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Well shoot. I was able to cut the image from its aura on the red spikes, wisp, and the glare from the printer but by the time I was done it was too late because I had no time earlier in the day.
DQ - Final Submission
Side Notes: Decided to go with the idea from Reghihares and Blue Frog so it made more sense. I also changed the aura to wisps since it seemed more ghostly and submittable. I kept the aura around the red spikes and brought the anchor tail to a point with it's aura...
I like the idea, it fits with comatose, trapping and the ghost type very well. The one thing that is weird is the way the bones are kind of laid on top of the skin. Otherwise I love the concept.
Geez That looks amazing! I agree that you could definitely make it a final submission soon. It fits comatose and is really adorable. You should be proud.
WIP
Next draft. Comatose completely messed me up, just like it did to so many other users. In turn I had the idea of a Nightmare/Dream dragon. There were already two users who used the idea of having it come up from a sleeping pokemon, so I did this instead. This made it into a shadow dragon...
I like the idea with the z and the rooster. I feel advancing this could be one of your options. That being said i think the egg could still work really well with comatose. An egg is a very cacoonish type thing that people would think of the contents sleeping in so I believe it would still work...
That is a very neat idea that implements the ghost and comatose aspects very well, good job. The only comments I would have is to maybe change the color scheme a bit and implement trapping more into it.
I think some sort of normal ghost color scheme, with purples and blacks would work fine with it. Reds and greens could also work just like the ones in your link.