UU Bewear

Gadget

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:ss/bewear:
[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Drain Punch / Close Combat
move 3: Double-Edge
move 4: Darkest Lariat
item: Lum Berry / Silk Scarf
ability: Fluffy
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Bewear is a powerful Fighting-type that sets itself apart from other offensive Fighting-types like Machamp and Pangoro with its ability Fluffy, which grants it the ability to switch into and set up against threats such as Golisopod and Barbaracle and gives it opportunities to fire off strong attacks. In addition, Fluffy allows Bewear to beat Cobalion if Bewear has +2 Attack and is healthy, something most Fighting-type Swords Dance users like Lucario and Pangoro struggle with. Its decent Speed tier also gives it an advantage over Machamp and Pangoro, as it outspeeds both of them as well as Pokemon like Modest Sylveon and defensive Jellicent. In addition, Double Edge allows Bewear to blow past traditional Fighting-type checks such as Galarian Weezing and Sylveon. Swords Dance is needed to OHKO would-be checks such as Galarian Weezing, Milotic, and Sylveon after Stealth Rock damage. Close Combat can be run over Drain Punch for higher damage output, allowing Bewear to OHKO Rhyperior after a Swords Dance boost, but the lack of recovery provided by Drain Punch and the Defense and Special Defense drops from Close Combat allow Pokemon such as Cobalion to revenge kill Bewear more easily. Lum Berry is the item of choice in order to allow Bewear to soak up a status move that would otherwise cripple it, giving it an easier time setting up against Scald users such as Milotic. Silk Scarf can be run instead, allowing Bewear to OHKO Milotic, defensive Rotom-W, and Sylveon at +2, all of which would otherwise threaten it. Darkest Lariat is used almost exclusively to hit Ghost-types such as Jellicent and Doublade, which are immune to Bewear's other moves, but it also helps Bewear beat Reuniclus

Bewear is fairly physically bulky, but it struggles to take hits from most special attackers like Gardevoir, Toxtricity, Noivern, and Chandelure. As such, Choice Scarf users such as Flygon and Darmanitan are excellent partners due to their ability to threaten out these Pokemon. Gigalith, Bronzong, and Rhyperior have access to Stealth Rock, which allows Bewear to pick up KOs on bulkier Pokemon such as Milotic. Chandelure in particular is one of the biggest threats to Bewear, so Fire-resistant Pokemon like the aforementioned Gigalith and Incineroar are great partners. Pivots such as Noivern, Flygon, and Incineroar are great partners, as Bewear can set up on their defensive checks like Gigalith, Milotic, and Rhyperior. Bewear also appreciates Wish support from Pokemon like Sylveon and Umbreon, allowing it to more easily switch into attacks from the likes of Escavalier and Doublade. Escavalier and Doublade make great partners, as both check common threats to Bewear such as Galarian Weezing, Haxorus, and Roserade. Doublade especially appreciates Bewear punching holes in the opposing team so that it can sweep with ease.

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This analysis has a lot of issues, and large amounts of it would need to be rewritten by the QC team to make this usable. There are problematic missconceptions such as claiming that Bewear can switch into Rhyperior's EQ safely, due to a fundamental misunderstanding of how Fluffy works (only contact moves), and the introduction doesn't clearly give an impression of why you would choose to use this Pokemon over other Fighting-types, and exactly how it is outclassed by them otherwise.

The team options are also a big issue. Not only are they full of fluff, talking about obvious dex info and bewear switching into SE/IP intended for Noivern/Flygon without talking about specific scenarios, but they are also extremely vague, such as listing a far too long list of special attackers and then mentioning a few special walls without making any connections between the two and discussing any synergies these special walls have with Bewear, and are rather generally lacking in info and content. I recommend that you look at some of the other analyses that have gone through the QC process to see what sort of stuff is required.

Unfortunately I am going to have to QC Reject this, I feel like it would be better if someone else with more experience with this Pokemon wrote this. If you have any questions, feel free to talk to me on Discord about it.

Edit: Feel free to put this back into WIP for the time being to try and sort these issues out, and let us know when you are ready again.
 
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I would like to put this into qc again. if this is not good enough I will drop it for someone else. Major thanks to Lilburr for helping me with this.

(Grammar changes on 5/12/2020 at 9:22 Pm,no content changed, just wording. thanks again Lilburr)
( 5/14/2020, Changed name to match name on smogon.)
 
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we're getting somewhere! comments are in pink
:ss/bewear:
[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Drain Punch / Close Combat
move 3: Double Edge
move 4: Darkest Lariat
item: Lum Berry / Silk Scarf
ability: Fluffy
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Bewear is a powerful Fighting-type that functions as a hard hitter, but where it really shines is through its ability, Fluffy. Fluffy is what separates Bewear from other offensive Fighting types in the tier, like Machamp and Pangoro, granting it the ability to switch into threats such as Golisopod and Barbaracle and giving it opportunities to fire off strong attacks. Its decent Speed tier also gives it an advantage over Machamp and Pangoro, as it outspeeds both of the aforementioned Fighting-types as well as Pokemon like Modest Sylveon and Adamant Incineroar. also mention its stab double edge giving it the ability to blow past traditional fighting checks like weez and sylv, sorta like you have in the next sentence Swords Dance is needed to threaten would-be checks like Doublade, Galarian Weezing and Sylveon. Close Combat can be run over Drain Punch for a higher damage output, allowing Bewear to OHKO Rhyperior after a boost, but it cuts into its longevity. Lum Berry is the item of choice in order to allow Bewear to soak up a status move that would otherwise cripple it, giving it an easier time setting up mention that it can set up on things like milotic in particular as a result since it doesn't fear a scald burn. Silk Scarf can be run instead, allowing Bewear to OHKO Milotic, defensive Rotom-W, and Sylveon at +2, all of which would otherwise threaten Bewear.

Bewear is fairly bulky on the physical side, but it struggles to take hits from most special attackers like Gardevoir, Toxtricity, and Noivern. This makes specially defensive Pokemon such as Gigalith, Milotic, and Incineroar Bronzong excellent partners for Bewear as they patch up holes in its defensive capabilities, checking Pokemon like Noivern and Chandelure. mention that giga and zong also set up rocks, which is important for bewear to achieve kos on fatter mons like opposing milo. could probably fit a mention of rhyperior in here, too In addition, pivots such as Noivern, Flygon and Incineroar are great partners for Bewear, as Bewear can set up on their defensive checks like Gigalith, Milotic and Rhyperior. Bewear also appreciates Wish support from Pokemon like Sylveon and Umbreon, as it can use it to more easily switch into attacks from the likes of Escavalier and Doublade. They also check special attackers like Heliolisk and Espeon for Bewear.

mention steel types in particular here to compensate for the bear's weaknesses - doublade's a great partner for example, switching into things like cobalion, lucario, and cleric sylveon. escavalier would also work here, checking stuff like roserade and haxorus which can be a problem bc mold breaker ignores fluffy
mention offensive fairies like gardevoir and sylveon, they pressure a lot of bewear's best checks like doublade, weezing, opposing sylveon etc.
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glad we managed to salvage this, gj :>
 
Lilburr said:
we're getting somewhere! comments are in pink
:ss/bewear:
[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Drain Punch / Close Combat
move 3: Double Edge
move 4: Darkest Lariat
item: Lum Berry / Silk Scarf
ability: Fluffy
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Bewear is a powerful Fighting-type that functions as a hard hitter, but where it really shines is through its ability, Fluffy. Fluffy is what separates Bewear from other offensive Fighting types in the tier, like Machamp and Pangoro, granting it the ability to switch into and set up against threats such as Golisopod and Barbaracle and giving it opportunities to fire off strong attacks. i'd also comment on how its ability prevents it being revenge killed after Swords Dance by Cobalion, unless severely chipped, unlike other SD friends like lucario and pangoro. Its decent Speed tier also gives it an advantage over Machamp and Pangoro, as it outspeeds both of the aforementioned Fighting-types as well as Pokemon like Modest Sylveon and Adamant Incineroar. also mention its stab double edge giving it the ability to blow past traditional fighting checks like weez and sylv, sorta like you have in the next sentence Swords Dance is needed to threaten would-be checks like Doublade, Galarian Weezing and Sylveon. Close Combat can be run over Drain Punch for a higher damage output, allowing Bewear to OHKO Rhyperior after a boost, but it cuts into its longevity. Lum Berry is the item of choice in order to allow Bewear to soak up a status move that would otherwise cripple it, giving it an easier time setting up mention that it can set up on things like milotic in particular as a result since it doesn't fear a scald burn. Silk Scarf can be run instead, allowing Bewear to OHKO Milotic, defensive Rotom-W, and Sylveon at +2, all of which would otherwise threaten Bewear.

Bewear is fairly bulky on the physical side, but it struggles to take hits from most special attackers like Gardevoir, Toxtricity, and Noivern. This makes specially defensive Pokemon such as Gigalith, Milotic, and Incineroar Bronzong excellent partners for Bewear as they patch up holes in its defensive capabilities, checking Pokemon like Noivern and Chandelure. mention that giga and zong also set up rocks, which is important for bewear to achieve kos on fatter mons like opposing milo. could probably fit a mention of rhyperior in here, too In addition, pivots such as Noivern, Flygon and Incineroar are great partners for Bewear, as Bewear can set up on their defensive checks like Gigalith, Milotic and Rhyperior. Bewear also appreciates Wish support from Pokemon like Sylveon and Umbreon, as it can use it to more easily switch into attacks from the likes of Escavalier and Doublade. They also check special attackers like Heliolisk and Espeon for Bewear.

mention steel types in particular here to compensate for the bear's weaknesses - doublade's a great partner for example, switching into things like cobalion, lucario, and cleric sylveon. escavalier would also work here, checking stuff like roserade and haxorus which can be a problem bc mold breaker ignores fluffy definitely put a lot of focus on Escavalier here since its also checking Psychic types for you.
mention offensive fairies like gardevoir and sylveon, they pressure a lot of bewear's best checks like doublade, weezing, opposing sylveon etc.

put more focus on your Fire resists in this section, Chandelure in particular is a massive problem because of Fluffy. You have stuff like Milotic, Umbreon, and Incineroar mentioned already, so just put more focus on Chandy in those bits.

Bewear is pretty slow, so mention some speed control you can pair with it like Noivern and Flygon to pressure stuff like Roserade, Lucario, and Heliolisk.

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glad we managed to salvage this, gj :>
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adding onto Lily's AM check here, my comments are in blue. Implement everything from both of us here, 1/2 after.
 
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Gadget said:
:ss/bewear:
[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Drain Punch / Close Combat
move 3: Double Edge
move 4: Darkest Lariat
item: Lum Berry / Silk Scarf
ability: Fluffy
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Bewear is a powerful Fighting-type that functions as a hard hitter, but where it really shines is through its ability, Fluffy. Fluffy is what separates Bewear from sets itself apart from other offensive Fighting types in the tier, like Machamp and Pangoro, through its ability Fluffy, (This just makes it flow better and gets straight to the point) granting it the ability to switch into and set up against threats such as Golisopod and Barbaracle and giving it opportunities to fire off strong attacks. In addition Fluffy allows Bewear to beat Cobalion if Bewear has +2 Attack and is healthy, something most fighting type swords dance users like Lucario and Pangoro struggle with. Its decent Speed tier also gives it an advantage over Machamp and Pangoro, as it outspeeds both of the aforementioned Fighting-types as well as Pokemon like Modest Sylveon and Adamant Incineroar. Most are Jolly so I would remove or find another example In addition, Double Edge, allowes Bewear to blow past traditional fighting type checks such as Galarian Weezing Remove extra space or Sylveon. Swords Dance is needed to threaten would-be checks like Doublade, Galarian Weezing and Sylveon. This is currently filler so be more specific, does it guarantee OHKOs 2HKOs on these Mons Close Combat can be run over Drain Punch for a higher damage output, allowing Bewear to OHKO Rhyperior after a boost, but it cuts into its longevity. I would also mention the downside of being revenge killed easier by Pokemon like Cobalion after the Defense drop Lum Berry is the item of choice in order to allow Bewear to soak up a status move that would otherwise cripple it, giving it an easier time setting up against Scald users such as Milotic, as it does not have to fear a burn. Silk Scarf can be run instead, allowing Bewear to OHKO Milotic, defensive Rotom-W, and Sylveon at +2, all of which would otherwise threaten Bewear. You need to mention what Darkest Lariet helps it break. Doub, Reuni, Jellicent

Bewear is fairly bulky on the physical side, but it struggles to take hits from most special attackers like Gardevoir, Toxtricity, Noivern and Chandalure. This makes specially defensive Pokemon such as Gigalith, Milotic, and Bronzong excellent partners for Bewear as they patch up holes in its defensive capabilities, checking Pokemon such as Chandelure. I'm not a fan of this whole point, sure it isn't as good on the SpD but the reason it loses to all of these is because they carry super-effective coverage and are faster. Just make this about partners that can deal with faster revenge killers like these to help it potentially clean late-game. In particular Gigalith and Bronzong and Rhyperior have access to Stealth Rock, which once set up allows Bewear to pick up kills on fatter Pokemon such as Milotic. Chandalure in particular is one of the biggest threats to Bewear so Fire-Type resistances like the aforementioned Gigalith and Incineroar great partners. In addition, pivots such as Noivern, Flygon and Incineroar are great partners for Bewear, as Bewear can set up on their defensive checks like Gigalith, Milotic and Rhyperior. Bewear also appreciates Wish support from Pokemon like Sylveon and Umbreon, as it can use it to more easily switch into attacks from the likes of Escavalier and Doublade. Escavalier and Doublade make great partners to Bewear as both check common threats to Bewear such as Galarian Weezing, Haxorus, and Roserade. In particular Escavalier is especially good, as it is a far better check to psychic types like Espeon and Gardivoir. Frankly none of these examples really justify giving this line to Escav. Doub pressures them enough from just revenging with Sneak. Necrozma and Reuniclus are the main Psychic-type that Escav handles better. Mention how Doublade is a late-game sweeper that appreciates Bewear breaking... for it to sweep Faster Pokemon such as Noivern and Flygon make great partners for Bewear as they prevent Bewear's relatively slow speed tier from being taken advantage of by Pokemon such as Roserade, Lucario, and Heliolisk. Move this point to be after the revenge killer point I made you add at the start as you can follow off the point.

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:ss/bewear:
[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Drain Punch / Close Combat
move 3: Double Edge
move 4: Darkest Lariat
item: Lum Berry / Silk Scarf
ability: Fluffy
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Bewear is a powerful Fighting-type that sets itself apart from other offensive Fighting-types(AH) in the tier,(RC) like Machamp and Pangoro,(RC) through for its ability Fluffy, granting it the ability to switch into and set up against threats such as Golisopod and Barbaracle,(AC) and giving it opportunities to fire off strong attacks. In addition,(AC) Fluffy allows Bewear to beat Cobalion if Bewear has +2 Attack and is healthy enough after a Swords Dance boost, something most fighting type swords dance Fighting-type Swords Dance users like Lucario and Pangoro struggle with. Its decent Speed tier also gives it an advantage over Machamp and Pangoro, as it outspeeds both of the aforementioned Fighting-types as well as Pokemon like Modest Sylveon and Defensive Jellicent.(fix spacing)In addition, Double Edge,(RC) allowes allows Bewear to blow past traditional fighting type Fighting-type checks such as Galarian Weezing or and Sylveon. Swords Dance is needed to OHKO would-be checks such after stealth rock damage Such such as Galarian Weezing, Milotic,(AC) and Sylveon after Stealth Rock damage. Close Combat can be run over Drain Punch for a higher damage output, allowing Bewear to OHKO Rhyperior after a Swords Dance boost, but the lack of healing recovery provided by drain punch Drain Punch,(RC) and the defence and special defense drops Defense and Special Defense drops from close combat Close Combat allow it to be Revenge Killed by Pokemon such as Cobalion and far easier to revenge kill Bewear more easily. Lum Berry is the item of choice in order to allow Bewear to soak up a status move that would otherwise cripple it, giving it an easier time setting up against Scald users such as Milotic,(RC) as it does not have to fear a burn. Silk Scarf can be run instead, allowing Bewear to OHKO Milotic, defensive Rotom-W, and Sylveon at +2, all of which would otherwise threaten Bewear it. Darkest Lariat is used almost exclusively to hit Ghost-types(AH) such as Jellicent and Doublade, who otherwise which are immune to Bewear’s other moves,(RP -> AC) In addition, Darkest Lariat hits Reuniclus and Psychic-types like Reuniclus (something was missing originally)

Bewear is fairly bulky on the physical side, but it struggles to take hits from most special attackers like Gardevoir, Toxtricity, Noivern,(AC) and Chandalure. As such Therefore, scarf Choice Scarf users such as Flygon and Darmanatan Are are excellent partners,(RC) due to their ability to threaten out these Pokemon. In particular (not rly sure if "In particular" works here, you haven't mentioned any of these mons or Stealth Rock in general before) Gigalith,(AC) and Bronzong,(AC) and Rhyperior have access to Stealth Rock, which once set up allows Bewear to pick up kills KOs on fatter bulkier Pokemon such as Milotic. Chandalure Chandelure in particular is one of the biggest threats to Bewear,(AC) so Fire-Type resistances Fire-resistant Pokemon like the aforementioned Gigalith and Incineroar are great partners. In addition, pivots such as Noivern, Flygon,(AC) and Incineroar are great partners for Bewear, as Bewear can set up on their defensive checks like Gigalith, Milotic,(AC) and Rhyperior. Bewear also appreciates Wish support from Pokemon like Sylveon and Umbreon, as it can use allowing it to more easily switch into attacks from the likes of Escavalier and Doublade. Escavalier and Doublade make great partners,(AC) to Bewear as both check common threats to Bewear such as Galarian Weezing, Haxorus, and Roserade. Doublade especially appreciates Bewear punching holes in the opposing team so that it can sweep with ease.
Lucario, and Heliolisk. (missing, again)

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Gadget please use spo.ink/gpvideo and the reply method to implement only the first hidebox. Ignore the feedback hidebox for Milak.

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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Drain Punch / Close Combat
move 3: Double Edge
move 4: Darkest Lariat
item: Lum Berry / Silk Scarf
ability: Fluffy
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Bewear is a powerful Fighting-type that sets itself apart from other offensive Fighting types in the tier, (RC) Fighting-types like Machamp and Pangoro,(RC) through with its ability Fluffy, granting which grants it the ability to switch into and set up against threats such as Golisopod and Barbaracle and giving gives it opportunities to fire off strong attacks. In addition,(AC) Fluffy allows Bewear to beat Cobalion if Bewear has +2 Attack and is healthy, something most fighting type swords dance Fighting-type Swords Dance users like Lucario and Pangoro struggle with. Its decent Speed tier also gives it an advantage over Machamp and Pangoro, as it outspeeds both of the aforementioned Fighting-types them as well as Pokemon like Modest Sylveon and Defensive defensive Jellicent. (fix spacing)In addition, Double Edge,(RC) allowes allows Bewear to blow past traditional fighting type Fighting-type checks such as Galarian Weezing or and Sylveon. Swords Dance is needed to OHKO would-be checks such after stealth rock damage Such such as Galarian Weezing, Milotic,(AC) and Sylveon after Stealth Rock damage. Close Combat can be run over Drain Punch for a higher damage output, allowing Bewear to OHKO Rhyperior after a Swords Dance boost, but the lack of healing provided by drain punch, and the defence and special defense drops from close combat allow it to be Revenge Killed by Pokemon such as Cobalion and far easier recovery provided by Drain Punch and the Defense and Special Defense drops from Close Combat allow Pokemon such as Cobalion to revenge kill Bewear more easily. Lum Berry is the item of choice in order to allow Bewear to soak up a status move that would otherwise cripple it, giving it an easier time setting up against Scald users such as Milotic,(RC) as it does not have to fear a burn. Silk Scarf can be run instead, allowing Bewear to OHKO Milotic, defensive Rotom-W, and Sylveon at +2, all of which would otherwise threaten Bewear it. Darkest Lariat is used almost exclusively to hit Ghost types Ghost-types such as Jellicent and Doublade, who otherwise which are immune to Bewear’s Bewear's other moves. (RP) In addition, Darkest Lariat hits Reuniclus, (AC) but it also helps Bewear beat Reuniclus

Bewear is fairly physically bulky on the physical side, but it struggles to take hits from most special attackers like Gardevoir, Toxtricity, Noivern,(AC) and Chandalure Chandelure. As such, scarf Choice Scarf users such as Flygon and Darmanatan Are Darmanitan are excellent partners,(RC) due to their ability to threaten out these Pokemon. In particular Gigalith and,(AC) Bronzong,(AC) and Rhyperior have access to Stealth Rock, which once set up allows Bewear to pick up kills KOs on fatter bulkier Pokemon such as Milotic. Chandalure Chandelure in particular is one of the biggest threats to Bewear,(AC) so Fire-Type resistances Fire-resistant Pokemon like the aforementioned Gigalith and Incineroar are great partners. In addition, pivots Pivots such as Noivern, Flygon,(AC) and Incineroar are great partners for Bewear, as Bewear can set up on their defensive checks like Gigalith, Milotic,(AC) and Rhyperior. Bewear also appreciates Wish support from Pokemon like Sylveon and Umbreon, as it can use allowing it to more easily switch into attacks from the likes of Escavalier and Doublade. Escavalier and Doublade make great partners to Bewear, (AC) as both check common threats to Bewear such as Galarian Weezing, Haxorus, and Roserade. Doublade especially appreciates Bewear punching holes in the opposing team so that it can sweep with ease.

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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Drain Punch / Close Combat
move 3: Double Edge
move 4: Darkest Lariat
item: Lum Berry / Silk Scarf
ability: Fluffy
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Bewear is a powerful Fighting-type that sets itself apart from other offensive Fighting-types(AH) in the tier,(RC) like Machamp and Pangoro,(RC) through for (For isn't really the right word here, I think. I'd go for "with".) its ability Fluffy, granting it the ability to switch into and set up against threats such as Golisopod and Barbaracle,(AC) (The following clause is not independent, so there should not be a comma before the "and". This is, however, a run-on sentence, which should be solved back over at "granting" as opposed to here.) and giving it opportunities to fire off strong attacks. In addition,(AC) Fluffy allows Bewear to beat Cobalion if Bewear has +2 Attack and is healthy enough after a Swords Dance boost, (unnecessary change; it's fine to mention stat stages) something most fighting type swords dance Fighting-type Swords Dance users like Lucario and Pangoro struggle with. Its decent Speed tier also gives it an advantage over Machamp and Pangoro, as it outspeeds both of the aforementioned Fighting-types as well as Pokemon like Modest Sylveon and Defensive (phrases like "offensive" and "defensive" shouldn't be capitalized) Jellicent.(fix spacing) (now, the way you put this, it seems like the correct implementation is to have no spacing at all to someone who isn't thinking. That's not right.) In addition, Double Edge,(RC) allowes allows Bewear to blow past traditional fighting type Fighting-type checks such as Galarian Weezing or and Sylveon. Swords Dance is needed to OHKO would-be checks such after stealth rock damage Such such as Galarian Weezing, Milotic,(AC) and Sylveon after Stealth Rock damage. Close Combat can be run over Drain Punch for a higher damage output, allowing Bewear to OHKO Rhyperior after a Swords Dance boost, but the lack of healing recovery provided by drain punch Drain Punch,(RC) (you can pretty easily separate the removals and additions here. Just move the comma over to before the addition.) and the defence and special defense drops Defense and Special Defense drops from close combat Close Combat allow it to be Revenge Killed by Pokemon such as Cobalion and far easier to revenge kill Bewear more easily. Lum Berry is the item of choice in order to allow Bewear (unnecessary and detrimental to remove. Changes the meaning of "it" in the sentence to no longer refer to Bewear.) to soak up a status move that would otherwise cripple it, giving it an easier time setting up against Scald users such as Milotic,(RC) as it does not have to fear a burn. Silk Scarf can be run instead, allowing Bewear to OHKO Milotic, defensive Rotom-W, and Sylveon at +2, all of which would otherwise threaten Bewear it. Darkest Lariat is used almost exclusively to hit Ghost-types(AH) such as Jellicent and Doublade, who otherwise which are immune to Bewear’s other moves,(RP -> AC) (again, you can separate these punctuation changes pretty easily. Move the added comma over past the removals.) In addition, Darkest Lariat hits Reuniclus and (i'd rather go for "but it also is used to hit" here, which maintains an independent-and-clause-after-comma situation and also refers slightly back to how Lariat "almost exclusively" hits Ghosts.) Psychic-types like (Reuniclus is the only listed example. Saying "Psychic-types like" is a content change, because you are now implying there are more relevant Psychic-types than just Reuniclus that Bewear wants to Lariat. Avoid content changes.) Reuniclus (something was missing originally)

Bewear is fairly bulky on the physical side, (generally we should avoid implying there are "sides" or "spectrums" to the physical/special split.) but it struggles to take hits from most special attackers like Gardevoir, Toxtricity, Noivern,(AC) and Chandalure. (Please be careful of mon spelling. Chandy and Darm are both misspelled here.) As such Therefore, (This change on the left is unnecessary. "As such" is a valid transition phrase.) scarf Choice Scarf users such as Flygon and Darmanatan Are are excellent partners,(RC) due to their ability to threaten out these Pokemon. In particular (not rly sure if "In particular" works here, you haven't mentioned any of these mons or Stealth Rock in general before) Gigalith,(AC) and Bronzong,(AC) and Rhyperior have access to Stealth Rock, which once set up allows Bewear to pick up kills KOs on fatter bulkier Pokemon such as Milotic. Chandalure Chandelure in particular is one of the biggest threats to Bewear,(AC) so Fire-Type resistances Fire-resistant Pokemon like the aforementioned Gigalith and Incineroar are great partners. In addition, pivots such as Noivern, Flygon,(AC) and Incineroar are great partners for Bewear, as Bewear can set up on their defensive checks like Gigalith, Milotic,(AC) and Rhyperior. Bewear also appreciates Wish support from Pokemon like Sylveon and Umbreon, as it can use allowing it to more easily switch into attacks from the likes of Escavalier and Doublade. Escavalier and Doublade make great partners,(AC) to Bewear (Why are the additions before the removals here? Be consistent.) as both check common threats to Bewear such as Galarian Weezing, Haxorus, and Roserade. Doublade especially appreciates Bewear punching holes in the opposing team so that it can sweep with ease.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Gadget, 479723]]
- Quality checked by: [[estarossa, 461329], [twilight, 344575]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
Uploading this but please be more careful when proofreading before sending this into GP and after uploading checks. "Double-Edge" is the correct phrasing over what you had previously, which was "Double Edge" without the hyphen. Also be sure to capitalize correctly in your credits (both Estarossa and Twilight's usernames are capitalized and weren't until I went in and edited) and that you remove all commands from your OP, as you had a linger [/hide].
 
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