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  • Soo, do you like One Piece?

    Just looking for something to talk about. If not, how interested are you in manga?
    do not question the presence of boobs. hugen's very sensitive about his body u_u
    No, you fixed none of it.

    "D/P" should be "DPP", as per the Grammar Standards thread.

    "it's" has an apostrophe, meaning "it is", rather than the intended possessive "its"; this is a basic rule of English.

    "speed" and "attack" should be capitalised, as is standard in everything on Smogon.

    Lastly, Aipom was never a surprise lead; on the contrary, it was a common and standard lead, and many opposing leads used Protect so as to avoid Fake Out breaking Focus Sashes.

    Please take these into account; I really shouldn't have to tell you about these things. For the last one, that is something you should really know about if you're writing LC analyses.
    Hey man, is there any particular reason why you ignored my advice on the Aipom analysis? I mean:

    "I mean, this is the opening sentence and it has a basic grammatical error, two capitalisation errors, usage of D/P instead of DPP, and it was never a "surprise lead" really."

    You put exactly the same sentence at the start of your rewrite and I'm kinda wondering how much attention you were paying.
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