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  • LMAO! Oh well, good to have an aim.

    But, you should start by taking over analyses that are abandoned for copyediting as we have no BW experience...
    :( oh well, at least I found another analysis. But I got no skeleton to follow ._.

    woo! Watching Wall.E now. So cute! xD
    Haha, I lurked these forums for a really long time. Eventually I decided to start helping out with grammar. ^.^
    golbat

    set comments
    This set's main job > leave the apostrophe there, it's correct

    additional comments
    Haze can be used to remove the opponents boosts > opponent's

    Dark-types, such Krookodile, will also benefit > remove commas, and you're missing an 'as'

    checks and counters
    Rotom-F resists Brave Bird, while hitting hard with Blizzard > and can hit hard with Blizzard

    i'd also rework the introduction a bit
    Ferroseed is the one Steel that Diglett cannot kill. That's why I wrote it that way, so I'm gonna keep most. Kinda surprised your check is that colorful 9.9
    thanks! maybe during christmas i'll get something green but for now i like how the red matches :D
    There's plenty to check, you just gotta do some diggin :P

    also, no joke analyses unfortunately xD
    hey! where are those GP checks??? I wanna be lazy and stamp yours ;)

    also, you should visit #grammar on SynIRC sometimes, most of the time, active GP members are there to give helpful advice and more! :)
    As in take over? There isn't much to take over iirc... I took over what's available at UU :P
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