of this stuff i just forgot to do, or put in the wrong thing, (like dark pulse was ACTUALLY meant to be dark void, i just made a typo, aslo, tangrowth had earthqake not Focus blast.) but thanks for making me notice them, and the advice!

see you tomorrow, and the day after that, and the day after that, but not the day after that. Literally.
 
Undefinedmaster said:
Thanks dude. most of this stuff i just forgot to do, or put in the wrong thing, (like dark pulse was ACTUALLY meant to be dark void, i just made a typo, aslo, tangrowth had earthqake not Focus blast.) but thanks for making me notice them, and the advice!

see you tomorrow, and the day after that, and the day after that, but not the day after that. Literally.
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....................Now I'm scared....................
 
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