I'm seconding this.
Also I didn't even really find the battle that enjoyable, I suppose for what it was ( A short vgc match ) it was somewhat entertaining to read but honestly your commentary ruined it for me I stopped reading it for the last half.
Formatting was aesthetically pleasing...
The formatting was standard and therefore fine.
Did not enjoy the commentary at all... We know your opponents name and mentioning it almost every single time is seriously, seriously frustrating.
Also "Cocky" isn't a nature. Try being modest if you decide to do another.
I made it to the end... That's got to mean something right?
Well considering it was quite a stall-ish team.
The commentary was fine, even if it was a little short at least your got your point across most times.
The formatting was also easy on the eyes which is always a bonus.
If you want to talk about mechanics then It's certainly more like snatch then surf as; Destiny Bond does not make contact (unlike sure) and the move is finalised after the opponent makes his move much like snatch...
This however is not the place for an argument nor was it particularly...
Ja I just went over and read
Immediately following being the key there.
I always assumed it was used regardless and waited for the opponent to make their move Like snatch does.
...Guess that's what assuming gets you.
Don't people read anything.....
But Well it's up to you, Either Hippodown or Tyranitar as your lead. Skarmory will make a decent physical wall if you need (considering it won't take residual damage)
You can use Metagross if you want but you're adding to a fire weakness without having...