PU Ambipom (Offensive Pivot) [QC 2/2] [GP 1/1]

[SET]
Offensive Pivot (Ambipom) @ Heavy-Duty Boots / Protective Pads / Silk Scarf
Ability: Technician
Tera Type: Normal
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Fake Out
- U-turn
- Knock Off
- Triple Axel / Double-Edge / Double Hit

[SET COMMENTS]

Ambipom is a capable offensive pivot that can create momentum as an anti-offense lead, or it can revenge kill foes and clean up late-game with its Technician-boosted Fake Out and impressive Speed tier. Opposing sweepers, other revenge killers, and fast pivots such as Shift Gear Toxtricity, Choice Scarf Staraptor, and Kilowattrel, whose Speed tiers make them otherwise hard to deal with, can be picked off or forced out by using Fake Out. U-turn allows Ambipom to escape after dealing Fake Out chip or maintain pressure on an anticipated switch. Knock Off serves as coverage for Ghost-types such as Decidueye and Golurk while also making progress by removing key items like Heavy-Duty Boots from users such as Bombirdier and Eviolite from foes such as Hisuian Qwilfish. Triple Axel provides Technician-boosted coverage for potential switch-ins, being most effective against Gligar and Altaria. Alternatively, Double-Edge provides a more accurate and STAB-boosted option that has a chance to OHKO frailer offensive Pokemon—Tatsugiri and Salazzle being two examples. Double Hit is another STAB-boosted option that trades accuracy and some power for longevity, especially when paired with Protective Pads. Because of its frequent pivoting, Ambipom often uses Heavy-Duty Boots for greater longevity throughout games, avoiding chip damage from entry hazards. Protective Pads guards Ambipom from contact effects like Flame Body burns and Rocky Helmet chip damage, which are most inhibiting to sets with Triple Axel and Double Hit. Silk Scarf and Tera Normal achieve a similar effect for Ambipom, improving key Fake Out rolls in a pinch by consistently 2HKOing Inteleon and Salazzle, whose high Speed can mandate trading Pokemon for Fake Out hits. Tera Normal or Silk Scarf Double-Edge and Double Hit also have respectable damage outputs, OHKOing Tatsugiri and Zoroark. When used together, Ambipom gains legitimate wallbreaking potential: Tera Normal Silk Scarf Double-Edge has a favorable roll to 2HKO Galarian Slowbro and Bellibolt, the two best physical walls in the tier.

Ambipom is well suited for bulky or fast offense and balance teams susceptible to fast threats and opposing setup. Sweepers such as Dragon Dance Scrafty and Calm Mind Scream Tail that have fewer chances to set up may be picked off by speed control or trade damage with bulkier Pokemon like Goodra and Meloetta. Thus, Ambipom's ability to apply pressure after they faint and prevent counter sweeps is a helpful addition. Entry hazard users like Gastrodon and Gligar also synergize with Ambipom, taking advantage of Knock Off removing Heavy-Duty Boots to wear down susceptible foes—removal options like Alolan Sandslash and Defog Scyther rely on Heavy-Duty Boots to switch in several times. Hazards also allow Ambipom to wear down teams by repeated switching and enable Silk Scarf sets to break through chipped switch-ins like Assault Vest Galarian Slowbro, which it 2HKOes with Stealth Rock up. Unfortunately, without Protective Pads, Ambipom is very susceptible to contact abilities like Static and Flame Body, and it struggles to break common physical walls like Bellibolt and defensive Galarian Slowbro that it cannot consistently 2HKO after Terastallizing without Silk Scarf. As such, it benefits from wallbreakers such as Toxtricity and Golurk that clear through these checks. Ambipom also appreciates bulky teammates with recovery such as Milotic and Florges, allowing a safe switch in after using U-turn. Finally, variants of Ambipom not using Heavy-Duty Boots are easily worn down by opposing hazards and appreciate removal from teammates like Coalossal and Altaria, which in turn appreciate Ambipon providing more opportunities for them to be brought in on favorable matchups and remove hazards or make progress with other utility moves.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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qc, comments in bold, remove strikethroughs

[SET]
Ambipom (Offensive Pivot) (Ambipom) @ Heavy-Duty Boots / Protective Pads / Silk Scarf
Ability: Technician
Tera Type: Normal
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Fake Out
- U-turn
- Knock Off
- Triple Axel / Double-Edge / Double Hit (vs double edge it trades accuracy and power for longevity, especially on pads sets)

[SET COMMENTS]

Ambipom is a capable offensive pivot that can create momentum as an anti-offense lead or clean up endgames using its impressive speed tier. With Technician-boosted Fake Outs at +3 priority (dex info), it is also a threatening revenge killer (vs mons like?). Opposing sweepers, other revenge killers, and fast pivots such as Inteleon, Arcanine, and Choice Scarf Staraptor (the only sweeper here is arcanine who ambipom soundly loses to, mention something else. also try to order these it the same order you mentioned the categories, so sweepers, then revenge killers, then fast pivots) whose speed tiers or priority make them otherwise hard to deal with can be picked off or forced out by using Fake Out. U-turn allows Ambipom to escape after dealing Fake Out chip, or maintain pressure on an anticipated switch. Knock Off serves as coverage for Ghost types such as Decidueye and Golurk while also making progress by removing key items like Heavy-Duty Boots (from mons like?). Triple Axel provides Technician-boosted coverage for potential switch-ins such as Gligar and Altaria. Alternatively, Double-Edge provides a more accurate and STAB-boosted option that is further strengthened in Silk Scarf Variants, 2HKOing softer switch-ins such as Gastrodon and OHKOing frailer offensive Pokemon such as Tatsugiri and Salazzle. (insert sentence about double hit here) Ambipom may also use Heavy-Duty Boots or Protective Pads for greater longevity throughout games, avoiding chip damage from hazards or contact effects like Flame Body burns and Rocky Helmet chip respectively (if silk scarf is slashed last why is it mentioned first?). (also mention why tera normal is run and what calcs tera normal can get)

Ambipom is well suited for teams susceptible to fast threats and opposing setup (this is true but too general, be a bit more specific in terms of what teams it fits on). Sweepers such as Dragon Dance Scrafty or Calm Mind Scream Tail that have fewer chances to set up may be picked off by speed control or trade damage with bulkier Pokemon. Thus, Ambipom's ability to apply pressure after they faint and prevent counter sweeps is a helpful addition. Hazard users also synergize with Ambipom, taking advantage of Knocked Off Heavy-Duty Boots. Hazards also allow Ambipom to wear through teams by repeated switching, and allowing Silk Scarf sets to break through chipped switch-ins like a 2HKOing Assault Vest Slowbro-Galar with Stealth Rock up. Unfortunately, Ambipom is very susceptible to contact abilities like Static and Flame Body (without pads) and struggles to break splashable physical walls like Bellibolt and defensive Galarian Slowbro that it cannot consistently 2HKOd after Terastallizing. As such, it benefits from wallbreakers such as Toxtricity and Golurk that clear through these checks. Ambipom also appreciates bulky teammates with recovery such as the aforementioned walls on balance teams (please use other mentions), allowing a safe switch in after clicking U-turn. Finally, variants of Ambipom not using Heavy-Duty Boots are easily worn down by opposing hazards and appreciate removal from teammates like Coalossal and Altaria (what do these two mons appreciate from ambipom?).

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bleahey.641532/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user3.102/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/

please implement these changes and ping me when finished.
 
went over on discord and this is fine, qc 1/2!

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[SET]
Ambipom (Offensive Pivot) (Ambipom) @ Heavy-Duty Boots / Protective Pads / Silk Scarf
Ability: Technician
Tera Type: Normal
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Fake Out
- U-turn
- Knock Off
- Triple Axel / Double-Edge / Double Hit

[SET COMMENTS]

Ambipom is a capable offensive pivot that can create momentum as an anti-offense lead or clean up endgames using its impressive speed tier. With Technician-boosted Fake Outs, it is also a threatening revenge killer. (I would probably combine these two sentences together since this is quite a lengthy opener otherwise) Opposing sweepers, other revenge killers, and fast pivots such as Shift Gear Toxtricity, Choice Scarf Staraptor, and Kilowattrel whose speed tiers make them otherwise hard to deal with can be picked off or forced out by using Fake Out. U-turn allows Ambipom to escape after dealing Fake Out chip, or maintain pressure on an anticipated switch. Because of this frequent pivoting, Ambipom often uses Heavy-Duty Boots for greater longevity throughout games, avoiding chip damage from hazards. (This should go into the items section) Knock Off serves as coverage for Ghost-types (add a hyphen) such as Decidueye and Golurk while also making progress by removing key items like Heavy-Duty Boots from users such as Bombirdier and Rotom-H. (Maybe mentions eviolites from Gligar / HQwil too) Triple Axel provides Technician-boosted coverage for potential switch-ins, being most effective against Gligar and Altaria. Protective Pads guard Ambipom from contact effects like Flame Body burns and Rocky Helmet Chip, which are most inhibiting to sets with Triple Axel. (Once again this should go after the moves in its own item section) Alternatively, Double-Edge provides a more accurate and STAB-boosted option that is further strengthened in Silk Scarf Variants sets, OHKOing frailer offensive Pokemon such as Tatsugiri and Salazzle. Double Hit is another STAB-boosted option that trades accuracy and some power for longevity, especially when paired with Protective Pads. Tera Normal improves key Fake Out rolls in a pinch, consistently 2HKOing Inteleon and Salazzle whose high speeds can mandate trading Pokemon for Fake Out hits. Tera Normal Double-Edge and Double Hit also have respectable damage outputs and gain legitimate breaking potential with Silk Scarf. Tera Normal Silk Scarf Double Edge may seem excessive, but this combination gives Ambipom a favorable roll to 2HKO Galarian Slowbro and Bellibolt, the two best physical walls in the tier. (rewrote this since we dont need the exact percentage rolls.) attains a 99.6% chance to 2HKO Defensive Slowbro and an 85.5% chance to 2HKO Bellibolt, the tier's most prominent physical walls.

Ambipom is well suited for bulky or fast offense and balance teams susceptible to fast threats and opposing setup. Sweepers such as Dragon Dance Scrafty or Calm Mind Scream Tail that have fewer chances to set up may be picked off by speed control or trade damage with bulkier Pokemon (mention examples here please). Thus, Ambipom's ability to apply pressure after they faint and prevent counter sweeps is a helpful addition. Hazard users (give examples of some hazards here, ie Gastrodon or Gligar. I would also mention how exactly they take advantage of knock so well with a few examples) also synergize with Ambipom, taking advantage of Knocked Off Heavy-Duty Boots. Hazards also allow Ambipom to wear through teams by repeated switching, and enable Silk Scarf sets to break through chipped switch-ins like Assault Vest Slowbro-Galar which it 2HKOs with Stealth Rock up. Unfortunately, without Protective Pads Ambipom is very susceptible to contact abilities like Static and Flame Body and it struggles to break splashable physical walls like Bellibolt and defensive Galarian Slowbro that it cannot consistently 2HKO after Terastallizing without Silk Scarf. As such, it benefits from wallbreakers such as Toxtricity and Golurk that clear through these checks. Ambipom also appreciates bulky teammates with recovery such as Milotic or Florges, allowing a safe switch in after clicking U-turn. Finally, variants of Ambipom not using Heavy-Duty Boots are easily worn down by opposing hazards and appreciate removal from teammates like Coalossal and Altaria, who in turn appreciate more opportunities to come in on favorable matchups and remove hazards or create progress with other utility moves.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bleahey.641532/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/hera.414072/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/
nice work, 2/2!
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1/1 GP Team done, use this method (video in point 3) to implement
[SET]
Ambipom (Offensive Pivot) (Ambipom) @ Heavy-Duty Boots / Protective Pads / Silk Scarf
Ability: Technician
Tera Type: Normal
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Fake Out
- U-turn
- Knock Off
- Triple Axel / Double-Edge / Double Hit

[SET COMMENTS]

Ambipom is a capable offensive pivot that can create momentum as an anti-offense lead, (AC) or it can revenge kill foes and clean up endgames late-game with its Technician-boosted Fake Outs Out and impressive Speed tier. Opposing sweepers, other revenge killers, and fast pivots such as Shift Gear Toxtricity, Choice Scarf Staraptor, and Kilowattrel, (AC) whose Speed tiers make them otherwise hard to deal with, (AC) can be picked off or forced out by using Fake Out. U-turn allows Ambipom to escape after dealing Fake Out chip (RC) or maintain pressure on an anticipated switch. Knock Off serves as coverage for Ghost-types such as Decidueye and Golurk while also making progress by removing key items like Heavy-Duty Boots from users such as Bombirdier or and Eviolite from NFEs foes (running evio implies theyre nfe anyway) such as Hisuian Qwilfish. Triple Axel provides Technician-boosted coverage for potential switch-ins, being most effective against Gligar and Altaria. Alternatively, Double-Edge provides a more accurate and STAB-boosted option that rolls has a chance to OHKO frailer offensive Pokemon—Tatsugiri and Salazzle being two examples. Double Hit is another STAB-boosted option that trades accuracy and some power for longevity, especially when paired with Protective Pads. Because of its frequent pivoting, Ambipom often uses Heavy-Duty Boots for greater longevity throughout games, avoiding chip damage from entry hazards. Protective Pads guard guards Ambipom from contact effects like Flame Body burns and Rocky Helmet chip damage, which are most inhibiting to sets with Triple Axel and Double Hit. Silk Scarf and Tera Normal achieve a similar effect for Ambipom, improving key Fake Out rolls in a pinch by consistently 2HKOing Inteleon and Salazzle, (AC) whose high speeds Speed can mandate trading Pokemon for Fake Out hits. Tera Normal or Silk Scarf Double-Edge and Double Hit also have respectable damage outputs, OHKOing Tatsugiri and Zoroark. When used in tandem together, Ambipom gains legitimate wallbreaking potential: Tera Normal Silk Scarf Double-Edge has a favorable roll to 2HKO Galarian Slowbro and Bellibolt, the two best physical walls in the tier.

Ambipom is well suited for bulky or fast offense and balance teams susceptible to fast threats and opposing setup. Sweepers such as Dragon Dance Scrafty or and Calm Mind Scream Tail that have fewer chances to set up may be picked off by speed control or trade damage with bulkier Pokemon like Goodra or and Meloetta. Thus, Ambipom's ability to apply pressure after they faint and prevent counter sweeps is a helpful addition. Hazard Entry hazard users like Gastrodon or and Gligar also synergize with Ambipom, taking advantage of Knocked Knock Off removing Heavy-Duty Boots to wear down susceptible opponents— foes—removal options like Alolan Sandslash and Defog Scyther rely on Heavy-Duty Boots to switch in several times. Hazards also allow Ambipom to wear through down teams by repeated switching (RC) and enable Silk Scarf sets to break through chipped switch-ins like Assault Vest Galarian Slowbro-Galar, (AC) which it 2HKOs 2HKOes with Stealth Rock up. Unfortunately, without Protective Pads, (AC) Ambipom is very susceptible to contact abilities like Static and Flame Body, (AC) and it struggles to break splashable common physical walls like Bellibolt and defensive Galarian Slowbro that it cannot consistently 2HKO after Terastallizing without Silk Scarf. As such, it benefits from wallbreakers such as Toxtricity and Golurk that clear through these checks. Ambipom also appreciates bulky teammates with recovery such as Milotic or and Florges, allowing a safe switch in after clicking using U-turn. Finally, variants of Ambipom not using Heavy-Duty Boots are easily worn down by opposing hazards and appreciate removal from teammates like Coalossal and Altaria, who which in turn appreciate Ambipon providing more opportunities for them to come be brought in on favorable matchups and remove hazards or create nake progress with other utility moves.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bleahey.641532/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/hera.414072/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/
 
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