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  • I don't get that registering lol. I enter username etc but the last thing is dragging something? Also doen downloading PL take a long time, since I also see like entering codes??
    Okay do you want to battle if I downloaded it so you can see my predictions etc. Why don't you have a sig btw??
    Oh yea forgot. Do I have to register or only to download?? My exams went okay I think :) How are yours going then?
    Yeah and it is a lot more than my other RMTs. I don't expect a fast reply since it takes awhile before you've read it :)
    The color doesn't matter, but it should be something dark. Dark green is fine, for example. Just don't use bright neon colors, they're too hard to see.
    re. gender pronouns either is fine just be consistent throughout the analysis

    both are okay i believe and imo flinch chance is more accurate. for this i'll go with whatever the OP wrote though, if it ain't broke don't fix it
    it's in past gen because vgc 2012 is the current one

    overview
    change the first apostrophe it's curly

    lower Speed stat

    outspeed

    set comments
    the sentence beginning "Protect can be used to scout" - that semicolon should be a comma

    also, further down the same paragraph, it's spelt Taunt :p

    ac
    it's spelt 'eviolite' - dw, you'll get the hang of these things soon enough

    oo
    Focus Sash can be used to ensure it survives a hit - change 'it' to 'he'

    checks and counters
    reread the sentence containing Lum Berry

    also look more closely at the formatting guide - which headers are ALLCAP'd and which aren't

    stopping before i break vm limit :p
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