The word 'shortcomings' is not hyphenated.
"Skarmory is still very effective at wasting Piloswine's PP, though." There is an extra 'is'.
Got both of these, thanks.
You are equipped with a resistance to something, not a resistance from it. "Though it isn't very sturdy, its typing grants it resistance to Water and Bug attacks;
STAB is a 1.5x multiplier - you cannot get a deadly amount of it, since you can either get it or you can't. I suggest, "and Cross Chop does a deadly amount of damage, which is accompanied by STAB, and is also the Pokémon's signature move." I think you may have meant 'deadly STAB' - in which case, "and Cross Chop has a deadly STAB and is the Pokémon's signature move" would work to an extent.
Either change this to, "Dugtrio would also spell trouble on the incoming to avenge one of its fallen teammates if you don't have a Substitute up", or "Dugtrio would also spell trouble on the incoming to avenge a fallen teammate if you don't have a Substitute up." You used the wrong form of its, and you didn't pluralize 'teammate'.
'Favorite' and 'of choice' are synonyms and thus one of them is unnecessary. Change to "This is about all Furret can do; it has a limited (usable) movepool. Use your Choice Band to wreck havoc with Double-Edge / Return and Focus Punch, and eventually trick your physical wall of choice." I figured that 'of choice' would be better suited to what you were trying to convey.
Currently the article is informing me that I let Lunatone have enough Speed to be faster than Blastoise and Grasses, and is not suggest changing it to, "For Baton Passing, give it enough Speed to be faster than Blastoise and Grasses, which means about 200 speed, or 96 EVs."
The move Charm does not slow down Pokémon - it lowers their attack. Suggested modification: "Charm is for shutting down certain Pokémon."
Should be split into two sentences, otherwize the above makes no sense. You must replace the comma after 'hurt' with a full stop.
Change to, "Hydro Pump is there to hit the folk with higher defense, like Torkoal and especially Gligar." Alternatively, "Hydro Pump is there as it hits the folk with higher defense, like Torkoal and especially Gligar."
Missing indefinite article. "OU: Most physical attackers will need to be wary of Swalot's counter unless Swalot is weakened or they are carrying a Choice Band or a very strong STAB Earthquake."
There is no contradiction between 'Xatu is a pretty horrible Pokémon' and 'this is about all it can do', as denoted by 'although', thus making this sentence incorrect. Perhaps "Xatu is a pretty horrible Pokémon and this is about all it can do."
No connection is implied, and thus this doesn't really make sense. You need a conjunction most likely. "Get at least 197 Speed (124 EVs) and it will just about outrace Hypno, most Solrock, Walrein and Blastoise, which could be crucial in some situations."
I read this for a while, and I don't think 'gaining time' is something that should be protected against, so I think this should be "protect against status and gain time with Substitute".
There should almost definitely be no comma after the word 'result'. I think you were thinking of 'As a result,' at the start of a sentence; there would be a comma in that situation, but as it stands, there should be no comma in the above.
The word 'switches' is inconsistent with the conditional tense of the rest of the sentence - thus, it should be "Not to mention that Claydol is capable of Rapid Spinning away entry hazards that would otherwize cause Primeape to lose small chunks of its help every time it switched in."
Should be, "The same team options from the Choice Band set apply for the Choice Scarf set as well."
'Scizor also works equally well with Pursuit' is not a dependent clause. Should be corrected to "If Giratina-O isn't running Hidden Power Fire, and the sun is out, then Forretress with Payback makes a nice counter to it. Scizor also works equally well with Pursuit."
