Ok sloppy wasn't the best word to describe it... Just make sure to cut the fluff and watch over the little prose mistakes and you will be fine!
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Welcome to Smogon! Take a moment to read the Introduction to Smogon for a run-down on everything Smogon, and make sure you take some time to read the global rules.
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Even though your writing is very sloppy, the content is good so here is some help. Try to refrain from exaggerating or using flash expressions in analyses, except if the Pokemon is really worth it. Remember that you are trying to present the Pokemon from an objective point of view.
Also be more careful with your prose. For example, pick an article to refer to Darmanitan and stick with it. Either go with ''it'' and ''its'' or with ''he'' and ''his'', but stick to one gender only. And generally give to the analysis a second read to fix as many mistakes as you can find (i always do stupid mistakes when writing analyses because i tend to write them hastily).
ah thanx :) i will post carefully from next time onwards..
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sorry...im new here..may i know why ?
LOL I'll sub to you of course!
I have a screen recording device :D
Mic might be a bit meh but whatever ;]
Sick yo! haha can't wait to see it.
Reminds me that I better start narrating the Tournament Battles for a start :D
How's that Kyurem goin for you? I've tried it out once and it didn't end too well :/
yo that RP Landorus sweep video? good shit :]
Could I steal your subroost kyurem team?
What did Icecream do that made you mad THIS time?
uh oh... not again ._.
I missed everything that you guys did yesterday.
Could you update me on whats going on?
haha yeah yeah. too slow. you know?
But seriously. what's the new theme?
oh. and what's the new Tourn Theme :D
dude. I couldn't help but sympathize when you said that whenever a +1 Haxorus pops up you go "FUCK". I feel you man. :'[
Got all the tournament comments deleted.
What really is annoying is that as the group leader, I see any and all comments that have been deleted. Not the whole comments, but just the deletion notice. So for me, there's a huge pile of garbage on the tournament page. I assume that the rest of you only have to see your own comments...
The new group project is up! Hope we can make something great out of this!
Reuniclus deserves to be A-Rank.
haha true true. I'm going to learn a lot from hanging around you :3
Oh btw. I got a Breloom sweep. in your honor haha
hahaha that's just me :]
I couldn't help but read your post and feel like you're some older brother haha
Just the way you talk I guess :3
oh come on man ;]
You really like Kyurem, huh? Interesting...
I'll keep that in mind for the next group project.
Gary! Mamoswine was moved up to A-Rank on the Viability thread!!!
...As well as Alakazam, Volcarona, Kyurem, and Tentacruel... -
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