as in, some Choice Scarf users still outspeed Unburden unless Sceptile invests in speed, but sorry about that its somewhat irrelevant, I'll add it :P
Also, I've added a significant amount to the BP article. I already wrote the intro, what is BP, and I've just now added the section about Quick Passing.
After this, we can separate the BP users into OU and UU, so my plan for the format is a section for BP users (OU and UU), and a section for Receivers (OU and UU) and then explaining how to build a BP team (including an explanation of the chain), and then example teams for both OU and UU, and then How to Play the BP chain correctly, then playing against Baton Pass, and finally, the conclusion. How does that sound?