I really think Dragon Tail on bulky Wisp Zard X deserves more than a small mention and more for last slash or at least top notch details mention. That + Spikes is a huge asset to it on balance and defensive cores. Skarmory needs to be a team option for this set as with Whirlwind + Spikes the two make a really great combo.
I also think the that Dragon Dance set should just go ahead and run max speed max attack with mentions of the 184 speed in set details for its Jolly variant. I'd slash Adamant after Jolly, since people are catching on that Lando-T is kind of a garbage switch / check to it alongside lower usage in comparison to tankchomp anyways and more so has to play a lot of mindgames to beat a Zard-X in most practical situations. Adamant Zard-X is also a monster cause makes things like Quagsire lose after being worn down and conventional switch ins are hard pressed to stomach a hit from the Adamant variant as opposed to Jolly for certain builds that don't need Jolly.
My search function isn't working right now since I searched Celebi and no result but saw in write up it's there bu Serperior needs to be listed for a partner as Char-X if it hasn't been yet. Any viable grass types or stuff that breaks down fat waters well should be considered partners for Zard-X.
Then just make language clear in final write up so I don't see "many threats such as the latis terrakion and ttar say gg to this set" which I know is a placeholder but seems off putting right now.
I also think the that Dragon Dance set should just go ahead and run max speed max attack with mentions of the 184 speed in set details for its Jolly variant. I'd slash Adamant after Jolly, since people are catching on that Lando-T is kind of a garbage switch / check to it alongside lower usage in comparison to tankchomp anyways and more so has to play a lot of mindgames to beat a Zard-X in most practical situations. Adamant Zard-X is also a monster cause makes things like Quagsire lose after being worn down and conventional switch ins are hard pressed to stomach a hit from the Adamant variant as opposed to Jolly for certain builds that don't need Jolly.
My search function isn't working right now since I searched Celebi and no result but saw in write up it's there bu Serperior needs to be listed for a partner as Char-X if it hasn't been yet. Any viable grass types or stuff that breaks down fat waters well should be considered partners for Zard-X.
Then just make language clear in final write up so I don't see "many threats such as the latis terrakion and ttar say gg to this set" which I know is a placeholder but seems off putting right now.
