The battle with Silver at Mt Moon is actually my favourite encounter with him. After the player defeats the Elite Four for the first time, Silver drops out of the story for a while and isn't seen again until the player has explored most of Kanto and made it to Mt Moon. In his absence, we see that he actually seems to have taken Lance's words to heart and engaged in some serious self-reflection:
GSC said:
"…… …… …… It's been a while, <player>. …Since I lost to you, I thought about what I was lacking with my Pokémon… And we came up with an answer. <player>, now we'll show you!"
"…… …… …… I thought I raised my Pokémon to be the best they could be… …But it still wasn't enough…"
"…… …… …… …You won, fair and square. I admit it. But this isn't the end. I'm going to be the greatest Pokémon Trainer ever. Because these guys are behind me. …Listen, <player>. One of these days I'm going to prove how good I am by beating you."
Here, his mindset has changed quite startlingly. It's not that he blames his Pokemon for the loss; in fact, for the first time, he's emphasising his bond with them. What's striking is that without context you could almost read this as being from any other rival in the series; he's less combative than he was before, and his dialogue indicates that - rather than declaring again that he just needs to find stronger Pokemon - he's actually improved in skill: he's just still not as skillful as you are.
Which makes it all the more painful that HGSS wrecks this moment entirely.
HGSS said:
"Hey, <player>! You're here in Kanto, too? Some of the Trainers here are tough, which makes it easy to train my Pokémon! <player>! I know you are strong… But… I can't help but challenge you!"
"I see. You weren't coming to Kanto just to show off…"
"I see you weren't playing around, either…"
"Humph! I guess it can't be helped…"
"My training's still not good enough…? My Pokémon are so weak, it makes me frustrated… But I can feel that they are getting better after each battle… ……………… Tch! They're still too weak! I need to give them more training… I know! I should take them to Dragon's Den! See ya, <player>!"
Let's briefly summarise everything that sucks about this:
- Uninteresting nonspecific dialogue ("the trainers in Kanto are strong, which is good for training because I am also a trainer")
- In the original his justification for battling you is almost as if to prove himself to you; he suggests that he's had some sort of epiphany and wants to test its validity and show you how he's changed. In the remake it's just "you're tough, but I'm not afraid to challenge you". Again, uninteresting and unspecific
- Mid-battle, he nonsensically says he thought we came to Kanto to show off - er, what?
- He also bids the player farewell, which feels bizarrely out of character because this is something he otherwise never does (even after this battle when he's nominally friendlier). His closing remark is pretty much always some variation on "next time I see you, watch out - because I'm going to beat you".
In GSC, Silver expresses his disappointment in himself because he really thought he could beat you - but acknowledges that you won, no excuses or justifications; he reflects that he thought he raised his Pokémon well, but still needs to do better. HGSS almost does the same, but here his dialogue is framed in a way that shifts the onus onto his Pokemon instead. I do like the line added about his team improving with each battle, but it's
undermined by him calling them weak before and afterwards.
I also really dislike that the dialogue signals so blatantly that he's going to Dragon's Den after this fight. It's a purely personal peeve, granted, but in the originals finding Silver there was a neat surprise long after I'd cleared the game. While I'm aware that the tag battle in Dragon's Den is a requirement to trigger his rematches at Indigo Plateau, doing it in this way is like screaming "YOU MUST GO TO DRAGON'S DEN NOW."
So let's head over to Dragon's Den, where Silver goes on certain days to train. Interestingly, the elder in the Dragon's Den directly compares Silver to Clair when Silver is present:
Clair and Silver make an interesting comparison. We can presume that Clair treats her Pokemon with more affection than Silver initially does, but her bullheadedness and unwillingness to accept that the player beat her fairly do echo his attitude more than a little. We can also reasonably assume that Clair, having the good guidance and mentorship Silver seems to be lacking, will grow out of this mindset - and of course she does eventually back down and apologise for her behaviour to the player (though remains defiant and warns them not to lose to the Elite Four).
So the parallel between them is an interesting one, even if we don't ever see them interact in GSC. Whether he defeated her to gain access to Dragon's Den is unclear - I'm thinking not, as they seem unfamiliar with each other when they later meet. The implication seems to be that the elder permitted him entry, but refuses to give him anything beyond that; perhaps he's testing Silver, wanting him to come to some sort of personal breakthrough on his own without any external prodding before he'll agree to train him.
So the setup here is quite thought-provoking... and then HGSS opts to resolve it in the least interesting way imaginable.
Approaching Silver, he says the following:
GSC said:
"… What? <player>? …No, I won't battle you now… My Pokémon aren't ready to beat you. I can't push them too hard now. I have to be disciplined to become the greatest Pokémon trainer…"
"… Whew… Learn to stay out of my way…"
HGSS said:
"…What? Are you here to make fun of my training? Humph! I took my time coming all the way here, but the Master won't tell me anything, and he's making a big deal out of it... So I decided to train my Pokémon here instead."
This, and the prior Mt Moon dialogue, embody one of my biggest gripes with HGSS Silver: he reads like he's much younger in these games (it doesn't help that his sprite in HGSS makes him look far younger than his GSC sprites do, too). Why is he initially so combative? In contrast to his dialogue in GSC, in which he expresses a sense of duty to his Pokemon's wellbeing, acknowledging the importance of knowing his and his team's limits, he sounds ridiculously immature and petulant here. It completely wrecks the notion that he's gained any humility or self-awareness.
Edit: Forgot to add this, but it's also - again - semantically unsound. "I took my time coming all the way here" doesn't make sense: "I took my time" means that you purposefully dawdled, ergo the journey lasted longer than it should have done. But "all the way here" generally is taken to imply that the distance referred to is an inconveniently far distance to travel. So what this sentence would appear to be saying is "I purposefully made an already inconveniently long and difficult journey take even more time than it already should have done", which doesn't make much sense unless we're meant to assume that this was the intention. And it's fairly clear that we aren't.
What I think this sentence is trying to say is: "I took
the time to come all the way here" (emphasis mine). When someone says this (ex: "I took the time to help you") they're saying they willingly gave up some of their precious time to do something they didn't have to do. Which is closer to the intended effect I think we're meant to be getting: Silver is bitching that even though he purposefully gave up on whatever else he could have been doing to make this difficult journey, the Master doesn't appreciate his sacrifice and he feels like he made the effort for nothing.
Then Lance and Clair show up:
HGSS said:
Lance: "Hi, <player>! And…you. We met at the Team Rocket hideout."
Silver: "You! Where have you been all this time? Prepare to lose to me this time. I challenge you!"
Lance: "Calm down. I was in a bit of a hurry then. Sorry for that. But…I always welcome challengers! Hey! How about a Double Battle?"
Silver: "Humph! You can't beat me one-on-one, can you?"
Lance: "Come on. A Double Battle is really not bad. <Player>, you'll be on my side!"
Clair: "Well then, you over there! Will you team up with me?"
Silver: "You must be kidding! That embarrassing one in the weird costume for me? No way I can battle with her! <player>! Come to my side! We'll beat Lance together!"
So Silver rejects Clair out of hand... because her costume is embarrassing. Okay, that's underwhelming. Plus you've gotta love Lance picking the player instead of his cousin. Poor Clair, no-one's first choice to partner with.
But here's my real issue: wouldn't it have been a much stronger moment if it were Clair and Silver who teamed up? Clair wants to beat Lance, Silver wants to beat both you
and Lance. Sure, maybe it's cooler for players to get to team up with Silver - and maybe the developers felt that it would have been overwhelming for Lance to be the player's partner, since his levels are way higher than Clair's. It's a weirdly lopsided battle all around: Silver and Clair's Pokemon are in the high 50s capping at 60, but Lance's team ranges from 68-75. Right, so it's consistent with his rematch team... did it
have to be? Granted, it's a tough fight - largely because Silver's team isn't great. He's decent enough if he has Feraligatr, since it knows Ice Fang.
So hey, here's an idea - why not give players the choice? Have all three characters make their case to team up with you, and let the player set the terms of the fight. A similar thing is done with the Striaton triplets in B2W2: each offers to partner the player against the other two. As it is, it's just hugely underwhelming, not least because it's a one-time event.
Plus we've got another round of badly-written dialogue:
- A double battle is "really not bad"? Don't you mean "a double battle isn't so bad" or "a double battle could be fun"?
- Also, Lance completely avoids answering Silver's question. Rather than saying "we can fight one-on-one another time" or "Clair and I are training together at the minute, so it'd be cool for us all to get involved" he just says... a double battle is really not bad.
- (Plus it's a multi battle, not a double battle. Imagine being the Champion and not knowing that)
- Silver's insult is typically clumsy and overwritten
So Clair and Lance depart, and Silver says
HGSS said:
"<player>... It wasn't supposed to go this way… Anyway, I am not giving up beating you! I'll train my Pokémon and... my own heart, too. I'll come back as the toughest challenge for you!"
I had to check if Bulbapedia had transcribed this line incorrectly but no, it is literally "I am not giving up beating you". Uh, I think there should be an "on" in that sentence.
But what he says is kind of heartfelt, and more rather emotive than what he says to the player in GSC - which again, makes him sound much younger and more earnest compared to his more downbeat and cynical portrayal there. But then when encountered on subsequent occasions, he says:
GSC said:
"… Whew… Learn to stay out of my way…"
HGSS said:
"... Whew... Learn to stay out of the way..."
You'd think I'd be hard-pressed to take issue with this, but I do. Specificity in writing matters: by changing one word, the meaning of the whole sentence changes with it. In GSC it's
stay out of my way while in HGSS it's
stay out of the way. The former is pointed and rude; the latter is bland and unmemorable. Again, it diminishes his character. His HGSS quote might as well be giving you life advice to be unobtrusive and avoid making waves.
The HGSS quote just... also doesn't really fit with the tone of his last statement to the player. In GSC he expressly tells you he won't fight you now; he's here to train and focus on himself. His parting comment in HGSS sounds like an open invitation for you to come back any time.
And now we go to the last battle with him: his Indigo Plateau rematch.
GSC said:
"Hold it. You're going to take the Pokémon League challenge now? That's not going to happen. My super-well trained Pokémon are going to pound you. <player>! I challenge you!"
"… OK--I lost…"
"…Darn… I still can't win… I… I have to think more about my Pokémon… Humph! Try not to lose!"
Like I said earlier, his overall demeanour hasn't much changed from how he was before. He's still blunt and forthright, but he's less given to personal attacks - he doesn't call you a weakling or talk about how much better he is than you. Nor does he repeat his earlier claim that he now has the strongest Pokemon - instead he very clearly says that he's trained them well enough to finally win against you, though admittedly still not in very friendly terms. It's not much, but it's there.
His losing text, again, is subtly different to previous times - he doesn't blame his Pokemon, or even you. Instead he acknowledges that what's lacking is himself - but he covers it up and tries to save face with a defensive command to the player that they should try not to lose before exiting.
Like I said, it's subtle - but it's a noticeable change from how he was before. You get the sense that over time he and the player might even one day be friends. But we don't see that happen because that's a long time coming, and he's got a while to go before then. What counts is that he's making the effort.
HGSS said:
"Hold it. You're going to take the Pokémon League challenge now? You'll have to give up on that. My well-trained-beyond-recognition Pokémon are going to pound you. Right now, right here! I challenge you!"
"… OK. I lost…"
"…Oh, no… I still can't win after all that training… I…I have to believe more in my Pokémon… …No big deal. Sorry to have got in the way. Don't forget to rest your Pokémon before you challenge the Champion!"
So the opening quote here is more or less the same - only the post-battle text is changed. And, um...
...remember when I said a total personality overhaul wouldn't have worked?
Yeah, this is it. He apologises for getting in the way... and then reminds the player to heal up. What? I'm sorry, does that sound like anything Silver would say? This is too far. This is too drastic a change.
I guess that final quote really encapsulates everything I take issue with regarding how Silver is portrayed in the remakes. All the edge and toughness just gets sanded right off, and his moody, succinct dialogue gets stretched out to a point that's neither naturalistic or believable. And by the end of the game, he's been contorted to the point that he's pretty much a different character altogether. It's a frustrating change because he isn't written well enough in the remakes to make the character arc feel particularly engaging or earned.
Yeah. To reiterate, I really dislike what was done with Silver in HGSS. GSC does a pretty great job with most of its characters, and many suffer in the remakes - but none more so than this guy.