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Yeah, I tried not to make any changes based on opinion in that AM check. Also, when you say 'keep me posted', do you mean I should show you every AM Check I do? Or if I get a stamp, get a RMC rate, etc.

Leave me a message if you've got one you'd like me to look at.

Awesome, thanks.

Hey Gato, I just AM checked Zangoose: http://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/zangoose-qc-3-3-gp-1-2.3509943/#post-5630208

It was a hard analysis to check because the grammar was very bad, but I think I got everything down and I'd like to see what you think.

In the future you shouldn't stack amchecks or supercede other amchecks until the OP has posted or implemented them

I did notice you do have a high number of prose-ier edits on this, and while it can sometimes make something sound..."better", it's not really GP's or your call to swap it around. Also, there was already a check on it, so the prose has been kind of...approved!

I'm seeing some good changes tho, but I can't really stamp it for the reasons I listed

Oh wow I feel real stupid here :P I didn't notice the check, and just built off the OP, didn't mean to stack lol!

I guess I'll just AM Check something else then, I'm trying to get one AM Check done a day, just so I don't slack or anything. Other than switching around some of the words, what are other problems you see?

switching around some of the words

to be totally honest, I didn't _really_ go in-depth on that check, but glancing over it I can see that the mechanic changes are good to be implemented, which means I want to see it implemented, but the analysis isn't done yet.

I usually work over GP checks with different coloring, but this one had a bit too much going on for me to be effective, and I couldn't mentally isolate any errors without going really in-depth, so I'd rather see the end product and work off of that.


But yeah always scroll to the bottom of the page first !_!

I scrolled down and saw what you said !_! So if I'm correct I guess if he implements the last two AM Checks then you'll look over the analysis :o

n_n
yeah you're doing really well
keep it up!

Thanks n.n

m_m

Hey Gato, mind looking at Tangrowth? I'm proud of this check and want to see what you think. https://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/tangrowth-gp-0-2.3495289/page-2#post-5633260

in a while sure lol

Lol sorry for asking a bunch, but you seem to be the most willing GP member to help me :p

9.9 I try

I'd check it sooner but I had to dash off to work :I

Lol :P

Yo you're still going to look at it right :x

Yes I am a busy man