4th Gen OU RMT

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This is my first RMT.I really need suggestions,from you guys on what
should I change to my team.

In depth:

@Leftovers
EVs:240HP/216Def/52SpD
Nature:Relaxed
Moves:Stealth Rock
Roar
Ice Beam
Earthquake

Swampert's my lead.He's my stealth rock user,and he's also a good phazer.
Ice Beam and Earthquake wew give for coverage.Swampert is also a switch-in for a TWave,which cripples my team.

@Leftovers
EVs:252HP/220Def/36Spe
Nature:Bold
Moves:Thunder Wave
Recover
Grass Knot
Hidden Power[Fire]

Celebi is used to paralyze opposing sweepers,with TWave,which helps the team.Recover is used to heal some damage.Grass Knot acts as my main STAB move,and HP[Fire] is used againts Scizor.A bold nature and the specific EVs were given,so Celebi can tank some physical attackers,which threaten Heatran.

@Choice Scarf
EVs:252SpA/252Spe/4SpD
Nature:Naive
Moves:Earth Power
Fire Blast
Hidden Power[Grass]
Explosion

Heatran is the revenge killer for the team.He can also switch to super effective attacks againts Celebi.Fire Blast my main stab move,Earth Power is used againts opposing Heatrans,Hidden Power[Grass] is used for bulky water pokes,and Explosion is used as a last ditch move againts bulky water pokemon and Blissey.

@ Life Orb
Naughty Nature
252 Spd/100 SAtk/152 SAtk
-Earthquake
-Draco Meteor
-Flamethrower
-Extremespeed

Dragonite acts as a mixed sweeper.He also acts as a counter to MixApe.The moves were given for coverage.

@Leftovers
EVs:156HP/72Atk/96Def/184Spe
Nature:Adamant
Moves:Dragon Dance
Waterfall
Stone Edge
Taunt

Gyarados is my physical sweeper.The given EVs are used so he could last long.Taunt is used againts,mostly againts a Skarmory.Waterfall is his main stab move,while stone edge is used against an opposing gyarados.

@Leftovers
EVs:248H/228SpD/32Spe
Nature:Calm
Moves:Hidden Power[Ice]
Heatwave
Thunderbolt
Roost

Zapdos acts as the special wall for the team.Thunderbolt's the main STAB move,while Heatwave and HP ice were given for coverage;roost is used for healing damage.The specific EVs and nature were given,so that he could take special attacks and outspeed some pokemon.


Please help me,on what should I edit with the team.I'm still new.

I really need suggestions,guys.TY

 

[smashlloyd20]

Hmmm...this is an interesting team. One thng I see here; a lot of your team is really weak to Mixape. Grass Knot/Close Combat/Fire Blast/Stone Edge can pretty much sweep your team clean. I'd recommend a MixNite over Rotom (who really isn't doing much with Burn) to counter it.

Dragonite @ Life Orb
Naughty Nature
252 Spd/100 SAtk/152 SAtk
-Earthquake
-Draco Meteor
-Flamethrower
-Extremespeed
Pretty much a standard MixNite set, just with EQ to take Infernape.
But you say, 'doesn't standard Mixape run HP Ice?' Well it does, but then it will have to forgo one of Grass Knot/Close Combat/Fire Blast/Stone Edge to do so. And without one of these, one your team members owns it. For instance without GK it's helpless against Swampert.

Hop this helps and good luck!

 

[G NuBz]

@Leftovers
EVs:252HP/220Def/36Spe
Nature:Bold
Moves:Thunder Wave
Recover
Grass Knot
Hidden Power[Fire]

I recommend putting Energy Ball over Grass Knot on Celebi. Whatever Celebi Grass Knot is going to kill, so will Energy Ball. Energy Ball will also work well on the not-so-heavy Pokemon.

@Choice Scarf
EVs:252SpA/252Spe/4SpD
Nature:Naive
Moves:Earth Power
Fire Blast
Hidden Power[Electric]
Explosion

You say that Hidden Power Electric is used for Gyarados, but would you really switch in a Heatran against Gyarados? If Gyarados is able to set up +1 DD, then Heatran has no chance. I think Hidden Power Grass would work better, seeing as it can take out Swampert and provide some better type coverage in general. If your problem is Gyarados, you already have a Zapdos, Rotom, and another Gyarados to counter it.

@Leftovers
EVs:252HP/168Def/88Spe
Nature:Bold
Moves:Will-O-Wisp
Hydro Pump
Discharge
Shadow Ball

You say that Discharge is in there to paralyze some foes, but putting in Discharge over Thunder Bolt loses some power. You already have Will-O-Wisp to cripple and I don't see why you would need Discharge as well. Or, like smashlloyd20 said, you could completely replace Rotom-W with a MixNite.

 

[AAA]

TY,for the suggestions,guys.

EDIT:I'm also thinking,if I could replace Swampert and Zapdos.

 

[Faladran]

Have you ever considered replacing Zapdos with a Scarf Rotom? It provides you with a way to reliably revenge kill opposing Gyarados and Lucario, and fits in better with the offensive nature of your team. Rotom-H has Overheat to check Lucario, but Hydro Pump on Rotom-W will help to deter Tyranitar from switching in.

If you decide to go with this change, Heatran will be free to run a different set. While ScarfTran is by no means a bad set, it is quite outdated and is therefore very predictable in the current metagame. In addition, common bulky Waters such as Suicune can easily set up on it, and competent players can predict Explosions and switch to a Ghost-type. Looking through your team, I feel that a Passho Berry Heatran would be a good replacement; it hits hard against just about any opponent, and helps you out a bit more against stall. In addition, it gives you an extra precaution against LO Starmie, one of the biggest threats to your team. Here is the set:

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Heatran @ Passho Berry
Ability: Flash Fire
Nature: Mild (+SpA, -Def)
EVs: 36 HP / 252 SpA / 220 Spe
- Explosion
- Fire Blast
- Earth Power
- Hidden Power Grass[/box]
With max SpA EVs and a Mild nature, Heatran hits hard with just about all of its attacks. Fire Blast provides you with a powerful and solid STAB attack, Earth Power can be used with some prediction to nail opposing Heatran switch-ins, and HP Grass hits Swampert and other Water-types. Finally, Explosion will remove any troublesome special walls. One advantage that this set has over any other variant of Heatran is its ability to survive Water-type attacks; Passho Berry will allow Heatran to take a hit from the likes of LO Starmie, and KO back with either HP Grass (if Starmie is weakned) or Explosion.

Good luck with your team!

 

[Trench]

u need a rapid spinner, really, 3 weak to stealth rocks stall will love you