A Warstory - Raikou Strikes Back! (Jango vs. GE)

Jango

A warstory by me. I wouldn't have posted it if not for the great Raikou comeback near the end.

Anyways it was a match with me against GE.

My (Jango's) Team:
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GE's Team:
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Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause


GE sent out Swampert (lvl 100 Swampert ?).
Jango sent out wtf? (lvl 100 Metagross).
Swampert used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
wtf? used Grass Knot.
It's super effective!
Swampert lost 100% of its health.
GE's Swampert fainted.
wtf? lost 10% of its health.
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What a great start!
No one expects Special-Gross, even more as a lead. So killing swampert made way for the end of this game.

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GE switched in Yanmega (lvl 100 Yanmega ?).
Yanmega used Hypnosis.
wtf? fell asleep!
wtf? is fast asleep!
Yanmega's Speed Boost raised its speed!
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Yawn. I am tired.

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Yanmega used Bug Buzz.
wtf? lost 57% of its health.
wtf? woke up!
wtf? used Hidden Power.
It's super effective!
Yanmega lost 92% of its health.
wtf? lost 10% of its health.
Yanmega's Speed Boost raised its speed!
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Luck is on my side for this match. :P

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Yanmega used Bug Buzz.
wtf? lost 23% of its health.
Jango's wtf? fainted.
Yanmega's Speed Boost raised its speed!
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Oh well, as expected. Nothing to say here.

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Jango switched in Hipmontop* (lvl 100 Hitmontop ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hipmontop*.
Hipmontop* lost 6% of its health.
GE switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Hipmontop* used Fake Out.
It's not very effective...
Jirachi lost 11% of its health.
Hipmontop* lost 10% of its health.
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Oh no... COULD IT BE...

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Hipmontop* used Mach Punch.
Jirachi lost 35% of its health.
Hipmontop* lost 10% of its health.
Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
It's super effective!
Hipmontop* lost 74% of its health.
Jango's Hipmontop* fainted.
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Yep, it's Aldaron's Hitmontop, I was testing it out; so far it works beautifully. But it died this match. :(

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Jango switched in Girl Scout (lvl 100 Breloom ?).
Pointed stones dug into Girl Scout.
Girl Scout lost 6% of its health.
Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
It's super effective!
Girl Scout lost 94% of its health.
Jango's Girl Scout fainted.
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Darn it, this isn't looking good for me! :o
Boring, this looks like it will be a stall war, not really. This is just going to be boring.

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Jango switched in I Go Boom! :D (lvl 100 Forretress ?).
Pointed stones dug into I Go Boom! :D.
I Go Boom! :D lost 12% of its health.
Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
It's not very effective...
I Go Boom! :D lost 17% of its health.
I Go Boom! :D used Gyro Ball.
It's not very effective...
Jirachi lost 13% of its health.

Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
It's not very effective...
I Go Boom! :D lost 18% of its health.
I Go Boom! :D flinched!

Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
It's not very effective...
A critical hit!
I Go Boom! :D lost 33% of its health.
I Go Boom! :D's Liechi Berry raised its attack!
I Go Boom! :D flinched!

Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
It's not very effective...
I Go Boom! :D lost 16% of its health.
I Go Boom! :D used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered everywhere!
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!

Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
It's not very effective...
I Go Boom! :D lost 3% of its health.
Jango's I Go Boom! :D fainted.
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BACK TO SCHEDULE! :D

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Jango switched in AncientEye (lvl 100 Claydol).
Pointed stones dug into AncientEye.
AncientEye lost 6% of its health.
GE switched in Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie).
Starmie was hurt by Spikes!
Starmie lost 12% of its health.
AncientEye used Reflect.
A barrier was formed!
AncientEye's leftovers restored its health a little!
AncientEye restored 6% of its health.
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Reflect. May help later.

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Starmie used Surf.
It's super effective!
AncientEye lost 100% of its health.
Jango's AncientEye fainted.
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Boom. I am dead.

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Jango switched in The Pokemon Smogon Needs (lvl 100 Raikou).
The Pokemon Smogon Needs is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into The Pokemon Smogon Needs.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs lost 12% of its health.
GE switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Jirachi was hurt by Spikes!
Jirachi lost 12% of its health.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs used Thunderbolt.
Jirachi lost 28% of its health.
GE's Jirachi fainted.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs's leftovers restored its health a little!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs restored 6% of its health.
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The sweep begins, tremble in fear; Raikou is here!

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GE switched in Yanmega (lvl 100 Yanmega ?).
The Pokemon Smogon Needs used Substitute.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs lost 25% of its health.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs made a substitute!
Yanmega used Hypnosis.
Yanmega's attack missed!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs's leftovers restored its health a little!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs restored 6% of its health.
Yanmega's Speed Boost raised its speed!
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Uber prediction skills!
Use substitute to counter the obvious hypnosis!

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Yanmega used Bug Buzz.
The substitute took damage for The Pokemon Smogon Needs!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs's substitute faded!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs used Thunderbolt.
It's super effective!
Yanmega lost 8% of its health.
GE's Yanmega fainted.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs's leftovers restored its health a little!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs restored 6% of its health.
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2nd one down, 3 to go.

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GE switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
Infernape was hurt by Spikes!
Infernape lost 12% of its health.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs used Thunderbolt.
Infernape lost 68% of its health.
Infernape is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Infernape used Nasty Plot.
Infernape's special attack was sharply raised.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs's reflect wore off!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs's leftovers restored its health a little!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs restored 6% of its health.
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Some non-needed hax, but whatever.

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The Pokemon Smogon Needs used Thunderbolt.
Infernape lost 20% of its health.
GE's Infernape fainted.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs's leftovers restored its health a little!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs restored 6% of its health.
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This is turning out to be a great turn of events! Raikou will sweep you all!

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GE switched in Linoone (lvl 100 Linoone ?).
Linoone was hurt by Spikes!
Linoone lost 12% of its health.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs used Thunderbolt.
Linoone lost 74% of its health.
Linoone used Belly Drum.
But it failed!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs's leftovers restored its health a little!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs restored 6% of its health.
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Belly Drum fails, just like in this war story! :D

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Linoone used Extremespeed.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs lost 36% of its health.
Linoone's Shell Bell restored a little health!
Linoone restored 5% of its health.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs used Thunderbolt.
Linoone lost 19% of its health.
GE's Linoone fainted.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs's leftovers restored its health a little!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs restored 6% of its health.
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Ow, that hurt. But still not enough to kill my last poke and sweep.

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GE switched in Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie).
Starmie was hurt by Spikes!
Starmie lost 12% of its health.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs used Thunderbolt.
It's super effective!
Jango wins!
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We say our gg's and are on our way!

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Props:
  • GE for taking out all of my team except for Raikou the star of the show!
  • Raikou for sweeping 5 members of the team.
Slops:
  • Leaving in Hitmontop on Jirachi. ~What a mistake!
  • 2 flinches in a row on Forretress, 1 being a flinch and a crit.
  • Me letting halve a team fail to him.
Have a nice day. :)
 
That was cool. I miss Raikou from Advance. =\

Try bolding your log or commentary to make it easier to read.
 
Firstly i hope you got this war story approved, Since its quite a nice one and after going through the rules it appears it may be deleted if you didn't :(.
Secondly, it really needs some cleaning.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs's leftovers restored its health a little!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs restored 6% of its health.
Should have gotten rid of those lines at least.
Thirdly, I love to see someone else also using raikou, Yes he took quite a bit of a hit form last gen but hes still a great pokemon! Though i gotta say... Your opponent doesn't look like hes too bright.
 
"The Pokemon Smogon Needs" is a really annoying nickname that would help readability if it was removed. It would also be helpful if you did what darkie said. Do those and make note of how much HP each Poke relevant to the situation has (or at least note when one dies in bold).

At the part where your Raikou TBolted your opponent's Linoone, why wouldn't he have used Extremespeed twice? It's obvious that the TBolt is going to knock you below 50%, making BD a stupid move to use at that time.
 
I agree, removing the nicks would go a great way to making this readable.
 
This was an extremely poorly played match on both sides. All I saw was both players switch something in, fight until it is killed and then switch the next pokemon in.

The raikou sweep was nothing amazing either as your opponent clearly made stupid mistakes trying to nasty plot and belly drum up on it. Had he attacked on all those turns raikou would be dead. There was no advantage to stating up as raikou was your last pokemon.

The only part I actually enjoyed was when special metagross killed swampert. It went downhill from there.

GE switched in Yanmega (lvl 100 Yanmega ?).
The Pokemon Smogon Needs used Substitute.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs lost 25% of its health.
The Pokemon Smogon Needs made a substitute!
Yanmega used Hypnosis.
Yanmega's attack missed!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs's leftovers restored its health a little!
The Pokemon Smogon Needs restored 6% of its health.
Yanmega's Speed Boost raised its speed!
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Uber prediction skills!
Use substitute to counter the obvious hypnosis!
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Or...you could have just attacked and killed the 8% yanmega right there...no prediction needed. The correct prediction would be predicting that yanmega would break the sub next turn making you lose health from the sub for nothing.
 
This was an awful warstory. I don't understand how some people thought it was anywhere near good. Your opponent is an idiot. You also didn't play so well yourself. I doubt you got this warstory approved.

You keep Hitmontop in on Jirachi and then you bring in Breloom. You also wasted turns Gyro Balling Jirachi when you could have been setting up rocks/spikes or doing something more useful.
You also kept Claydol in on Starmie as well but I guess you don't really have anything to switch into Starmie.

Your opponent tried to Nasty Plot and Belly drum against Raikou when it's obviously faster than his pokemon.
 
Special orientated Metagross is awesome although I use Scarfed/Agility MixGross. The only problem is that you sacrifice quite a lot of Sp.Def with a Naive Nature.
 
Pretty terrible.
Raikou may well have just been a Jolteon, an Azelf, a Gengar, an Alakazam or anything really.
You both just mashed each other's pokemon together and marveled at the mess that came out.
 
I don't know why everyone is being so hard on the story. Nice to see a story with raikou though i miss him.
 
Raikou was the Pokemon that sparked Blissey's huge popularity in Advance, and in this warstory, it shows that with unexpected team support (MixGross), teams without Blissey and full of not-so-fast fragile Pokemon will still die.
 
Pros:
-Raikou (One of my favorite pokemon)
-Special Metagross

Cons:
-Not an exciting war story
-Breloom (personal thing)
 
props:special metagross
slops:everything else

like others stated, all you did was let pokemon get killed and switch the next poke in. prediction was nonexistant, and this was not any showing of raikou's true power. like pneuma said, raikou may as well have been any other fast special sweeper with t bolt
 
Sorry jango but it realy wasn't that good of a warstory, no drama, no Bolded text, no close match...

also, you copied my hitmontop nickname =/
 
Hey, nice attempt, but a 6-2 warstory doesn't seem very good to me, no offence, just IMO. 6.5/10 (a whole point just for Raikou)
 
Pros:
The teams being more exciting than the actual warstory
It actually was finite

Cons:
tl;dr factor x8563897356896357563
People bitching about nicknames, get over it >_>
Droning, boring dialogue, no attempt at entertainment whatsoever
The first instance of the word "approved" was in PakGamer's post

Sorry, but I've got to be honest. =(
 
Little Green Yoda said:
That was a poorly played match, even if my Raikou saved your butt. =p

Special Gross is indeed the sex though.
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it was shoddy, your raikou didnt save him.

i agree, kind of boring.... the sub with raikou against yanmega was pointless, you could have just finished him that turn...he had no speed boosts at that point, you would have outsped it. also a jolteon or gengar or starmie with t bolt could have done the same thing raikou did, its nothing special in this warstory.
 
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