I don't see anything wrong with that other than one thing "I think apricity is more likely to be scum mostly because his language has been more aggressive and he hasn't been listing any reasoning" is based off of what has happened in this game, I think we can all agree that Apricity has been aggressive.
"instead is making mostly personal retorts" I don't think retort is being used correctly here or maybe i dont know what retort means. I assume hes saying that apricitys scum readings of himself and viper are due to past-bias apricity has.
"That said, I do think some of my bias against apricity from outside of this game is affecting my judgement, which is why I am not voting yet because I want outside opinions to check my bias."
he then states this, and I assume hes saying this because he kinda thinks hes only seeing apricity as aggressive as he has a past-bias. He just doesnt want his scum-reads to clouded by a bias so hes wondering if we also see apricity as aggressive.
If were gonna bring up a post that makes Heal seem irrational is the poem post, which doesnt really add anything and is kinda just out of place, however that doesn't really give me a scum read, as it just looks like overthinking. Which it seems like Heal does a lot of.