RMT - My personal team (wi-fi OU)

I hope i putted this right place :3.

Lets begin:

this team is my personal team what i am played and tested it. It works right now pretty well but need more fixing. I played whit this team 2 months now. Balance is almost perfect and strenght is above average.

I build my teams from non-legend pokemons. I think my team most weakness lack of power or lack of speed.

Other wakness for my team looks like baton bass combos and legendary pokemons like terrakion. Im trying find way take these weaknesses out so i can see other weaknesses about my team.

Maybe strongest weakness is team what is builded around blissey. I am thinking put taunt for my ghost type pokemon but im here looking other suggestions and tips for this team, how i can improve it more better using non-legendarys. Fighting type pokemons will create hard time for my team but that dont happen often.

I've tried many variations about this team whit many differend pokemons in testings. Right now best team variation read below.
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Weavile - lv 100 - item: Focus sash - move set: Ice punch, ice shard, Pursuit, Nightslash - Attack and speed iv: 31 ev: 255 - Nature: Jolly - Ability: pressure

explanation: Weavile is my fast sweepper against dragons,psychic and ghost pokemons and others which have weakness for dark or ice type moves.

I chose move set beacuse, i noticed some players change pokemon lot or using dragon type pokemons like salamence/Dragonite.

I chose attack and speed iv 31 cuz its only way make good weavile. Weavile have weak defences so it get killed 1 hit, and thats why focus sash so i can do 2 ice shards or 1 ice punch and 1 ice shard and make sure opponent pokemon faints.

Synergy whit other pokemons is good.

Weavile ends pretty good pokemons what other pokemons in team was weakened thanks to its high attack.

I chose Jolly nature cuz speed is best way for this pokemon so it can keep up whit fast pokemons and confirm that i kill some type pokemons what weavile can kill easily.
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Gallade - Lv 100 - Item: Sitrus berry - move set: Psycho cut, earthquake,sword dance,drain punch - Attack and speed and sp def iv: 31, attack and speed ev: 255 - Nature: Jolly - Ability: Steadfast

Explanation: Gallade is slower than weavile but its fast enough take out most of fighting or steel type pokemons what will make problems for weavile (thats why i chose jolly nature too).

I chose 3 iv 31 beacuse gallade can be small sp tank if opponent got my sp tank fainted.

I chose move set beacuse it was best what i saw to give for gallade and help take out lot of weakness for my pokemons.

I chose sitrus berry as item beacuse it gives health back and give more chanses use gallade many ways and be helpful if opponent team have pokemons what only gallade can take out.

My gallade role is take out most of pokemons what are dangerous for my weavile.

I chose steadfast ability over justified for flincher pokemons. It rises speed and will make my gallade faster, sometimes it will backfire but works and make most of opponent pokemons fall.

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Togekiss - Lv 100 - Item: expert belt - move set: aura sphere, silver wind, heat wave, air slash - Sp. Attack and speed iv: 31 ev: 255 - Nature: Timid - Ability: serene grace

explanation: Togekiss role is sp attack sweepper. Many pokemons have high defence but weak sp defence this pokemon in team will be confirm hurting those pokemons.

I chose expert belt cuz it make super effective moves stronger. I chose ev's make my togekiss stronger.

Timid nature will help my togekiss go over some pokemons but modest would do well too though so thinking if nature would change and togekiss would be stronger but for now i saw timid be more fitting to this pokemon.

This works whit many teams. but it have some problems whit drizzle or sandstorm teams cuz its moves 1) Are weakened or 2) take damage or both.
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Jellicent - Lv 100 - Item: leftovers - move set: Energy ball, surf, recover,shadow ball - Hp and sp attack iv: 31 Ev: 255 - Nature: Modest - Ability: Cursed Body

explanation: Jellicent i chose for changing it and take normal type or fighting type attacks as defence.

So i can say jellicent role is making fight type pokemons useless most of time.

EVs i chose beacuse hp help recover and is highest stat and sp attack is strong too so it can take out lot water and ground type pokemons when live.

Modest nature helping against ground and water type monster so it can do high damage to them.

Cursed body help take nasty moves out so they cant use them for a while. This pokemon works whit every team what i noticed and will help out lot.
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Leafeon - Lv 100 - Item: Choise scarf - move set: Leaf Blade, sunny day, aerial ace, roar - Attack and defence iv: 31, Ev 255 - Nature: impish - Ability: Leaf guard

explanation: Leafeon role is defence tank (impish boost this stat). Thats why defence iv 31.

Attack iv is 31 cuz leafeon have strong attack which will make for leafeon more stronger.

I chose moves ruining weathers like hail,sandstorm and rain what makes opponent pokemons weaker or useless and taking out some pokemons. Roar is good move whit choise scarf and it will change opponent pokemons out what i cant handle or what would be otherwise hard to predict.

I chose leaf guard ability thanks to sunny day i wont be hitted whit any status problem.

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Umbreon - Lv 100 - Item: blackglasses - move set: Curse,payback,sucker punch, moonlight - Sp defence, defence and attack iv 31. Sp def and attack ev: 255 - Nature: Careful - ability: Synchronize

explanation: umbreon role is sp tank so it can take most sp attacks to itself. Attack and sp defence iv 31 cuz its good whit its move sets.

Defence iv just beacuse it wouldnt die so easily for nomal attack moves.

I chose move set beacuse curse help umbreon defence and make it more tanky + attack rise so it can OHKO pokemons out what i done lot of times. moonlight is for health so its harder get umbreon down.

Payback and sucker punch hurt lot whit curse and 1 hit k.o most pokemon types even if damage would be x1.

Synchronize ability i chose for status problems, when umbreon get one opponent pokemon can get one too. Blackglasses item help umbreon ohko whit sucker punch and payback thanks to its rise dark type hits + umbreon own 1,5 power more. Umbreon is sp tank but same time it can hit hard back to opponent.

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So this is my team. I hope people can give good tips improve my team. If i have something wrong whit this topic, free well tell me what i forgot and i will fix it when people will tell. Oh yea, try suggest non-legendary pokemons to improve this team. I try create teams whitout legendarys but free well suggest what you see best. If you suggest non-legendary over legendary its first in priority. If you suggest legendary, i maybe ingore it for a while reading non-legendary suggestions. I hope my bad english wont make lot problems for helpful people :). I follow this thread as much as possible so i can do fixes and see suggestions.


Weavile (F) @ Focus Sash
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SAtk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Ice Punch
- Ice Shard
- Pursuit
- Night Slash

Gallade (M) @ Sitrus Berry
Trait: Steadfast
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Psycho Cut
- Earthquake
- Swords Dance
- Drain Punch

Togekiss (F) @ Expert Belt
Trait: Serene Grace
EVs: 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Aura Sphere
- Silver Wind
- Heat Wave
- Air Slash

Jellicent (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Cursed Body
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SAtk
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Energy Ball
- Surf
- Recover
- Shadow Ball

Leafeon (F) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Leaf Guard
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Def
Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Leaf Blade
- Sunny Day
- Aerial Ace
- Roar

Umbreon (F) @ BlackGlasses
Trait: Synchronize
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Curse
- Payback
- Sucker Punch
- Moonlight
 
this post is a little bad done, you need to make it more easily to read so we can easily rate it. You seem pretty weak to any offensive treat in ou, most notable scarf rakion and scizor. Even weavile is 2HKO with Draco meteor ,thanks to the focus, otherwise it is an OHKO. Jellicent isn't made for be an attacker, it is an special wall, leafeon and umbreon are not good in ou to use, gallade is outclassed by all the others fighting in the game. I suggest rebuild your team, Maybe give weavile low kick or brick break over one other move, pheraps over ice punch, give togekiss flametrower over heat wave, and give it roost and t-wave instead of the other moves and an bulky attacker Evs : 180 hp / 56 atk sp / rest Sdef may work, jellicent can be replaced by a phisical wall or an dragon blocker, ferrothorn do all this things, the main phisical wall set can work, instead of gallade I suggest an Lucario or an Conkeldurr, I think you better put an spinner, you need too a rock setter, ferrothorn can put rocks if you want , but you desperately need an spinner. Maybe starmie can work:
Starmie @ life orb
Evs : 4 hp / 252 speed / 252 sp atk
nature : timid
Trait : natural cure , or analytic (hit hard on switches)
• Surf
• Ice Beam
• Rapid Spin
• Psyshock
This set can work well. Ice beam hit dragons, psyshock hit blissey on switch for a great damage thank to analytic , surf secondary stab. I haven't nothing else to say. Gl and see ya.
 
this post is a little bad done, you need to make it more easily to read so we can easily rate it. You seem pretty weak to any offensive treat in ou, most notable scarf rakion and scizor. Even weavile is 2HKO with Draco meteor ,thanks to the focus, otherwise it is an OHKO. Jellicent isn't made for be an attacker, it is an special wall, leafeon and umbreon are not good in ou to use, gallade is outclassed by all the others fighting in the game. I suggest rebuild your team, Maybe give weavile low kick or brick break over one other move, pheraps over ice punch, give togekiss flametrower over heat wave, and give it roost and t-wave instead of the other moves and an bulky attacker Evs : 180 hp / 56 atk sp / rest Sdef may work, jellicent can be replaced by a phisical wall or an dragon blocker, ferrothorn do all this things, the main phisical wall set can work, instead of gallade I suggest an Lucario or an Conkeldurr, I think you better put an spinner, you need too a rock setter, ferrothorn can put rocks if you want , but you desperately need an spinner. Maybe starmie can work:
Starmie @ life orb
Evs : 4 hp / 252 speed / 252 sp atk
nature : timid
Trait : natural cure , or analytic (hit hard on switches)
• Surf
• Ice Beam
• Rapid Spin
• Psyshock
This set can work well. Ice beam hit dragons, psyshock hit blissey on switch for a great damage thank to analytic , surf secondary stab. I haven't nothing else to say. Gl and see ya.

First: how i can make this easier read? Would be helpful explain how (bad english sorry).

second: I wouldnt like rebuild this, i was thinking conkeldurr replace gallade beacuse it wont die as easy as lucario would or gallade.

third: I was thinking replace jellicent and leafeon for other pokemon.

Leafeon would be replaced whit poison heal gliscor maybe?

Jellicent i would replace something else good which help me take out terrakion and keldeo (Espeon?).

Umbreon is pretty good actually, umbreon never failed me and was always lead to win if i get enough time curse, then i just need payback and sucker punch = gg so its hard give up about umbreon.

If i give roost and t-wave i need give up aura sphere (which is pretty helpful really) and silver wind (what i consider chaning to roost) or replacing whole togekiss to volcarona.

Weavile is good against dragons whit ice punch + ice shard combination and pursuit is helpful against ghost types or psychic if opponent gonna try change so maybe night slash would be replaced whit brick break. Dunno yet, i wanna see what other people say about my team and what i would change.

Starmie i can think about it replacing jellicent in this team, maybe it works. Who knows.

Ferrothorn is pretty good, that i agree but it have too much weaknesses even if i use spikes,stealth rock,Seed bomb and leech seed/gyro ball/protect. Item what i would use whit ferrothorn would be red card or something else as good.

More suggestions are welcome and they help me lot. I dont wanna see any legendary pokemon suggestion but they can be suggest too but i ingore them about 85% chanse and loooknig non-legend suggestions beacuse my style is using non-legends.

Below is somekind another variation but thinking replace lucario whit conkeldurr

Weavile (F) @ Focus Sash
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Ice Punch
- Ice Shard
- Pursuit
- Brick Break

Lucario (F) @ Life Orb
Trait: Steadfast
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Ice Punch
- Close Combat
- Swords Dance
- ExtremeSpeed

Togekiss (F) @ Expert Belt
Trait: Serene Grace
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SAtk / 4 SDef
Modest Nature
- Air Slash
- Aura Sphere
- Nasty Plot
- Roost

Gliscor (F) @ Toxic Orb
Trait: Poison Heal
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def
Impish Nature
- Substitute
- Toxic
- Protect
- Earthquake

Umbreon (F) @ BlackGlasses
Trait: Synchronize
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 SDef
Careful Nature
- Curse
- Wish
- Payback
- Sucker Punch

Breloom (F) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Technician
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Bullet Seed
- Spore
- Mach Punch
- Low Sweep
 
If you would like to improve the layout of this RMT there are a few tools/layout designs that can really help catch the eye, so to speak.
First of all, by using sprites next to the Pokemon, it will easily help in identifying what Pokemon it is, without the need to read too much information. Try out this site for example, http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites.html
By clicking completely into a sprite, you may copy the link, then, while editing your RMT, go to the small mountain icon, copy the link, and viola! You now have sprites in your RMT.
Also by using the import/export feature on PS! You can copy/paste the set information in a much neater fashion, since it displays all relevant information.
Lastly, Just through making some nice headings, adding some colour, bold, font etc, it can overall just make a nicer RMT.
I know this wasn't a rate, but I just thought I should help a little :).
 
thanks :).. i will do that

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Starmie @ Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature
- Ice Beam
- Rapid Spin
- Surf
- Psyshock

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Lucario (F) @ Life Orb
Trait: Steadfast
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Ice Punch
- Close Combat
- Swords Dance
- ExtremeSpeed

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Jolteon (F) @ Air Balloon
Trait: Volt Absorb
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature
- Thunder
- Thunder Wave
- Volt Switch
- Substitute

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Gliscor (F) @ Toxic Orb
Trait: Poison Heal
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def
Impish Nature
- Substitute
- Toxic
- Protect
- Earthquake

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Umbreon (F) @ BlackGlasses
Trait: Synchronize
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 SDef
Careful Nature
- Curse
- Wish
- Payback
- Sucker Punch

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Breloom (F) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Technician
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Bullet Seed
- Spore
- Mach Punch
- Low Sweep



tested pic thing + this is how my team looks now. Works lot better. I'm little sad about i had to throw away 70% my team pokemons from first plan. But there wasnt other way?
 
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