don't worry about it - your check so far is amazing, and completely worth having to wait an extra day or so. terribly sorry about the total incoherence in some parts! I made some changes elsewhere on the site and didn't transfer them over correctly aaand didn't proofread carefully enough, I guess.
also, I don't mind you making lots of prose edits :) this isnt exactly my best writing, or even mostly all my writing at all lol. so yeah, go nuts.
one more thing though: it would make your changes way more obvious if you color coded them! if you find it too troublesome then here's a tip :p after you're done, go to notepad or something and replace all the with etc.
Thanks in advance for the check on Lucario! Saw your post on Cherub Agent's wall - wow, I actually did not know that. So Moltres' means Moltres(es)'s (ie many Moltres involved) and Moltres's refers to belonging to one Moltres?
Sorry about doing that to you. It's just I've been really impatient for some reason these past few days. Hopefully by Friday that'll clear up. I'd reaccept your challenge again but Spenstar already accepted mine.