AG Dondozo[QC 2/2][GP 1/1]

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[SET]
name: Defensive Wall
move 1: Liquidation
move 2: Earthquake / Body Press
move 3: Curse / Sleep Talk
move 4: Rest / Protect
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Unaware
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
tera type: Fairy / Ground

[SET COMMENTS]
Good defensive stats and Unaware make Dondozo a solid defensive wall that can withstand physical attackers such as Swords Dance Koraidon, Swords Dance Chien-Pao, and Bulk Up Great Tusk. Earthquake 2HKOes Miraidon and Gholdengo after minimal chip damage, while Body Press OHKOes Chien-Pao and 2HKOes Iron Bundle. With Curse, Dondozo can spiral out of control and gain good sweeping potential. Sleep Talk can be used as an alternative with Rest to stop Pokemon from freely switching into Dondozo during its sleep turns. Miraidon's substantial presence makes Rest unreliable, so Protect can be used instead to scout for Choice item users such as Miraidon, Koraidon, Chien-Pao, and Iron Bundle. With Leftovers, Dondozo can recover much-needed health constantly. Alternatively, Rocky Helmet punishes physical attackers such as Koraidon, Chien-Pao, and Great Tusk, so they can't attack for free. Tera Fairy allows Dondozo to resist Dark- and Fighting-type moves from Chien-Pao and Koraidon, respectively, while also gaining immunity to Dragon-type moves from the latter. Tera Ground removes Dondozo's Electric weakness and can catch Miraidon off guard. Dondozo fits well on balance and stall teams where it has support from specially defensive walls such as Clodsire and Blissey that can check Miraidon, Walking Wake, and Iron Bundle. Entry hazard removal options such as Corviknight, Great Tusk, and Iron Treads keep Dondozo healthy, stopping foes from taking advantage of a weakened Dondozo. Dugtrio is a great teammate, as it can trap and KO Miraidon, making Dondozo incredibly hard to deal with.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Frozoid, 532881]]
- Quality checked by: [[WrathoftheLeopard, 511181], [pichus, 374620]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [Autumn, 384270]]
 
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[SET]
name: Defensive Wall
move 1: Liquidation
move 2: Earthquake / Body Press
move 3: Curse
move 4: Rest
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Unaware
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
tera type: Fairy / Ground

[SET COMMENTS]

Good defensive stats and Unaware make Dondozo a solid defensive wall that can deal with physical attackers such as Koraidon, Chien-Pao, and Great Tusk well. Maybe specify that it excels in beating Swords Dance/Bulk Up variants, but is vulnerable to Choice Band ones. Earthquake 2HKOes Miraidon and Clodsire while Body Press OHKOes Chien-Pao and 2HKOes Iron Bundle. Curse makes Dondozo less passive and provides it with a sweeping potential. Wave Crash can be used instead of Liquidation for more power but is not recommended due to recoil damage. I would move this sentence to the beginning of the moves section since it would be used over Liquidation, which is listed first. Protect can also be used to scout for Choice item users such as Miraidon, Koraidon, and Iron Bundle. Sleep Talk can also be used to stop Pokemon from freely switching into Dondozo during its rest turns. Mention the unreliability of Rest due to Miraidon's electric terrain, and it helps clarify which moves Protect and Sleep Talk would replace as you can mention them after Curse/Rest. With Leftovers, Dondozo can recover much needed health constantly. Rocky Helmet punishes physical attackers such as Koraidon, Chien-Pao and Great Tusk. Tera Fairy resists Dark- and Fighting-type moves from Chien-Pao and Koraidon respectively, while also gaining immunity to Dragon-type moves from the latter. Tera Ground removes Dondozo's Electric weakness and can catch Miraidon off guard. Dondozo fits well on balance and stall? teams where it has support from specially defensive walls such as Clodsire and Blissey that can check Miraidon, Walking Wake, and Iron Bundle. Entry hazard removal options such as Corviknight, Great Tusk, and Iron Treads keep Dondozo healthy, stopping opponents from taking advantage of a weakened Dondozo. Maybe mention Dugtrio since Dondozo really, really hates Miraidon.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Frozoid, 532881]]
- Quality checked by: [[WrathoftheLeopard, 511181], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

My first QC check, 1/2
 

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[SET]
name: Defensive Wall
move 1: Liquidation
move 2: Earthquake / Body Press
move 3: Curse / Sleep Talk
move 4: Rest / Protect
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Unaware
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
tera type: Fairy / Ground

[SET COMMENTS]

Good defensive stats and Unaware make Dondozo a solid defensive wall that can deal well with physical attackers such as Swords Dance Koraidon, Swords Dance Chien-Pao, and Bulk Up Great Tusk well. Earthquake 2HKOes Miraidon and Gholdengo after minimal chip and Clodsire while Body Press OHKOes Chien-Pao and 2HKOes Iron Bundle. Curse makes Dondozo less passive and provides it with a sweeping potential. how does Curse make it less passive? I think dropping sleep talk actualy makes it more passive because everything can just switch in for free while it is asleep. Sleep Talk can be used as an alternative with Rest to stop Pokemon from freely switching into Dondozo during its rest turns. Miraidon's substantial presence makes Rest unreliable so Protect can also be used to scout for Choice item users such as Miraidon, Koraidon, Chien-Pao, and Iron Bundle. With Leftovers, Dondozo can recover much needed health constantly. Alternatively, Rocky Helmet punishes physical attackers such as Koraidon, Chien-Pao, (AC) and Great Tusk so they can't attack for free. Tera Fairy resists Dark- and Fighting-type moves from Chien-Pao and Koraidon respectively, while also gaining immunity to Dragon-type moves from the latter. Tera Ground removes Dondozo's Electric weakness and can catch Miraidon off guard. Dondozo fits well on balance and stall teams where it has support from specially defensive walls such as Clodsire and Blissey that can check Miraidon, Walking Wake, and Iron Bundle. Entry hazard removal options such as Corviknight, Great Tusk, and Iron Treads keep Dondozo healthy, stopping opponents from taking advantage of a weakened Dondozo. Dugtrio is a great teammate as it can trap and KO Miraidon, making Dondozo incredibly hard to deal with.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Frozoid, 532881]]
- Quality checked by: [[WrathoftheLeopard, 511181], [pichus, 374620]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

didn't have much to add, nice work, 2/2
 

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[SET]
name: Defensive Wall
move 1: Liquidation
move 2: Earthquake / Body Press
move 3: Curse / Sleep Talk
move 4: Rest / Protect
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Unaware
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
tera type: Fairy / Ground

[SET COMMENTS] (removed gap)
Good defensive stats and Unaware make Dondozo a solid defensive wall that can deal well with withstand physical attackers such as Swords Dance Koraidon, Swords Dance Chien-Pao, and Bulk Up Great Tusk. Earthquake 2HKOes Miraidon and Gholdengo after minimal chip, (ac) while Body Press OHKOes Chien-Pao and 2HKOes Iron Bundle. With Curse, Dondozo can spiral out of control and gains a good sweeping potential. Sleep Talk can be used as an alternative with Rest to stop Pokemon from freely switching into Dondozo during its rest sleep turns. Miraidon's substantial presence makes Rest unreliable, (ac) so Protect can also be used instead to scout for Choice item users such as Miraidon, Koraidon, Chien-Pao, and Iron Bundle. With Leftovers, Dondozo can recover much needed health constantly. Alternatively, Rocky Helmet punishes physical attackers such as Koraidon, Chien-Pao, and Great Tusk, (ac) so they can't attack for free. Tera Fairy resists Dark- and Fighting-type moves from Chien-Pao and Koraidon respectively, while also gaining immunity to Dragon-type moves from the latter. Tera Ground removes Dondozo's Electric weakness and can catch Miraidon off guard. Dondozo fits well on balance and stall teams where it has support from specially defensive walls such as Clodsire and Blissey that can check Miraidon, Walking Wake, and Iron Bundle. Entry hazard removal options such as Corviknight, Great Tusk, and Iron Treads keep Dondozo healthy, stopping opponents from taking advantage of a weakened Dondozo. Dugtrio is a great teammate, (ac) as it can trap and KO Miraidon, making Dondozo incredibly hard to deal with.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Frozoid, 532881]]
- Quality checked by: [[WrathoftheLeopard, 511181], [pichus, 374620]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 

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[SET]
name: Defensive Wall
move 1: Liquidation
move 2: Earthquake / Body Press
move 3: Curse / Sleep Talk
move 4: Rest / Protect
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Unaware
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
tera type: Fairy / Ground

[SET COMMENTS] (removed gap)
Good defensive stats and Unaware make Dondozo a solid defensive wall that can deal well with withstand physical attackers such as Swords Dance Koraidon, Swords Dance Chien-Pao, and Bulk Up Great Tusk. Earthquake 2HKOes Miraidon and Gholdengo after minimal chip damage, (ac) while Body Press OHKOes Chien-Pao and 2HKOes Iron Bundle. With Curse, Dondozo can spiral out of control and gains gain a good sweeping potential. Sleep Talk can be used as an alternative with Rest to stop Pokemon from freely switching into Dondozo during its rest sleep turns. Miraidon's substantial presence makes Rest unreliable, (ac) so Protect can also be used instead to scout for Choice item users such as Miraidon, Koraidon, Chien-Pao, and Iron Bundle. With Leftovers, Dondozo can recover much needed much-needed health constantly. Alternatively, Rocky Helmet punishes physical attackers such as Koraidon, Chien-Pao, and Great Tusk, (ac) so they can't attack for free. Tera Fairy resists allows Dondozo to resist Dark- and Fighting-type moves from Chien-Pao and Koraidon, (AC) respectively, while also gaining immunity to Dragon-type moves from the latter. Tera Ground removes Dondozo's Electric weakness and can catch Miraidon off guard. Dondozo fits well on balance and stall teams where it has support from specially defensive walls such as Clodsire and Blissey that can check Miraidon, Walking Wake, and Iron Bundle. Entry hazard removal options such as Corviknight, Great Tusk, and Iron Treads keep Dondozo healthy, stopping opponents foes from taking advantage of a weakened Dondozo. Dugtrio is a great teammate, (ac) as it can trap and KO Miraidon, making Dondozo incredibly hard to deal with.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Frozoid, 532881]]
- Quality checked by: [[WrathoftheLeopard, 511181], [pichus, 374620]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
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