Hi and welcome!
Normally when creating a thread, you need to seek permission from the moderators of this forum. Normally, sets like the one you posted for BH are posted in the main BH thread (https://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/balanced-hackmons.3656408/) so feel free to post it there and you can get some criticism. I know all the threads and stuff can get overwhelming to someone new, so don't worry.
Normally when creating a thread, you need to seek permission from the moderators of this forum. Normally, sets like the one you posted for BH are posted in the main BH thread (https://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/balanced-hackmons.3656408/) so feel free to post it there and you can get some criticism. I know all the threads and stuff can get overwhelming to someone new, so don't worry.