Okay cool :), I read it and it looks really good, It is simple to understand and gets right to the point, Was easier to understand than the online guide, and I don`t think you missed any major points. This might help though but Im not sure but a simple way I know if I hit my target frame is I check the stats of what the level 5 Pokemon will have with my target IV`s using psypokes stat calculator, And if the stats don't match then I soft reset and try again instead of rare candying it up to a high level to check the IVs, If my level 5 hatch Pokemons stats match then I head to the battle tower to confirm the IVs and using IV checker man, I only do this though after I get 3-5 frames near my target frame.
Maybe this method can help other people too, Tell me what you think :P, but nice work on the gen 3 RNG guide!