CAP 28 Prevo - Part 5 - Pokedex Submissions

[Shadowshocker]

Final Submission

Miasmite, the Gas Leak Pokémon

Sword: Miasmite is content to quietly bask in daylight, only clamping shut when stepped on. Its bite isn't too painful, but it's very hard to pry open again.

Shield: It sprays a thick, noxious fog to hide from predators. Trapinch colonies have been known to build their pits under the cover of Miasmite clouds.

 

[Quanyails]

Disqualifications:

• JJslem: Comma splice, missing dash in "soul searching".
• Bice: Shield entry is longer than 156 characters.
• G-Luke: Improper use of "Its", improper commas before "and"s.
• Shadowshocker: "Its bite isn't too painful, but it's very hard to pry open again." is ungrammatical.

Everyone else advances to poll 1!