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You did a good rate I don't see why you doubt yourself so much you can be a great rater with experience in both battling and seeing other peoples team. Thanks for the rate by the way I will definitely put it into consideration.
Hmm. Those sets look all right. Can't think of anymore at the moment. And again, I'm not the best when it comes to 5th gen. Do you have any instant chats that you use? Skype / IRC?
Response to your second post: Yeah, I saw some of your analyses in Locked & Outdated. Don't worry, I've got a few as well, and I can see that you're improving!