its good but I still feel you should add the locations I mentioned, maybe not the Attack EVs one I suggest getting a second opinion on that, but it is worth noting that slugma also appear on route 113 making it 95% chance that you'll find a pokemon that gives spatk EVs, and route 118 99% of the time your getting a Pokemon that gives speed EVs, sometimes 2 which speeds up the process. Finally, when you edit don't post it in the article stating the kind of edit you amde, make a new post saying that you edit it just to keep the article separate from the statement that you made changes make a new post so that means take off the "thanks Nexus for the secret base info" from the post with the article and put that you edited in a new post if you want stating that you made additions.