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ElBogossito

ElBogossito

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Dragapult @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Infiltrator
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Shadow Ball
- Draco Meteor
- U-turn
- Flamethrower

Dragapult is my revenge killer with this move speeds

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Heatran @ Leftovers
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Magma Storm
- Earth Power
- Taunt
- Stealth Rock



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Tapu Fini @ Leftovers
Ability: Misty Surge
EVs: 252 HP / 192 Def / 64 Spe
Bold Nature
- Calm Mind
- Taunt
- Draining Kiss
- Scald

It's for a fairy type



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Zapdos @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Static
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Thunder
- Hurricane
- Weather Ball
- Volt Switch

Zapdos is so that it does not take any damage from Landorus


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Rillaboom @ Choice Band
Ability: Grassy Surge
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Wood Hammer
- Grassy Glide
- U-turn
- Knock Off

I need advice to improve my team, and i need a pokemon for killing Landorus and i don't want to take Landorus Thanks
 
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ça doit être dur d'être aussi con
 
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mec deja t'as posté exactement la même chose tu t'es fais lock ton thread tu repost, et c'est marqué partout de lire les règle, genre faut expliquer ta team avec trois ligne par poké et tout la on comprend R. Sinon ça à l'air très moyen mais pour un rmt c'est normal
 
Nowno said:
mec deja t'as posté exactement la même chose tu t'es fais lock ton thread tu repost, et c'est marqué partout de lire les règle, genre faut expliquer ta team avec trois ligne par poké et tout la on comprend R. Sinon ça à l'air très moyen mais pour un rmt c'est normal
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Mmh ok mb alors j'ai mal compris bah je vais essayer de rectifier ça y'a pas moyen du supprimer ses posts ?
 
Si delete ou tu peux editer comme tu veux, aussi met les sprites de poké ou un truc par ce que c'est pas agréable de lire un post comme ça
 
just want to add... that you only have 5 pokemon. i don't know if the other guy mentioned it already. i don't understand french (or whatever it is)
 
shadowpeashooter said:
just want to add... that you only have 5 pokemon. i don't know if the other guy mentioned it already. i don't understand french (or whatever it is)
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I didn't saw that lol. My goal wasn't really to rate the team, but I think he wanted to keep a slot for lando. Anyway pretty much everything work, things like hippo, slowbro clefable can come on lando... This thread is gonna get locked soon sooo it's a bit useless to talk abt this
 
ElBogossito said:
Ye it's that a problem i need a last pokemon but i don't who i just need for counter Landorus
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You already have answers for it like Fini and Zapdos, so I don't see a point for another one. I do have to make the suggestion that Dragapult be made Specs, it has an extremely high speed tier that outspeeds a lot of the meta aside from a couple scarf mons and Regieleki already. However, speed means nothing if you can't hit hard, and it only gets you so far. Maybe you use a dragon spam team with Garchomp 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe, since you can definitely afford another dragon type in the team and you are lacking a setup sweeper, which isn't necessary, but I would recommend it for this team. Plus, it's a ground type and you need one for fini, and both of the terrains help it out between shrugging off potential burns for it and healing it up on grassy terrain.

Can't forget to mention that your team has to have at least 3 lines of description per mon and a description of the team, otherwise you face the consequence of being locked and then deleted.
 
Smashburn said:
You already have answers for it like Fini and Zapdos, so I don't see a point for another one. I do have to make the suggestion that Dragapult be made Specs, it has an extremely high speed tier that outspeeds a lot of the meta aside from a couple scarf mons and Regieleki already. However, speed means nothing if you can't hit hard, and it only gets you so far. Maybe you use a dragon spam team with Garchomp 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe, since you can definitely afford another dragon type in the team and you are lacking a setup sweeper, which isn't necessary, but I would recommend it for this team. Plus, it's a ground type and you need one for fini, and both of the terrains help it out between shrugging off potential burns for it and healing it up on grassy terrain.

Can't forget to mention that your team has to have at least 3 lines of description per mon and a description of the team, otherwise you face the consequence of being locked and then deleted.
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Ye i know for 3 lines but i found nothing to say because im new in strategy, and zapdos doesn't damage landorus but on the other hand zapdos doesn't kill landorus that's why I want a landorus killer but I understand what you mean I'm going to think about it
 
ElBogossito said:
Ye i know for 3 lines but i found nothing to say because im new in strategy, and zapdos doesn't damage landorus but on the other hand zapdos doesn't kill landorus that's why I want a landorus killer but I understand what you mean I'm going to think about it
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Oops, I noticed you are not running defog Zapdos, which you should be. Under no circumstances should Zapdos ever be offensive unless it is in a weather team or it is in a team with a niche for it. Use 248 HP / 220 Def/ 40 Spe Timid Nature. I don't know what you're on about Zapdos not being answer, Zapdos hits Lando pretty hard on a Hurricane / and resists U-Turn / Earthquake, even surviving the uncommon Stone Edge when defensive (without considering a crit), it even gets momentum with Volt Switch to get out on incoming threats. Again, very ridiculous to say that Zapdos is not to be considered a check under most situations.

I had a couple more things to add about the team as well:

Tapu Fini should always run Muddy Water, Surf, or Hydro Pump > Scald. Scald doesn't really work, as most times it is useless and you sac a lot of potential damage just using scald, as burning does not occur under Fini's terrain. I can see its use against Rillaboom, but you have 3 Rillaboom answers, so it is pretty obvious.

Heatran should always run 252 HP / 128 SpD / 128 Spe when using the magma trap set, it is absolute dogwater if it isn't the defensive trapper, especially in a team that needs to whittle away at checks like this.

Outside of these big issues, this looks like a good standard team, showing that you have some understanding of coverage.

Also, welcome to strategy, but I do have to say that you NEED to read THE Rules in order to post here. It isn't good to just randomly make posts without making the reqs for a post to begin with, plus I think you might find them useful. If you really just want to point blank show an incomplete team and get it rated or get help on it, go around other forums related to team construction and general building.
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Smashburn said:
Oops, I noticed you are not running defog Zapdos, which you should be. Under no circumstances should Zapdos ever be offensive unless it is in a weather team or it is in a team with a niche for it. Use 248 HP / 220 Def/ 40 Spe Timid Nature. I don't know what you're on about Zapdos not being answer, Zapdos hits Lando pretty hard on a Hurricane / and resists U-Turn / Earthquake, even surviving the uncommon Stone Edge when defensive (without considering a crit), it even gets momentum with Volt Switch to get out on incoming threats. Again, very ridiculous to say that Zapdos is not to be considered a check under most situations.

I had a couple more things to add about the team as well:

Tapu Fini should always run Muddy Water, Surf, or Hydro Pump > Scald. Scald doesn't really work, as most times it is useless and you sac a lot of potential damage just using scald, as burning does not occur under Fini's terrain. I can see its use against Rillaboom, but you have 3 Rillaboom answers, so it is pretty obvious.

Heatran should always run 252 HP / 128 SpD / 128 Spe when using the magma trap set, it is absolute dogwater if it isn't the defensive trapper, especially in a team that needs to whittle away at checks like this.

Outside of these big issues, this looks like a good standard team, showing that you have some understanding of coverage.

Also, welcome to strategy, but I do have to say that you NEED to read THE Rules in order to post here. It isn't good to just randomly make posts without making the reqs for a post to begin with, plus I think you might find them useful. If you really just want to point blank show an incomplete team and get it rated or get help on it, go around other forums related to team construction and general building.
:Smogjynx:
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Ok thank you for everything for my team and for the rules I will not miss it next time.
 
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