Copyediting Boots Pivot Lokix QC 2/2 GP 1/1

[OceanicGamer]

[SET]
name: Boots Pivot
move 1: First Impression
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Sucker Punch
move 4: U-turn
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Tinted Lens
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

Lokix uses First Impression to effectively remove offensive Pokemon like Ogerpon-C, Greninja, Latios, and Zarude. Tinted Lens prevents some of the aforementioned threats from Terastallizing to survive First Impression and lets Lokix still do considerable damage to Bug-resistant foes such as Thundurus-T. For example, Tera Bug First Impression will still be able to KO Tera Steel Latios after a bit of chip damage. Knock Off is good for punishing common switch-ins such as Skarmory, and Sucker Punch allows Lokix to pick off faster threats even after its first turn on the field. This can be important for many fast defensive Pokemon that can sponge a First Impression, like Tornadus-T. Tera Bug is crucial in order to effectively KO threats such as Excadrill and Thundurus-T. Heavy-Duty Boots is important, as it allows Lokix to come in multiple times even in the presence of Stealth Rock. An Adamant nature is used to maximize First Impression damage.

Lokix fits very well on balance and offense structures, playing the important role of revenge killing many threats. Pokemon like Latios and Greninja appreciate Lokix using U-turn to safely bring them in versus Cobalion, Skarmory, and Heatran. Lokix enjoys being paired with Slowking, as Slowking is able to use Chilly Reception to safely bring Lokix in on Pokemon that threaten Slowking, like Zarude and Greninja. In return, Slowking can help handle Pokemon that Lokix struggles with, like Heatran and Keldeo. Lokix, in general, likes to pair with other pivots. Heavy-Duty Boots Thundurus-T and Tornadus-T are able to check Skarmory and Cobalion for Lokix. Defensive pivots such as Slowking and Rotom-W can check threats such as Tornadus-T for Lokix and bring it in on Pokemon like Zarude. Entry hazard setters, such as Skarmory and Gastrodon, appreciate Lokix's ability to remove foes' Heavy-Duty Boots, and they can check Pokemon like opposing Lokix, Revavroom, and Heatran.



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[SET]
name: Boots Pivot
Lokix
move 1: First Impression
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Sucker Punch
move 4: U-turn
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Tinted Lens
nature: Adamant Nature
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Tera Type: Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

Lokix uses First Impression to effectively remove offensive Pokemon like Ogerpon-C, Greninja, Latios and Zarude. This revenge killing is further backed up by Tinted Lens to remove the possibility to terrastilize safely to avoid fainting to First Impression. (You may just want to incorporate the mention of tinted lens helping to circumvent some defensive Tera's in the first sentence. Also note that offensive threats can still use Tera to remove a bug weakness even if they dont resist First Impression) Knock Off is good for punishing common switch-ins such as Skarmory, and Sucker Punch allows Lokix to pick off faster threats even after its first turn on the field (Be sure to mention how Sucker Punch can be used to pick off some fast defensive mons that may have come in to sponge First Impression, such as Torndaus-T). Tera Bug is crucial in order to effectively KO threats such as Excadrill and Thundurus-T. Heavy-Duty Boots is important as it allows Lokix to come in multiple times even in the presence of Stealth Rock. Adamant is the nature of choice on this set, as it allows Lokix to do its job properly.

Lokix fits very well on balance and offense structures, playing the important role of being a revenge killer to many threats. Pokémon like Latios and Greninja appreciate Lokix using U-Turn to safely bring them in versus Coballion, Skarmory and Heatran. Lokix enjoys being paired with Slowking, as Slowking is able to use Chilly Reception to safely bring Lokix on Pokémon that threaten Slowking like Ogerpon-C Zarude (Ogerpon-C's Power Whip can OHKO Slowking so it is unlikely Slowking would risk that). and Greninja. In return, Slowking can help handle Pokemon that Lokix struggles with, like Heatran and Keldeo. Lokix, in general, likes to pair with other pivots. Boots Thundurus-T is able to be used as a nice partner as it is able to threaten the Skarmory that loves to come in on Lokix, as well as Coballion and Heatran (Boots Torn isnt really a Heatran check, you can either replace Heatran here or remove it). Defensive Pivots, like the aforementioned Slowking and Rotom-W appreciate Lokix being able to threaten the Zarude that greatly scare them, and in return they provide a nice defensive Pokémon for Lokix to fall back on. Hazard setters, such as Skarmory and Gastrodon, appreciate Lokix's ability to remove their opposing Heavy-Duty Boots for their the hazards they lay down. In return, Lokix appreciates the ability to go back to a defensive Pokémon, such as Skarmory handling other Lokix and Revavroom and Gastrodon handling Heatran.


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[SET]
name: Boots Pivot
Lokix
move 1: First Impression
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Sucker Punch
move 4: U-turn
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Tinted Lens
nature: Adamant Nature
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Tera Type: Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

Lokix uses First Impression to effectively remove offensive Pokemon like Ogerpon-C, Greninja, Latios and Zarude. This revenge killing is further backed up by Tinted Lens to remove the possibility to terrastilize safely to avoid fainting to First Impression. (You may just want to incorporate the mention of tinted lens helping to circumvent some defensive Tera's in the first sentence. Also note that offensive threats can still use Tera to remove a bug weakness even if they dont resist First Impression) Knock Off is good for punishing common switch-ins such as Skarmory, and Sucker Punch allows Lokix to pick off faster threats even after its first turn on the field (Be sure to mention how Sucker Punch can be used to pick off some fast defensive mons that may have come in to sponge First Impression, such as Torndaus-T). Tera Bug is crucial in order to effectively KO threats such as Excadrill and Thundurus-T. Heavy-Duty Boots is important as it allows Lokix to come in multiple times even in the presence of Stealth Rock. Adamant is the nature of choice on this set, as it allows Lokix to do its job properly.

Lokix fits very well on balance and offense structures, playing the important role of being a revenge killer to many threats. Pokémon like Latios and Greninja appreciate Lokix using U-Turn to safely bring them in versus Coballion, Skarmory and Heatran. Lokix enjoys being paired with Slowking, as Slowking is able to use Chilly Reception to safely bring Lokix on Pokémon that threaten Slowking like Ogerpon-C Zarude (Ogerpon-C's Power Whip can OHKO Slowking so it is unlikely Slowking would risk that). and Greninja. In return, Slowking can help handle Pokemon that Lokix struggles with, like Heatran and Keldeo. Lokix, in general, likes to pair with other pivots. Boots Thundurus-T is able to be used as a nice partner as it is able to threaten the Skarmory that loves to come in on Lokix, as well as Coballion and Heatran (Boots Torn isnt really a Heatran check, you can either replace Heatran here or remove it). Defensive Pivots, like the aforementioned Slowking and Rotom-W appreciate Lokix being able to threaten the Zarude that greatly scare them, and in return they provide a nice defensive Pokémon for Lokix to fall back on. Hazard setters, such as Skarmory and Gastrodon, appreciate Lokix's ability to remove their opposing Heavy-Duty Boots for their the hazards they lay down. In return, Lokix appreciates the ability to go back to a defensive Pokémon, such as Skarmory handling other Lokix and Revavroom and Gastrodon handling Heatran.


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[SET]
name: Boots Pivot
move 1: First Impression
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Sucker Punch
move 4: U-turn
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Tinted Lens
nature: Adamant Nature
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Tera Type: Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

Lokix uses First Impression to effectively remove offensive Pokemon like Ogerpon-C, Greninja, Latios and Zarude, which is further backed up by Tinted Lens to remove the possibility to terrastilize safely to avoid fainting to First Impression for some of the aforementioned threats and let it still do considerable damage to resists such as Thundurus-T. Knock Off is good for punishing common switch-ins such as Skarmory, and Sucker Punch allows Lokix to pick off faster threats even after its first turn on the field. This can be important for many fast defensive Pokémon that can sponge a First Impression, like Tornadus-T. Tera Bug is crucial in order to effectively KO threats such as Excadrill and Thundurus-T. Heavy-Duty Boots is important as it allows Lokix to come in multiple times even in the presence of Stealth Rock. Adamant is the nature of choice on this set to maximize First Impression damage, as it allows Lokix to do its job properly.

Lokix fits very well on balance and offense structures, playing the important role of being a revenge killer to many threats. Pokémon like Latios and Greninja appreciate Lokix using U-Turn to safely bring them in versus Coballion, Skarmory and Heatran. Lokix enjoys being paired with Slowking, as Slowking is able to use Chilly Reception to safely bring Lokix on Pokémon that threaten Slowking like Zarude and Greninja. In return, Slowking can help handle Pokemon that Lokix struggles with, like Heatran and Keldeo. Lokix, in general, likes to pair with other pivots. Boots Thundurus-T and Tornadus-T are able to check Skarmory and Cobalion for Lokix. is able to be used as a nice partner as it is able to threaten the Skarmory that loves to come in on Lokix, as well as Coballion. Defensive Pivots such as Slowking and Rotom-W can check threats such as Tornadus-T for Lokix, and bring it in on Pokemon likw Zarude. Defensive Pivots, like the aforementioned Slowking and Rotom-W appreciate Lokix being able to threaten the Zarude that greatly scare them, and in return they provide a nice defensive Pokémon for Lokix to fall back on. Hazard setters, such as Skarmory and Gastrodon, appreciate Lokix's ability to remove opposing Heavy-Duty Boots for the hazards they lay down and check Pokemon like opposing Lokix, Revavroom, and Heatran. In return, Lokix appreciates the ability to go back to a defensive Pokémon, such as Skarmory handling other Lokix and Revavroom and Gastrodon handling Heatran.


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Content looks good! I've just made some changes to help cut down the length of the second paragraph mostly here. QC 2/2 once implemented. Good work :)

 

[OceanicGamer]

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[SET]
name: Boots Pivot
move 1: First Impression
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Sucker Punch
move 4: U-turn
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Tinted Lens
nature: Adamant Nature
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Tera Type: Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

Lokix uses First Impression to effectively remove offensive Pokemon like Ogerpon-C, Greninja, Latios and Zarude, which is further backed up by Tinted Lens to remove the possibility to terrastilize safely to avoid fainting to First Impression for some of the aforementioned threats and let it still do considerable damage to resists such as Thundurus-T. Knock Off is good for punishing common switch-ins such as Skarmory, and Sucker Punch allows Lokix to pick off faster threats even after its first turn on the field. This can be important for many fast defensive Pokémon that can sponge a First Impression, like Tornadus-T. Tera Bug is crucial in order to effectively KO threats such as Excadrill and Thundurus-T. Heavy-Duty Boots is important as it allows Lokix to come in multiple times even in the presence of Stealth Rock. Adamant is the nature of choice on this set to maximize First Impression damage, as it allows Lokix to do its job properly.

Lokix fits very well on balance and offense structures, playing the important role of being a revenge killer to many threats. Pokémon like Latios and Greninja appreciate Lokix using U-Turn to safely bring them in versus Coballion, Skarmory and Heatran. Lokix enjoys being paired with Slowking, as Slowking is able to use Chilly Reception to safely bring Lokix on Pokémon that threaten Slowking like Zarude and Greninja. In return, Slowking can help handle Pokemon that Lokix struggles with, like Heatran and Keldeo. Lokix, in general, likes to pair with other pivots. Boots Thundurus-T and Tornadus-T are able to check Skarmory and Cobalion for Lokix. is able to be used as a nice partner as it is able to threaten the Skarmory that loves to come in on Lokix, as well as Coballion. Defensive Pivots such as Slowking and Rotom-W can check threats such as Tornadus-T for Lokix, and bring it in on Pokemon likw Zarude. Defensive Pivots, like the aforementioned Slowking and Rotom-W appreciate Lokix being able to threaten the Zarude that greatly scare them, and in return they provide a nice defensive Pokémon for Lokix to fall back on. Hazard setters, such as Skarmory and Gastrodon, appreciate Lokix's ability to remove opposing Heavy-Duty Boots for the hazards they lay down and check Pokemon like opposing Lokix, Revavroom, and Heatran. In return, Lokix appreciates the ability to go back to a defensive Pokémon, such as Skarmory handling other Lokix and Revavroom and Gastrodon handling Heatran.


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Content looks good! I've just made some changes to help cut down the length of the second paragraph mostly here. QC 2/2 once implemented. Good work :)

o7 done ready for gp

 

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[SET] Please use the Clear Formatting button when implementing these checks instead of just recoloring the text. It's very hard to read on light mode.
name: Boots Pivot
move 1: First Impression
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Sucker Punch
move 4: U-turn
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Tinted Lens
nature: Adamant Nature
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Tera Type: Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

Lokix uses First Impression to effectively remove offensive Pokemon like Ogerpon-C, Greninja, Latios, (AC) and Zarude (RC). (AP) which is further backed up by Tinted Lens to remove prevents some of the possibility to terrastilize safely aforementioned threats from Terastallizing to avoid fainting to survive First Impression for some of the aforementioned threats and let it lets Lokix still do considerable damage to resists Bug-resistant foes such as Thundurus-T. Which of these Pokemon can still survive First Impression when Terastallized even with Tinted Lens factored in? Clarify. Knock Off is good for punishing common switch-ins such as Skarmory, and Sucker Punch allows Lokix to pick off faster threats even after its first turn on the field. This can be important for many fast defensive Pokémon Pokemon that can sponge a First Impression, like Tornadus-T. Tera Bug is crucial in order to effectively KO threats such as Excadrill and Thundurus-T. Heavy-Duty Boots is important, (AC) as it allows Lokix to come in multiple times even in the presence of Stealth Rock. An Adamant is the nature of choice on this set is used to maximize First Impression damage.

Lokix fits very well on balance and offense structures, playing the important role of being a revenge killer to killing many threats. Pokémon Pokemon like Latios and Greninja appreciate Lokix using U-Turn U-turn to safely bring them in versus Coballion Cobalion, Skarmory, (AC) and Heatran. Lokix enjoys being paired with Slowking, as Slowking is able to use Chilly Reception to safely bring Lokix in on Pokémon Pokemon that threaten Slowking, (AC) like Zarude and Greninja. In return, Slowking can help handle Pokemon that Lokix struggles with, like Heatran and Keldeo. Lokix, in general, likes to pair with other pivots. Heavy-Duty Boots Thundurus-T and Tornadus-T are able to check Skarmory and Cobalion for Lokix. Defensive pivots such as Slowking and Rotom-W can check threats such as Tornadus-T for Lokix (RC) and bring it in on Pokemon likw like Zarude. Hazard Entry hazard setters, such as Skarmory and Gastrodon, appreciate Lokix's ability to remove opposing Heavy-Duty Boots for the hazards they lay down and check Pokemon like opposing Lokix, Revavroom, and Heatran.


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[SET]
name: Boots Pivot
move 1: First Impression
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Sucker Punch
move 4: U-turn
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Tinted Lens
nature: Adamant Nature
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Tera Type: Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

Lokix uses First Impression to effectively remove offensive Pokemon like Ogerpon-C, Greninja, Latios, and Zarude. Tinted Lens prevents some of the aforementioned threats from Terastallizing to survive First Impression and lets Lokix still do considerable damage to Bug-resistant foes such as Thundurus-T. Knock Off is good for punishing common switch-ins such as Skarmory, and Sucker Punch allows Lokix to pick off faster threats even after its first turn on the field. This can be important for many fast defensive Pokemon that can sponge a First Impression, like Tornadus-T. Tera Bug is crucial in order to effectively KO threats such as Excadrill and Thundurus-T. Heavy-Duty Boots is important, as it allows Lokix to come in multiple times even in the presence of Stealth Rock. An Adamant nature  is used to maximize First Impression damage.

Lokix fits very well on balance and offense structures, playing the important role of revenge killing many threats. Pokemon like Latios and Greninja appreciate Lokix using U-turn to safely bring them in versus Cobalion, Skarmory, and Heatran. Lokix enjoys being paired with Slowking, as Slowking is able to use Chilly Reception to safely bring Lokix in on Pokemon that threaten Slowking, like Zarude and Greninja. In return, Slowking can help handle Pokemon that Lokix struggles with, like Heatran and Keldeo. Lokix, in general, likes to pair with other pivots. Heavy-Duty Boots Thundurus-T and Tornadus-T are able to check Skarmory and Cobalion for Lokix. Defensive pivots such as Slowking and Rotom-W can check threats such as Tornadus-T for Lokix and bring it in on Pokemon like Zarude. Entry hazard setters, such as Skarmory and Gastrodon, appreciate Lokix's ability to remove opposing Heavy-Duty Boots and check Pokemon like opposing Lokix, Revavroom, and Heatran.


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[SET] Please use the Clear Formatting button when implementing these checks instead of just recoloring the text. It's very hard to read on light mode.
name: Boots Pivot
move 1: First Impression
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Sucker Punch
move 4: U-turn
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Tinted Lens
nature: Adamant Nature
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Tera Type: Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

Lokix uses First Impression to effectively remove offensive Pokemon like Ogerpon-C, Greninja, Latios, (AC) and Zarude (RC). (AP) which is further backed up by Tinted Lens to remove prevents some of the possibility to terrastilize safely aforementioned threats from Terastallizing to avoid fainting to survive First Impression for some of the aforementioned threats and let it lets Lokix still do considerable damage to resists Bug-resistant foes such as Thundurus-T. Which of these Pokemon can still survive First Impression when Terastallized even with Tinted Lens factored in? Clarify. Knock Off is good for punishing common switch-ins such as Skarmory, and Sucker Punch allows Lokix to pick off faster threats even after its first turn on the field. This can be important for many fast defensive Pokémon Pokemon that can sponge a First Impression, like Tornadus-T. Tera Bug is crucial in order to effectively KO threats such as Excadrill and Thundurus-T. Heavy-Duty Boots is important, (AC) as it allows Lokix to come in multiple times even in the presence of Stealth Rock. An Adamant is the nature of choice on this set is used to maximize First Impression damage.

Lokix fits very well on balance and offense structures, playing the important role of being a revenge killer to killing many threats. Pokémon Pokemon like Latios and Greninja appreciate Lokix using U-Turn U-turn to safely bring them in versus Coballion Cobalion, Skarmory, (AC) and Heatran. Lokix enjoys being paired with Slowking, as Slowking is able to use Chilly Reception to safely bring Lokix in on Pokémon Pokemon that threaten Slowking, (AC) like Zarude and Greninja. In return, Slowking can help handle Pokemon that Lokix struggles with, like Heatran and Keldeo. Lokix, in general, likes to pair with other pivots. Heavy-Duty Boots Thundurus-T and Tornadus-T are able to check Skarmory and Cobalion for Lokix. Defensive pivots such as Slowking and Rotom-W can check threats such as Tornadus-T for Lokix (RC) and bring it in on Pokemon likw like Zarude. Hazard Entry hazard setters, such as Skarmory and Gastrodon, appreciate Lokix's ability to remove opposing Heavy-Duty Boots for the hazards they lay down and check Pokemon like opposing Lokix, Revavroom, and Heatran.


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[SET]
name: Boots Pivot
move 1: First Impression
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Sucker Punch
move 4: U-turn
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Tinted Lens
nature: Adamant Nature
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Bug

[SET COMMENTS]
Lokix uses First Impression to effectively remove offensive Pokemon like Ogerpon-C, Greninja, Latios, and Zarude. Tinted Lens prevents some of the aforementioned threats (Backing up EthanLac here: I suggest elaborating at least one Pokemon that can't Terastallize to avoid getting KOed.) from Terastallizing to survive First Impression and lets Lokix still do considerable damage to Bug-resistant foes such as Thundurus-T. Knock Off is good for punishing common switch-ins such as Skarmory, and Sucker Punch allows Lokix to pick off faster threats even after its first turn on the field. This can be important for many fast defensive Pokemon that can sponge a First Impression, like Tornadus-T. Tera Bug is crucial in order to effectively KO threats such as Excadrill and Thundurus-T. Heavy-Duty Boots is important, as it allows Lokix to come in multiple times even in the presence of Stealth Rock. An Adamant natureis used to maximize First Impression damage.

Lokix fits very well on balance and offense structures, playing the important role of revenge killing many threats. Pokemon like Latios and Greninja appreciate Lokix using U-turn to safely bring them in versus Cobalion, Skarmory, and Heatran. Lokix enjoys being paired with Slowking, as Slowking is able to use Chilly Reception to safely bring Lokix in on Pokemon that threaten Slowking, like Zarude and Greninja. In return, Slowking can help handle Pokemon that Lokix struggles with, like Heatran and Keldeo. Lokix, in general, likes to pair with other pivots. Heavy-Duty Boots Thundurus-T and Tornadus-T are able to check Skarmory and Cobalion for Lokix. Defensive pivots such as Slowking and Rotom-W can check threats such as Tornadus-T for Lokix and bring it in on Pokemon like Zarude. Entry hazard setters, such as Skarmory and Gastrodon, appreciate Lokix's ability to remove opposing foes' Heavy-Duty Boots, (AC) (Without the comma, it's a bit vague as to which Pokemon check the stated foes unless I referred back to the QC checks.) and they can check Pokemon like opposing Lokix, Revavroom, and Heatran.

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[SET]
name: Boots Pivot
move 1: First Impression
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Sucker Punch
move 4: U-turn
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Tinted Lens
nature: Adamant Nature
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Bug

[SET COMMENTS]
Lokix uses First Impression to effectively remove offensive Pokemon like Ogerpon-C, Greninja, Latios, and Zarude. Tinted Lens prevents some of the aforementioned threats (Backing up EthanLac here: I suggest elaborating at least one Pokemon that can't Terastallize to avoid getting KOed.) from Terastallizing to survive First Impression and lets Lokix still do considerable damage to Bug-resistant foes such as Thundurus-T. Knock Off is good for punishing common switch-ins such as Skarmory, and Sucker Punch allows Lokix to pick off faster threats even after its first turn on the field. This can be important for many fast defensive Pokemon that can sponge a First Impression, like Tornadus-T. Tera Bug is crucial in order to effectively KO threats such as Excadrill and Thundurus-T. Heavy-Duty Boots is important, as it allows Lokix to come in multiple times even in the presence of Stealth Rock. An Adamant natureis used to maximize First Impression damage.

Lokix fits very well on balance and offense structures, playing the important role of revenge killing many threats. Pokemon like Latios and Greninja appreciate Lokix using U-turn to safely bring them in versus Cobalion, Skarmory, and Heatran. Lokix enjoys being paired with Slowking, as Slowking is able to use Chilly Reception to safely bring Lokix in on Pokemon that threaten Slowking, like Zarude and Greninja. In return, Slowking can help handle Pokemon that Lokix struggles with, like Heatran and Keldeo. Lokix, in general, likes to pair with other pivots. Heavy-Duty Boots Thundurus-T and Tornadus-T are able to check Skarmory and Cobalion for Lokix. Defensive pivots such as Slowking and Rotom-W can check threats such as Tornadus-T for Lokix and bring it in on Pokemon like Zarude. Entry hazard setters, such as Skarmory and Gastrodon, appreciate Lokix's ability to remove opposing foes' Heavy-Duty Boots, (AC) (Without the comma, it's a bit vague as to which Pokemon check the stated foes unless I referred back to the QC checks.) and they can check Pokemon like opposing Lokix, Revavroom, and Heatran.

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[SET]
name: Boots Pivot
move 1: First Impression
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Sucker Punch
move 4: U-turn
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Tinted Lens
nature: Adamant Nature
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Bug

[SET COMMENTS]
Lokix uses First Impression to effectively remove offensive Pokemon like Ogerpon-C, Greninja, Latios, and Zarude. Tinted Lens prevents some of the aforementioned threats (Backing up EthanLac here: I suggest elaborating at least one Pokemon that can't Terastallize to avoid getting KOed.) from Terastallizing to survive First Impression and lets Lokix still do considerable damage to Bug-resistant foes such as Thundurus-T. Knock Off is good for punishing common switch-ins such as Skarmory, and Sucker Punch allows Lokix to pick off faster threats even after its first turn on the field. This can be important for many fast defensive Pokemon that can sponge a First Impression, like Tornadus-T. Tera Bug is crucial in order to effectively KO threats such as Excadrill and Thundurus-T. Heavy-Duty Boots is important, as it allows Lokix to come in multiple times even in the presence of Stealth Rock. An Adamant natureis used to maximize First Impression damage.

Lokix fits very well on balance and offense structures, playing the important role of revenge killing many threats. Pokemon like Latios and Greninja appreciate Lokix using U-turn to safely bring them in versus Cobalion, Skarmory, and Heatran. Lokix enjoys being paired with Slowking, as Slowking is able to use Chilly Reception to safely bring Lokix in on Pokemon that threaten Slowking, like Zarude and Greninja. In return, Slowking can help handle Pokemon that Lokix struggles with, like Heatran and Keldeo. Lokix, in general, likes to pair with other pivots. Heavy-Duty Boots Thundurus-T and Tornadus-T are able to check Skarmory and Cobalion for Lokix. Defensive pivots such as Slowking and Rotom-W can check threats such as Tornadus-T for Lokix and bring it in on Pokemon like Zarude. Entry hazard setters, such as Skarmory and Gastrodon, appreciate Lokix's ability to remove opposing foes' Heavy-Duty Boots, (AC) (Without the comma, it's a bit vague as to which Pokemon check the stated foes unless I referred back to the QC checks.) and they can check Pokemon like opposing Lokix, Revavroom, and Heatran.

[CREDITS]

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Quality checked by:
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tera bug first impression

For example, Tera Bug First Impression will still be able to kill KO Tera Steel Latios after a bit of chip damage.

Make these changes to the new sentence, and you're good.

 

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tera bug first impression

For example, Tera Bug First Impression will still be able to kill KO Tera Steel Latios after a bit of chip damage.

Make these changes to the new sentence, and you're good.

Thanks for fixing my sentence, can you fix my elevator next its broken:(