SM Ubers I know there will be some flaws, so help me fix this.

[Endercreeper]

Charizard-Mega-X @ Charizardite X
Ability: Tough Claws
- Flamethrower
- Hyper Beam
- Fly
- Crunch

Greninja-Ash @ Focus Sash
Ability: Battle Bond
- Hydro Pump
- Hyper Beam
- Shadow Sneak
- Grass Knot

Raichu @ Focus Sash
Ability: Lightning Rod
EVs: 16 Spe
IVs: 1 Atk
- Thunder
- Hyper Beam
- Zap Cannon
- Hidden Power [Fire]

Jolteon @ Weakness Policy
Ability: Volt Absorb
- Shadow Ball
- Thunderbolt
- Double-Edge
- Volt Switch

Mewtwo-Mega-X @ Mewtwonite X
Ability: Steadfast
- Hyper Beam
- Psychic
- Psycho Cut
- Body Slam

Arceus-Ice @ Icium Z
Ability: Multitype
- Ice Beam
- Aqua Tail
- Dragon Pulse
- Earth Power

 

[TheTapDancer]

I'm rather surprised this hasn't been locked. You should provide more details about the roles your mons have.

That said, a very quick look over this team tells me you're not very familiar with ubers. I would advise sticking to a sample team until you've learned the basics.

 

[Endercreeper]

I'm rather surprised this hasn't been locked. You should provide more details about the roles your mons have.

That said, a very quick look over this team tells me you're not very familiar with ubers. I would advise sticking to a sample team until you've learned the basics.

Well, I have been using the Wristwork team. and for this one, its one I made myself, and I wanna see what can be better, they all pretty much have the same role in battle. Just plain offense.

 

[TheTapDancer]

Well, I have been using the Wristwork team. and for this one, its one I made myself, and I wanna see what can be better, they all pretty much have the same role in battle. Just plain offense.

Okay, I'll pull this apart then.

Your first four mons are all unplayable. Zard-X doesnt benefit from special attacks, Fly is useless in the tier, and even with correct sets zard just loses to the format's key threats. Jolteon and Raichu will lose to the tier's water types, they're so weak. Especially with a weakness policy, Jolteon is only weak to one type, and he's never going to survive a hit from it. Sash-Gren doesn't do enough damage to anything, especially as groudon just eats its hydro pumps, and hyper beam is bad.

Honestly, you shouldn't try to teambuild until you've played a bit of the game, but a few general comments:
1. Your mons don't have EVs. Every pokemon should use all of its EVs, without exception.
2. Hyper Beam is probably the worst move in the game.
3. Low accuracy attacks are generally bad.
4. Focus Sash is only good on a setup sweeper, and only when you have sufficient hazard control.
5. The vast majority of attackers want to stick to using only physical or special attacks.
6. Don't use two mega stones, only one of them can mega-evolve.

 

[IronBullet]

Welcome to Smogon! I'm locking your RMT for the time being as the forum rules require that you provide in-depth descriptions for each Pokemon to explain their roles. All six Pokemon also need to have full details of their EV spreads. Please read the rules carefully and take a look at Team Showcase to see the level of detail we require. PM me with updated descriptions and I'll be happy to unlock this.