tjlatios

np :)

I saw your VM to NixHex >.> Warstory Archives can be found here. IIRC you can still post new warstories in the appropriate forum for the tier of the warstory.

Good question. I've no authority in that forum and I kind of missed out on the rearranging so I can't really help you there. Try lurking?

PS the warstory archive is gone for several reasons.

nah, it could use a little improvement, but its still great

i dont understand why, top 10 ive ever read

excellent war story dude

Your welcome. I hope your problems are gone now; if not, just VM me. Glad i was able to help! :)

Since your warstory is locked, and it seems only a few comments got posted, I thought I'd add my thoughts here. Firstly I think people take things far too seriously as far as warstories go. I thought your English was pretty good considering it isn't your first language.

The formatting wasn't terrible, despite what some of the other commentors said. Admittedly it wasn't the best battle i've ever seen, but it also wasn't the worst. I honestly think that you should post another warstory. Do not be put off by the negativity. People seem to have ridiculously high standards when it comes to warstories :)

7/10

Your warstory is locked so i'll post here:
8/10 because of the excellent use of magic coat in the beginning. Bravo!
If you're still experiencing picture problems, try the old fashioned copy/paste.
Also, if you need it, i can provide you with an awesome website that produces animated sprites. It would make you warstory look a lot nicer!

your call, i would just fix formatting first and commentary later if people say it stinks

most certainly, sir

yes. for example, you would literally write

that's what i meant by fix the formatting.

oh god what the fuck have you been doing with pictures? if you want to put a picture, you need to do something like this:

If i were you, I would copy and paste it into a word document, fix the formatting, delete the old thread and remake it by pasting the word doc

I know...what should i do?i'm getting so many complains about the formatting :(

that is really strange

that's strange. After you edit the story, do you hit "save" at the bottom of the post?